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Old 03-04-2011, 03:59 PM   #1
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Verses are due March 11th (Friday) by Midnight .

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there's a thin line between straight an gay.. THIS nerd is a homo
cuz as far as bigg's is concerned, that line is more blurred than this photo
you don't wanna box with me.. you'll get served when i throw blows
see, i'm the lord of the ring, an you the canadian version of froto
i'm violent, sick an cold.. so try an spit, an you'll be dyin quick ya know
you don't want beef, but look like you could eat an entire chicken whole
kicd ya face makes me think you been smacked around with hockey pucks
couldn't box me up if you swallowed a whole bottle of hydroxycut
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YOU-DOPE?... Makes me LOSE-HOPE... Thats DOUBT-WEIGHTED
VEX-HIS-REP
No one considers you FRESH-TO-DEATH... With a cell phone thats OUTDATED

You'll fuckin FEND-NEW-SCARS... Cos' Faggot, I BEND-THOUGH-BARS
So, Don't you DARE-STEP
.......And - Why is your table and CHAIR-SET... Older THAN-YOU-ARE?

I'll rip the 'next/necks' out... Till your body is DEAD-AND-COLDER
Burn his ass and SPEAD-THE-SMOLDERS
Cos' I'll take your top off... To prove your fat ass is all HEAD-AND-SHOULDERS

This CLOWN-IS-LIVE?... Cut'em DOWN-TO-SIZE... Yeah, RIPPED-AT-THE-HIPS
RUN-FAST... Cos' That MUSTACHE... Actually looks like krusty SHIT-ON-YOUR-LIPS

you can't HARM-MINE... Cos' It'll cost you more than a LARGE-FINE.
The FIGHTS-LIVE.
......But, I'll kill biggs faster than that NICE-DRIVE... On MARCH-NINE



IUNNO IF OTHER HOMIE NOTICED HE ONLY POSTED 8 LINES, BUT IMMA POST THE FULL TEN.
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PJK

there's a thin line between straight an gay.. THIS nerd is a homo
cuz as far as bigg's is concerned, that line is more blurred than this photo
lol...mild punch

you don't wanna box with me.. you'll get served when i throw blows
see, i'm the lord of the ring, an you the canadian version of froto
Funny...but punch itself was mediocre

i'm violent, sick an cold.. so try an spit, an you'll be dyin quick ya know
you don't want beef, but look like you could eat an entire chicken whole
HAHA VERY NICE!!! Perhaps the best one in your verse

kid ya face makes me think you been smacked around with hockey pucks
couldn't box me up if you swallowed a whole bottle of hydroxycut
Wasn't feelin' the closer too much

Overall, I think PJK usually has A LOT better stuff...You did have some funny punches in there but I'm guessin' you were limited on time cuz ur usually way better than this

SkeptyIll

YOU-DOPE?... Makes me LOSE-HOPE... Thats DOUBT-WEIGHTED
VEX-HIS-REP
No one considers you FRESH-TO-DEATH... With a cell phone thats OUTDATED
Decent

You'll fuckin FEND-NEW-SCARS... Cos' Faggot, I BEND-THOUGH-BARS
So, Don't you DARE-STEP
.......And - Why is your table and CHAIR-SET... Older THAN-YOU-ARE?
It's nice that you're actually focusin' on the picture...but this was not that great IMO

I'll rip the 'next/necks' out... Till your body is DEAD-AND-COLDER
Burn his ass and SPEAD-THE-SMOLDERS
Cos' I'll take your top off... To prove your fat ass is all HEAD-AND-SHOULDERS
LMAO VERY NICE....best line in your verse

This CLOWN-IS-LIVE?... Cut'em DOWN-TO-SIZE... Yeah, RIPPED-AT-THE-HIPS
RUN-FAST... Cos' That MUSTACHE... Actually looks like krusty SHIT-ON-YOUR-LIPS
Lol..comical

you can't HARM-MINE... Cos' It'll cost you more than a LARGE-FINE.
The FIGHTS-LIVE.
......But, I'll kill biggs faster than that NICE-DRIVE... On MARCH-NINE
Wasn't feelin' the closer much

Overall, this battle was one of the closest ones I've voted on lately...

Final Breakdown:

Opener: PJK
Harder Punches: SkeptyIll
Comical: PJK
Flow: I never thought this day would come (lol)....but SkeptyIll successfully BEAT PJK in the Flow category, haha
Closer: None of them had a good closer

PJK: 2
SkeptyIll: 2

F*CK...this is close!

Tie-breaker:

i'm violent, sick an cold.. so try an spit, an you'll be dyin quick ya know
you don't want beef, but look like you could eat an entire chicken whole

vs

I'll rip the 'next/necks' out... Till your body is DEAD-AND-COLDER
Burn his ass and SPEAD-THE-SMOLDERS
Cos' I'll take your top off... To prove your fat ass is all HEAD-AND-SHOULDERS

I'm gonna have to go with the "HEAD AND SHOULDERS" line becuz it made me laugh harder, lol

Good work, guys...I woulda made this a tie if that was an option

MY VOTE GOES TO: SKEPTY

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there's a thin line between straight an gay.. THIS nerd is a homo
cuz as far as bigg's is concerned, that line is more blurred than this photo
  • lol...punch is kinda light tho
you don't wanna box with me.. you'll get served when i throw blows
see, i'm the lord of the ring, an you the canadian version of froto
  • lol...this is decent too, not a direct play on the pic tho
i'm violent, sick an cold.. so try an spit, an you'll be dyin quick ya know
you don't want beef, but look like you could eat an entire chicken whole
  • lol at fat jokes...but this wasn't directly at the pic either
kicd ya face makes me think you been smacked around with hockey pucks
couldn't box me up if you swallowed a whole bottle of hydroxycut
  • same comment as last 2 bars

the punches were aight, jokin on how Biggs' looks but didn't really work with the pick much. IMO.

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YOU-DOPE?... Makes me LOSE-HOPE... Thats DOUBT-WEIGHTED
VEX-HIS-REP
No one considers you FRESH-TO-DEATH... With a cell phone thats OUTDATED
  • lol, I had to check the pic again and noticed it was apretty old looking flip phone. thats funny
You'll fuckin FEND-NEW-SCARS... Cos' Faggot, I BEND-THOUGH-BARS
So, Don't you DARE-STEP
.......And - Why is your table and CHAIR-SET... Older THAN-YOU-ARE?
  • light punch but nice jab on the pic
I'll rip the 'next/necks' out... Till your body is DEAD-AND-COLDER
Burn his ass and SPEAD-THE-SMOLDERS
Cos' I'll take your top off... To prove your fat ass is all HEAD-AND-SHOULDERS
  • nah...this is lame
This CLOWN-IS-LIVE?... Cut'em DOWN-TO-SIZE... Yeah, RIPPED-AT-THE-HIPS
RUN-FAST... Cos' That MUSTACHE... Actually looks like krusty SHIT-ON-YOUR-LIPS
  • lol, probably looks like that cause of the bad photo quality but this is ok
you can't HARM-MINE... Cos' It'll cost you more than a LARGE-FINE.
The FIGHTS-LIVE.
......But, I'll kill biggs faster than that NICE-DRIVE... On MARCH-NINE
  • nah...this is weak too

had some decent attempts in there and stayed more focused on the pic, but fell off with punches.

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Vote = PJK

While punches weren't as direct at the pic, the verse still flowed and stayed consistant better than skeptyk's did.
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PEEJ

there's a thin line between straight an gay.. THIS nerd is a homo
cuz as far as bigg's is concerned, that line is more blurred than this photo


ok intro, not a hard hitting punch


you don't wanna box with me.. you'll get served when i throw blows
see, i'm the lord of the ring, an you the canadian version of froto


its still ok, not a hard hit either



i'm violent, sick an cold.. so try an spit, an you'll be dyin quick ya know
you don't want beef, but look like you could eat an entire chicken whole


LMAO , thats obviously your best line, funny and the flow was ridiculous

kicd ya face makes me think you been smacked around with hockey pucks
couldn't box me up if you swallowed a whole bottle of hydroxycut


nah, i see where you was going but couldve been executed better

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YOU-DOPE?... Makes me LOSE-HOPE... Thats DOUBT-WEIGHTED
VEX-HIS-REP
No one considers you FRESH-TO-DEATH... With a cell phone thats OUTDATED


pretty good, not great slightly edged p's intro because the punch was funny


You'll fuckin FEND-NEW-SCARS... Cos' Faggot, I BEND-THOUGH-BARS
So, Don't you DARE-STEP
.......And - Why is your table and CHAIR-SET... Older THAN-YOU-ARE?


nah

I'll rip the 'next/necks' out... Till your body is DEAD-AND-COLDER
Burn his ass and SPEAD-THE-SMOLDERS
Cos' I'll take your top off... To prove your fat ass is all HEAD-AND-SHOULDERS


nah, good attempt but couldve been better

This CLOWN-IS-LIVE?... Cut'em DOWN-TO-SIZE... Yeah, RIPPED-AT-THE-HIPS
RUN-FAST... Cos' That MUSTACHE... Actually looks like krusty SHIT-ON-YOUR-LIPS


its ok, not hard hitting hard enough tho

you can't HARM-MINE... Cos' It'll cost you more than a LARGE-FINE.
The FIGHTS-LIVE.
......But, I'll kill biggs faster than that NICE-DRIVE... On MARCH-NINE


nah, didnt feel this either

theres was nothing quotable outta this battle, i was hoping to laugh alot more especially with pjk but that chicken line was the only one so...

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i'm violent, sick an cold.. so try an spit, an you'll be dyin quick ya know
you don't want beef, but look like you could eat an entire chicken whole

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not BAD verses... my vote goes to Scep, will explain later, sorry
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pjk had a nice ass verse the chicken whole was LOTB the opener n froto line was nice as fuck to, scep ur verse wasnt all that to me, like alot of ur shit was forced like the next/necks shit especially if pronounced right u had some ok attempts but tbh u was a step downj


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there's a thin line between straight an gay.. THIS nerd is a homo
cuz as far as bigg's is concerned, that line is more blurred than this photo
This was a decent opener, I've seen quite a few blurry photo hits in picture battles, and I'm not a big fan on gay jokes either...but this bar was aight.
you don't wanna box with me.. you'll get served when i throw blows
see, i'm the lord of the ring, an you the canadian version of froto
Haha, this was pretty funny, not a very hard punch in my opinion but not bad.
i'm violent, sick an cold.. so try an spit, an you'll be dyin quick ya know
you don't want beef, but look like you could eat an entire chicken whole
This is easily the best bar in your verse lol.
kicd ya face makes me think you been smacked around with hockey pucks
couldn't box me up if you swallowed a whole bottle of hydroxycut
This I wasn't feelin, it wasn't aimed at the pic very well, the 1st line was decent tho.

Why'd you only drop 8 lines???

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YOU-DOPE?... Makes me LOSE-HOPE... Thats DOUBT-WEIGHTED
VEX-HIS-REP
No one considers you FRESH-TO-DEATH... With a cell phone thats OUTDATED
This was an aight opener, I'm feelin the punch but the "doubt-weighted" multi was forced in my opinion.
You'll fuckin FEND-NEW-SCARS... Cos' Faggot, I BEND-THOUGH-BARS
So, Don't you DARE-STEP
.......And - Why is your table and CHAIR-SET... Older THAN-YOU-ARE?
This was decent too, but posing the punch as a question doesn't have as much weight as if you made it a direct diss.
I'll rip the 'next/necks' out... Till your body is DEAD-AND-COLDER
Burn his ass and SPEAD-THE-SMOLDERS
Cos' I'll take your top off... To prove your fat ass is all HEAD-AND-SHOULDERS
I felt this bar was light, I'm likin the multi's but the punch wasn't very powerful.
This CLOWN-IS-LIVE?... Cut'em DOWN-TO-SIZE... Yeah, RIPPED-AT-THE-HIPS
RUN-FAST... Cos' That MUSTACHE... Actually looks like krusty SHIT-ON-YOUR-LIPS
This is one of the most played punches I've seen in picture/live battles, so I can't give this much credit at all.
you can't HARM-MINE... Cos' It'll cost you more than a LARGE-FINE.
The FIGHTS-LIVE.
......But, I'll kill biggs faster than that NICE-DRIVE... On MARCH-NINE
This was irrelevant to the picture, the punch was aight but held no relation to the picture....and "nice drive" was another multi that seemed outta place, since you were refering to a drive-by.


Overall, this is a very close battle...if PJK would've dropped a full 10 line it would've pulled him ahead, but because he didn't this is extremely close. PJK had the best bar in the battle with that chicken line, but I feel Skeptyk Ill made better use of the picture....his best bar was his opener in my opinion. Both cats had a played bar in their verse, PJK bein the blurred photo...and Skeptyk Ill with the Mustache ish. Both of them also steered away from the pic with their closers, and without PJK droppin the full 10 I gotta give it to Skeptyk Ill for doin a better job at creating ammo from the picture. Like I said this was a very close battle, and if PJK met the full line limit I have a feeling he'd walk out with the victory but that's not the case...why'd you only drop 8 lines?? lol.

My vote goes to Skeptyk Ill.


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for a cat thats not in the tourney, let alone this battle, that seems like something a dickrider would say...no hate to PJK...he's straight, but damn.
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*PJK*

there's a thin line between straight an gay.. THIS nerd is a homo
cuz as far as bigg's is concerned, that line is more blurred than this photo
This was aight...not the hardest hitter, but its relevant to the pic so it works as an opener
you don't wanna box with me.. you'll get served when i throw blows
see, i'm the lord of the ring, an you the canadian version of froto
This good too, but its not aimed at his pic, which is the main focus of this tourney...you 'bashed biggs' sure, but it wan't with the required criteria
i'm violent, sick an cold.. so try an spit, an you'll be dyin quick ya know
you don't want beef, but look like you could eat an entire chicken whole
Lol...I posted before Skeps drop about this one but it got deleted...pretty good stuff here...ur bestbar easliy so far.
kicd ya face makes me think you been smacked around with hockey pucks
couldn't box me up if you swallowed a whole bottle of hydroxycut
Again...you bashed biggs, but this isn't directly at the pic...other than that it was a solid bar, but you lacked pic disses in this battle IMO


*SKEPTYK*


YOU-DOPE?... Makes me LOSE-HOPE... Thats DOUBT-WEIGHTED
VEX-HIS-REP
No one considers you FRESH-TO-DEATH... With a cell phone thats OUTDATED
Not the heaviest punch but it still did some damage and you kept to criteria...solid opener

You'll fuckin FEND-NEW-SCARS... Cos' Faggot, I BEND-THOUGH-BARS
So, Don't you DARE-STEP
.......And - Why is your table and CHAIR-SET... Older THAN-YOU-ARE?
This was an ok hit keeping on the pic...it was kinda funny, but it coulda been better

I'll rip the 'next/necks' out... Till your body is DEAD-AND-COLDER
Burn his ass and SPEAD-THE-SMOLDERS
Cos' I'll take your top off... To prove your fat ass is all HEAD-AND-SHOULDERS
This was prettygood...not the most direct at his pic, but it still connected

This CLOWN-IS-LIVE?... Cut'em DOWN-TO-SIZE... Yeah, RIPPED-AT-THE-HIPS
RUN-FAST... Cos' That MUSTACHE... Actually looks like krusty SHIT-ON-YOUR-LIPS
lol...funny stuff here, not the hardest, but it still landed.

you can't HARM-MINE... Cos' It'll cost you more than a LARGE-FINE.
The FIGHTS-LIVE.
......But, I'll kill biggs faster than that NICE-DRIVE... On MARCH-NINE
Im not exactly sure how this really connects to the pic...the punch was decent, but I think you coulda done a little more to close off ur verse.

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Overall, this was a good read...both of you lost direction at points in ur verse(pic disses), but you still had strong lines when doing so.(IMO, this should not have been a first round matchup since there are cats that battled eachother that BOTH PJK and Skep would have no problem beating)

Opener-Both were good, but Skep's seemed to be a little more clever and funny
Flow-PJK...Skeps was readable, but P had a smoothe flow to it.
Multis-Both are strong in this area, and I can't really pick one over the other(2 diff styles that work) tie
Punches-This one could go either way IMO too(depending on reader)Personally I think Skep was able to capitalize having the extra couplet to eke this one out.
Personals/pic diss-both kept it personal thruout the whole battle, but the main criteria was to diss the pic and I thin Skeptyk was able to do that better(especially since PJK dropped short)
Closer-I think both coulda done a bit more here to close off the vere...tie


*Again, like I said, this shouldn't have been a first round matchup, but it was so there has to be a winner..that person in my mind is Skeptyk Ill.

Overall a good read here guys.


***Vote Skeptyk Ill***

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for a cat thats not in the tourney, let alone this battle, that seems like something a dickrider would say...no hate to PJK...he's straight, but damn.
yeah because really forced wordplay wins everytime :/ rofl
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what are you talking about...when did I say anything about forced wordplay?


Nm...I just saw that you also voted and that was an issue that you had...I don't think Next/necks was that forced...a little simple ya, but forced, not really...I was pointing out a legitimate fact about that cats post, he didn't even bother voting, so how can he talk shit to someone that actually did and is putting up HIS OWN fuckin money for this?


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PJ:

there's a thin line between straight an gay.. THIS nerd is a homo
cuz as far as bigg's is concerned, that line is more blurred than this photo

okay start, although the wording wasn't hard enough i feel

you don't wanna box with me.. you'll get served when i throw blows
see, i'm the lord of the ring, an you the canadian version of froto

you mean frodo?? this concept wasn't too hard i don't think

i'm violent, sick an cold.. so try an spit, an you'll be dyin quick ya know
you don't want beef, but look like you could eat an entire chicken whole

wording was tight

kicd ya face makes me think you been smacked around with hockey pucks
couldn't box me up if you swallowed a whole bottle of hydroxycut

average closer


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YOU-DOPE?... Makes me LOSE-HOPE... Thats DOUBT-WEIGHTED
VEX-HIS-REP
No one considers you FRESH-TO-DEATH... With a cell phone thats OUTDATED

pretty good opener. punch was okay, nice schemes but a tad too stretched

You'll fuckin FEND-NEW-SCARS... Cos' Faggot, I BEND-THOUGH-BARS
So, Don't you DARE-STEP
.......And - Why is your table and CHAIR-SET... Older THAN-YOU-ARE?

haha, this was a well delivered punch I thought

I'll rip the 'next/necks' out... Till your body is DEAD-AND-COLDER
Burn his ass and SPEAD-THE-SMOLDERS
Cos' I'll take your top off... To prove your fat ass is all HEAD-AND-SHOULDERS

I liked the setup, but punch was soft... still, it is a comical observation

This CLOWN-IS-LIVE?... Cut'em DOWN-TO-SIZE... Yeah, RIPPED-AT-THE-HIPS
RUN-FAST... Cos' That MUSTACHE... Actually looks like krusty SHIT-ON-YOUR-LIPS

na, this was pretty lame

you can't HARM-MINE... Cos' It'll cost you more than a LARGE-FINE.
The FIGHTS-LIVE.
......But, I'll kill biggs faster than that NICE-DRIVE... On MARCH-NINE

idk, i thought this was a pretty good closer actually. it's still a diss irregardless of the picture shit

On second thoughts, this battle wasn't that great really.

Skep came hard with the schemes and basically countered PJ's biggest asset. Your shit was a bit stetched at parts, but that's just a personal preference really. You made some solid attempts at his pic, and had some well phrased punches.

PJ, I thought your verse was pretty bland, no quotables in there really. Of course you had some nice flows, but you didn't have any hard punches or perso's really.

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You'll fuckin FEND-NEW-SCARS... Cos' Faggot, I BEND-THOUGH-BARS
So, Don't you DARE-STEP
.......And - Why is your table and CHAIR-SET... Older THAN-YOU-ARE?


VOTE: SKEPINO, PZ
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what are you talking about...when did I say anything about forced wordplay?


Nm...I just saw that you also voted and that was an issue that you had...I don't think Next/necks was that forced...a little simple ya, but forced, not really...I was pointing out a legitimate fact about that cats post, he didn't even bother voting, so how can he talk shit to someone that actually did and is putting up HIS OWN fuckin money for this?


The thought process of some people confuses the shit outta me...
i dont got a problem with no ones vote rofl

and next n necks is forced wordplay how the fuck u got jus act like the t isnt even there on next it isnt pronounced nex so having to say it lacking the T is a stretch which makes it stretched wordplay

that was my point but i could give a fuck less tbh
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fair enough...I personally don't pronounce it nexT...when I say it, the 't' is there, but its almost silent for me...depends on the person I guess...I guess it comes down to pronunciation.

I didn't give him any real props on that play if you look at my vote tho lol. I liked it as a whole, but it was everything else in it, not the just the play.


I wasn't talking about you with the problem with vote thing...that was about the other cat callin out Biggs
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Old 03-13-2011, 07:55 PM   #20
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4-3 ME UPPIN, QUIT CLUSTER FUCKIN BATTLE THREADS HOMOS.
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i gotta roll with pjk here, not only did skeptic force the next/necks line, but the whole verse seemed out of place & as if you where jus throwin rhyming word together that were useless & didnt make much sense..

pj hurt himself by not droppin full 10, but atleast it made sense, and he had the hardest hittin punch of the battle

skeptic ur verse kept gettin worse 2 me the more i read it, punches were weak, and the rhyme schemes where there so at first its a decent read, but the more i read it the less i liked it, too simple, i mean.. what im sayin is there was nothing clever, anyone who has any understanding of multi's coulda put that together, & i didnt care for any of the punches personaly, maybe the cell phone line, not the others tho

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Old 03-14-2011, 09:39 AM   #23
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Pj had that "Canadian version of froto" line n i almost spit my brew out..

Skep had that That "MUSTACHE... Actually looks like krusty SHIT-ON-YOUR-LIPS" ol boy really was staring hard at the pic for that one.

The froto line had me rolling, so imma give it to the PJ
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Old 03-14-2011, 04:11 PM   #24
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Damn Biggs do you even vote fair anymore?
I vote based on my opinion, so I don't understand why you would say this.

Skeptyk Ill has been talkin shit to me the last few days anyways, so I definately wouldn't vote for him unless I truely felt he won.


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Old 03-14-2011, 05:45 PM   #25
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there's a thin line between straight an gay.. THIS nerd is a homo
cuz as far as bigg's is concerned, that line is more blurred than this photo
decent opener
you don't wanna box with me.. you'll get served when i throw blows
see, i'm the lord of the ring, an you the canadian version of froto
lol ,, ehhh not bad , not really my style
i'm violent, sick an cold.. so try an spit, an you'll be dyin quick ya know
you don't want beef, but look like you could eat an entire chicken whole
lol kinda funny but but he still isnt that fat to me
kicd ya face makes me think you been smacked around with hockey pucks
couldn't box me up if you swallowed a whole bottle of hydroxycut
wasnt that good of a closer in a pic battle ,


YOU-DOPE?... Makes me LOSE-HOPE... Thats DOUBT-WEIGHTED
VEX-HIS-REP
No one considers you FRESH-TO-DEATH... With a cell phone thats OUTDATED
lol decent opener as well ,

You'll fuckin FEND-NEW-SCARS... Cos' Faggot, I BEND-THOUGH-BARS
So, Don't you DARE-STEP
.......And - Why is your table and CHAIR-SET... Older THAN-YOU-ARE?
ok jab at em , pretty nice

I'll rip the 'next/necks' out... Till your body is DEAD-AND-COLDER
Burn his ass and SPEAD-THE-SMOLDERS
Cos' I'll take your top off... To prove your fat ass is all HEAD-AND-SHOULDERS
ehh i see the wp n what u tryin to incorporate , not bad i suppose , even tho no one else liked this

This CLOWN-IS-LIVE?... Cut'em DOWN-TO-SIZE... Yeah, RIPPED-AT-THE-HIPS
RUN-FAST... Cos' That MUSTACHE... Actually looks like krusty SHIT-ON-YOUR-LIPS
not feelin

you can't HARM-MINE... Cos' It'll cost you more than a LARGE-FINE.
The FIGHTS-LIVE.
......But, I'll kill biggs faster than that NICE-DRIVE... On MARCH-NINE
ehhh


i got 2nd dude i think his name sketpyic having slightly more decent bars , both went at it ok, just skept attacked the pic better i thought so he gets my vote
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man this nigga skep is weak, calfskin in disguise, usin old ass weak lines

vote for the 1st nigga
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sounds like a legitimate vote to me.............................................
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sounds like a legitimate vote to me.............................................

LOL...didn't you KO this cat so how can he talk shit???

Skep would murder this fool...straight up, no question.
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Old 03-16-2011, 10:09 PM   #29
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I reckon I'd murder him
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man this nigga yp1 is weak, calfskin in disguise, usin old ass weak lines

vote for the 1st nigga
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