Round 1: eRek vs Syd - B-Boys.com - Hip-Hop Rap Forums

Urban Eskimo · 03-04-2011, 03:44 PM

Bash Biggs Tournament

10 Lines.

Verses are due March 11th (Friday) by Midnight .

Voting is highly important to this tournament.
Vote on as many battles as possible.

If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped.
If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.

Syd · 03-05-2011, 04:26 PM

No probs imma post mine sometime this week.

Syd · 03-05-2011, 04:27 PM

Who erek?

eRek · 03-05-2011, 05:31 PM

yo..

eRek · 03-11-2011, 03:18 PM

dude wanna be paying niggas to diss his pic/
next he'll paying niggas to give him a kiss/
this kid be claimin he an Eskimo but dresses like vegetable/
all these different pictures like he models for the calfskin show/
oh no so here i go to snatch this leprechaun over the rainbow/
rob his fake ass gold n hand em coal/
looking like santas elf or jolly green giants hoe either way i dont know/
u got ur head n lips to the side like the calf's cockpit hit ya yo/
dome looks like the stub on my big toe whoa/
u aint nutthin but a picture hoe yo fo sho/

Syd · 03-11-2011, 08:45 PM

I forfeit. I ain't got the time or motivation to post rhymes nowadays let alone dissEs. So yeh erek won this.

Burt Blaze · 03-12-2011, 09:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Syd

I forfeit. I ain't got the time or motivation to post rhymes nowadays let alone dissEs. So yeh erek won this.

lame...you cant drop 10 lines? you been active as hell in other threads.

Urban Eskimo · 03-12-2011, 11:03 AM

Yeah drop somethin Syd, I'm givin everyone till the end of the weekend to post.

KOS

Syd · 03-12-2011, 04:41 PM

dats diff ya'll commenting on threads and postin a rhyme takes two seperate amounts of energy but i'll see if i got somehting tonight

Burt Blaze · 03-12-2011, 07:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Syd

dats diff ya'll commenting on threads and postin a rhyme takes two seperate amounts of energy but i'll see if i got somehting tonight

it shouldn't...I sat down w/ mine key'd up half, saved it, came back later and key'd the rest in. gotta think, it's a chance for $100 and you're gonna throw in the towel? come on now.

Syd · 03-12-2011, 10:56 PM

ok ok i'll have something soon

Syd · 03-12-2011, 11:44 PM

i dont even know why i'm doing this its only a hundred
call me judge judy but your ass lookin repugnant
a little like something off a chinese menu
you got balls doin dis, but yo dick like a pencil
a portrait more like mona lisa wit a peach fuzz
and for a buzz i bust this fool with a bath plug
i give it to you hard bitch on that shit lyrically
cuz literaly its a habit u suckin it 'listerine'
and i can see it in your eyes you a had-been
so i done lined up the punches and bashed biggs

Syd · 03-12-2011, 11:45 PM

there i did it so lets get dis done and over wit

Urban Eskimo · 03-13-2011, 03:54 PM

This was a fairly weak battle boys, eRek was aimin at the pic but I didn't feel any of his disses do much damage. I liked a couple lines like the "dress like a vegetable" and the Leprechaun ish but other than that nothin landed hard, and lol at you keep mentioning Calfskin. Syd, it's obvious you didn't put alot of effort into this. You had some ok stuff in there but majority of your verse wasnt really directed at the picture itself so you lacked in that aspect which is a huge part of these kind of battles. I'm feelin that eRek had the better verse because his lines were aimed at the picture more, but aside from that this battle was even.

My vote goes to eRek.

KOS

NostradaVus · 03-13-2011, 05:56 PM

*eRek*

dude wanna be paying niggas to diss his pic/
next he'll paying niggas to give him a kiss/
*This wasn't actually at the pic, more at the whole idea of the tourney...ur dissing him ,but this doesn't exactly follow the criteria, so this doesn't hit that hard for me.

this kid be claimin he an Eskimo but dresses like vegetable/
all these different pictures like he models for the calfskin show/
*Im not feeling this one really, I know calfskin is the village idiot here, but this ain't doin much.

oh no so here i go to snatch this leprechaun over the rainbow/
rob his fake ass gold n hand em coal/
looking like santas elf or jolly green giants hoe either way i dont know/
*More direct at the picture, but this punch was pretty light.

u got ur head n lips to the side like the calf's cockpit hit ya yo/
dome looks like the stub on my big toe whoa/
u aint nutthin but a picture hoe yo fo sho/
*Not feeling this...at all. The rhymes were basic and the way you presented them hurt this more than aided it...not a good closer

*Syd*

i dont even know why i'm doing this its only a hundred
call me judge judy but your ass lookin repugnant
*Doesnt directly connect with the picture in any way. You dissed him, but this wasnt a hard enough opener.

a little like something off a chinese menu
you got balls doin dis, but yo dick like a pencil
*again...not actually AT the pic...the point of this tourney is to relate ur punches to something going on in the actual picture he posts

a portrait more like mona lisa wit a peach fuzz
and for a buzz i bust this fool with a bath plug
*This was a little better with the peach fuzz ish, but there's still no weight behind this

i give it to you hard bitch on that shit lyrically
cuz literaly its a habit u suckin it 'listerine'
Im not getting what ur tryna do here...is it cuz listerine and his clothes are green? This isn't hittin

and i can see it in your eyes you a had-been
so i done lined up the punches and bashed biggs
Nah...the rhymes here were hella slanted/forced and besides mentioning his eyes, theres nothing about the pic in this...not a good closer

*Overall, there wasn't anything really memorable in this battle, but I think eRek came with enough to take the W here

***Vote eRek***

Peace

Oxy · 03-13-2011, 06:16 PM

Syd i'm sorry but erek beat u .. will break down if needed but 2 lazy at the moment

Syd · 03-13-2011, 07:46 PM

damn

PoizonusJK · 03-13-2011, 07:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Urban Eskimo

This was a fairly weak battle boys, eRek was aimin at the pic but I didn't feel any of his disses do much damage. I liked a couple lines like the "dress like a vegetable" and the Leprechaun ish but other than that nothin landed hard, and lol at you keep mentioning Calfskin. Syd, it's obvious you didn't put alot of effort into this. You had some ok stuff in there but majority of your verse wasnt really directed at the picture itself so you lacked in that aspect which is a huge part of these kind of battles. I'm feelin that eRek had the better verse because his lines were aimed at the picture more, but aside from that this battle was even.

My vote goes to eRek.

KOS

true true true...i'll explain more if necessary, but like bigg's said, pretty weak battle all around, i really expected more out of y'all...

wording was hella awkward in both verses, erek just seemed to have a slightly more refined way of speaking, i guess? i don't even know if that's what i mean to say, it just sounded a little more advanced than what syd was comin with...

pz

Syd · 03-13-2011, 09:44 PM

Hmmm fck it y'all I cnt battle for shit!

Burt Blaze · 03-14-2011, 07:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Syd

Hmmm fck it y'all I cnt battle for shit!

lmao.... ok...

eRek

only mildly played on the pic, nothin great tho...

~

syd

I didn't get the connection between the pic and any of the lines...plus the concepts/punches in every line was weak.

Vote = eRek

this is disappointing because seeing E's verse this should have been an easy win for you...ah well

Rudy · 03-14-2011, 08:35 AM

V/ eRek

another obvious choice, no bodybag punches, syd didnt even try and says in his opener lol.

like i said before syd you should peep the MC Education forum, it's, look at old battles as well as the tips for building a verse correctly and coherent that applies to what your doing. you got creativity but you got put some basics and wit into it so you could get the votes.

Urban Eskimo · 03-14-2011, 02:19 PM

eRek wins 5-0

KOS

03-04-2011, 03:44 PM	#1
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Round 1: eRek vs Syd Bash Biggs Tournament 10 Lines. Verses are due March 11th (Friday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped. __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

03-05-2011, 05:31 PM	#4
eRek ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown. Posts: 1,252	yo.. __________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA

03-11-2011, 03:18 PM	#5
eRek ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown. Posts: 1,252	dude wanna be paying niggas to diss his pic/ next he'll paying niggas to give him a kiss/ this kid be claimin he an Eskimo but dresses like vegetable/ all these different pictures like he models for the calfskin show/ oh no so here i go to snatch this leprechaun over the rainbow/ rob his fake ass gold n hand em coal/ looking like santas elf or jolly green giants hoe either way i dont know/ u got ur head n lips to the side like the calf's cockpit hit ya yo/ dome looks like the stub on my big toe whoa/ u aint nutthin but a picture hoe yo fo sho/ __________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA Last edited by eRek; 03-12-2011 at 12:38 PM.

03-12-2011, 11:03 AM	#8
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Yeah drop somethin Syd, I'm givin everyone till the end of the weekend to post. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

03-13-2011, 03:54 PM	#14
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	This was a fairly weak battle boys, eRek was aimin at the pic but I didn't feel any of his disses do much damage. I liked a couple lines like the "dress like a vegetable" and the Leprechaun ish but other than that nothin landed hard, and lol at you keep mentioning Calfskin. Syd, it's obvious you didn't put alot of effort into this. You had some ok stuff in there but majority of your verse wasnt really directed at the picture itself so you lacked in that aspect which is a huge part of these kind of battles. I'm feelin that eRek had the better verse because his lines were aimed at the picture more, but aside from that this battle was even. My vote goes to eRek. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

03-05-2011, 04:26 PM	#2
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	No probs imma post mine sometime this week.

03-05-2011, 04:27 PM	#3
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	Who erek?

03-11-2011, 08:45 PM	#6
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	I forfeit. I ain't got the time or motivation to post rhymes nowadays let alone dissEs. So yeh erek won this.

03-12-2011, 04:41 PM	#9
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	dats diff ya'll commenting on threads and postin a rhyme takes two seperate amounts of energy but i'll see if i got somehting tonight

03-12-2011, 10:56 PM	#11
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	ok ok i'll have something soon

03-12-2011, 11:44 PM	#12
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	i dont even know why i'm doing this its only a hundred call me judge judy but your ass lookin repugnant a little like something off a chinese menu you got balls doin dis, but yo dick like a pencil a portrait more like mona lisa wit a peach fuzz and for a buzz i bust this fool with a bath plug i give it to you hard bitch on that shit lyrically cuz literaly its a habit u suckin it 'listerine' and i can see it in your eyes you a had-been so i done lined up the punches and bashed biggs

03-12-2011, 11:45 PM	#13
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	there i did it so lets get dis done and over wit

03-13-2011, 05:56 PM	#15
NostradaVus Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 88	eRek dude wanna be paying niggas to diss his pic/ next he'll paying niggas to give him a kiss/ This wasn't actually at the pic, more at the whole idea of the tourney...ur dissing him ,but this doesn't exactly follow the criteria, so this doesn't hit that hard for me. this kid be claimin he an Eskimo but dresses like vegetable/ all these different pictures like he models for the calfskin show/ Im not feeling this one really, I know calfskin is the village idiot here, but this ain't doin much. oh no so here i go to snatch this leprechaun over the rainbow/ rob his fake ass gold n hand em coal/ looking like santas elf or jolly green giants hoe either way i dont know/ More direct at the picture, but this punch was pretty light. u got ur head n lips to the side like the calf's cockpit hit ya yo/ dome looks like the stub on my big toe whoa/ u aint nutthin but a picture hoe yo fo sho/ Not feeling this...at all. The rhymes were basic and the way you presented them hurt this more than aided it...not a good closer Syd i dont even know why i'm doing this its only a hundred call me judge judy but your ass lookin repugnant Doesnt directly connect with the picture in any way. You dissed him, but this wasnt a hard enough opener. a little like something off a chinese menu you got balls doin dis, but yo dick like a pencil again...not actually AT the pic...the point of this tourney is to relate ur punches to something going on in the actual picture he posts a portrait more like mona lisa wit a peach fuzz and for a buzz i bust this fool with a bath plug This was a little better with the peach fuzz ish, but there's still no weight behind this i give it to you hard bitch on that shit lyrically cuz literaly its a habit u suckin it 'listerine' Im not getting what ur tryna do here...is it cuz listerine and his clothes are green? This isn't hittin* and i can see it in your eyes you a had-been so i done lined up the punches and bashed biggs Nah...the rhymes here were hella slanted/forced and besides mentioning his eyes, theres nothing about the pic in this...not a good closer Overall, there wasn't anything really memorable in this battle, but I think eRek came with enough to take the W here Vote eRek* Peace __________________ I'll come thru with kung fu, you can call me Wu-tang cuz I'm running thru you... like I was Lui Kang.

03-13-2011, 06:16 PM	#16
Oxy Pain Killers Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: East Coast Posts: 63	Syd i'm sorry but erek beat u .. will break down if needed but 2 lazy at the moment

03-13-2011, 07:46 PM	#17
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	damn

03-13-2011, 09:44 PM	#19
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	Hmmm fck it y'all I cnt battle for shit!

03-14-2011, 08:35 AM	#21
Rudy Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens Posts: 229	V/ eRek another obvious choice, no bodybag punches, syd didnt even try and says in his opener lol. like i said before syd you should peep the MC Education forum, it's, look at old battles as well as the tips for building a verse correctly and coherent that applies to what your doing. you got creativity but you got put some basics and wit into it so you could get the votes. __________________ I used to be a lonely man only mad Until I got a million dollars, shiiiiiiiit Now if i only had some fuckking hair I'd pull it, faster than a bullet out of Tupac's chest Before the ambulance came too late to do it - Em

03-14-2011, 02:19 PM	#22
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	eRek wins 5-0 KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

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