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02-03-2012, 08:54 PM
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| aqotwf Join Date: Oct 2011
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02-08-2012, 01:53 PM
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| Lway Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: NC
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It's not bad man. I think you need to put more emotion in your voice though, because You sound pretty bored, and the words don't sound like you owned them enough. However, lyrically it wasn't bad man. Just keep at it, you'll get there.
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02-08-2012, 09:26 PM
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thnx much man for checking out. i value the imput as well ill check some of your stuff out
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02-12-2012, 03:03 PM
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Good flow keepin up with kinda fast beat... But yeah maybe more emotion but sounding good, so keep it up! Peace...
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