Round 1: Alain El Khoury vs Oxy - B-Boys.com - Hip-Hop Rap Forums

Urban Eskimo · 03-04-2011, 04:09 PM

Bash Biggs Tournament

10 Lines.

Verses are due March 11th (Friday) by Midnight .

Voting is highly important to this tournament.
Vote on as many battles as possible.

If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped.
If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.

Alain El Khoury · 03-04-2011, 04:31 PM

IN..

Oxy · 03-04-2011, 09:06 PM

check

Alain El Khoury · 03-07-2011, 11:07 AM

what is that? the whack is back, you are far from fads with a lame odor.
Bigs shot his hat after he knew that he and my shit wear the same color..

Bash bigs is the right term bcz im shooting strikes and more man..
you are pathetic with that silly face standing looking like an orphan..

spending your money on getting bashed, save it to pay for new noses..
the only time you are big is when you are shopping for few clothes..

you are the most disgusting thing ive ever got to know before thy rap..
step in my gap, you are prepared to trap a lap, see? you are ready for my slap..

im a sinner but ima follow you, like Steve in your head..
when i pass through your Church I believe in(be leaving) you dead..

big ups Biggs.. i hope i bashed you good enough lol
Peace homie..

Oxy · 03-11-2011, 03:51 PM

Look at this queer ass clown, lucky he ain't Near my Town
Or i'd be suffocating em , when my punches Ear/Air Em Out (Look at his ear haha)
Gunna be wrapped in 'Caution' with this Fellow's Great Scream
Cuz right after I murder you it'll be like ya Pic, a Yellow Tape Scene
His Heads got a large circumference but it ain't no Big thing ..
And that's either a large fitted or this Shit Stain has a Thick Brain
With girls i'm stacking Tens, for you it's 2011 and you Lack the Trends
so i'll cut up ya chest and put blood on ya Hat just so you can Match Again
My verse gives em recognition, only way he Stands Out ..
Cause Wen asked who Thinks Bigg's is Dope? Even he kept his Hands down

Burt Blaze · 03-12-2011, 09:12 AM

not doin a line by line breakdown

alain

typical fashion...the lines weren't very clever and the last 2 bars were just BS filler

oxy

the last line was the best of the whole verse. a lot of the rest was mild but decent.

Vote = Oxy

more enjoyability in the verse and better concepts in attackin the pic.

Syd · 03-12-2011, 11:49 PM

i agree with burt ma vote goes to oxy i liked his last line

god 0f war · 03-13-2011, 01:56 PM

oxy had the best verse but wtf is wit this site n the air/ear type shit cuz if its wordplay its a super stretched wordplay so is that what yall r makin it? anyways i think oxy was way more consistent and got this battle pretty easily

v/oxy

NostradaVus · 03-14-2011, 02:08 AM

***Alain***

what is that? the whack is back, you are far from fads with a lame odor.
Bigs shot his hat after he knew that he and my shit wear the same color..
Decent concept, but this doesnt land that well. Odor/color is off, but you DO speak a different language lol.

Bash bigs is the right term bcz im shooting strikes and more man..
you are pathetic with that silly face standing looking like an orphan..
Ur attacking the pic, but it isn't doing much damage here...punch is kinda basic

spending your money on getting bashed, save it to pay for new noses..
the only time you are big is when you are shopping for few clothes..
"Pay for a new nose"woulda cleaned that up a little...this was pretty mild tho.

you are the most disgusting thing ive ever got to know before thy rap..
step in my gap, you are prepared to trap a lap, see? you are ready for my slap..
This is mostly filler...there wasn't anything I was reallydiggin here

im a sinner but ima follow you, like Steve in your head..
when i pass through your Church I believe in(be leaving) you dead..
Im not sure who Steve is,but this is prolly the best wordplay Ive seen from you...props for that, this wasn't the hardest attack on the pic, but it was a decent closer.

***Oxy***

Look at this queer ass clown, lucky he ain't Near my Town
Or i'd be suffocating em , when my punches Ear/Air Em Out (Look at his ear haha)
Not bad, but you coulda done a little more with this to open the verse IMO...simple wordplay, so it doesnt add too much, but it connects to pic so its not bad.

Gunna be wrapped in 'Caution' with this Fellow's Great Scream
Cuz right after I murder you it'll be like ya Pic, a Yellow Tape Scene
Good stuff here...nice attention to detail

His Heads got a large circumference but it ain't no Big thing ..
And that's either a large fitted or this Shit Stain has a Thick Brain
This was just ok...rhymes were decent, but the punch was pretty basic

With girls i'm stacking Tens, for you it's 2011 and you Lack the Trends
so i'll cut up ya chest and put blood on ya Hat just so you can Match Again
This was some decent horrocore imagery...not the hardest hitting set, but the visual was solid.

My verse gives em recognition, only way he Stands Out ..
Cause Wen asked who Thinks Bigg's is Dope? Even he kept his Hands down
Lol...decent way to close...not a haymaker, but it was laughs...good stuff.

Opener-Oxy...even tho his bar was missing something, he had that little extra to take it
Punches-Oxy
Personals/Pic hits-Oxy
Multis-Oxy
Wordplay-Alain(Be leaving/ was more creative than ear/air IMO)
Closer-Oxy...this was pretty good, but I think some cats slept on ur yellow tape line

***Overall, I think Oxy took this convincingly...Ive seen better from Alain before, but he had some ok stuff in there. I think if he stuck more direct to the pic and had a couple solid punches he coulda put upmore of a fight***

Vote,Oxy

Peace.

Rudy · 03-14-2011, 08:29 AM

V/ Oxy

Bodybag:

My verse gives em recognition, only way he Stands Out ..
Cause Wen asked who Thinks Bigg's is Dope? Even he kept his Hands down

nothing alain said was good IMO, Oxy beat him with the closer alone

Alain El Khoury · 03-14-2011, 08:58 AM

@ Nostra... lol man how couldnt you know who Steve is?? Murray?? hahahahahahaha i cant be mistaken.. or am i?? lol.. anyways i wrote that in a hurry, i dont put much effort in my drops in BBOYZ, maybe i should start doing that and thank you, yeah i speak TWO other languages lol..

nice battle Oxy, your 2nd bar and closer were really nice..
and Rudy can kiss my ass hahahaha look at your posts no. i hope you are enjoying it ma petit pede..

Peace out..

Rudy · 03-14-2011, 09:07 AM

ill body you....

Alain El Khoury · 03-14-2011, 11:54 AM

yeah okay..

Rudy · 03-14-2011, 01:00 PM

So set it up and get smacked

Urban Eskimo · 03-14-2011, 02:25 PM

Oxy wins 5-0

KOS

03-04-2011, 04:09 PM	#1
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Round 1: Alain El Khoury vs Oxy Bash Biggs Tournament 10 Lines. Verses are due March 11th (Friday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped. __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

03-04-2011, 04:31 PM	#2
Alain El Khoury Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 83	IN.. __________________ I GOT NO ATTITUDE, ATTITUDE GOT ME..

03-07-2011, 11:07 AM	#4
Alain El Khoury Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 83	what is that? the whack is back, you are far from fads with a lame odor. Bigs shot his hat after he knew that he and my shit wear the same color.. Bash bigs is the right term bcz im shooting strikes and more man.. you are pathetic with that silly face standing looking like an orphan.. spending your money on getting bashed, save it to pay for new noses.. the only time you are big is when you are shopping for few clothes.. you are the most disgusting thing ive ever got to know before thy rap.. step in my gap, you are prepared to trap a lap, see? you are ready for my slap.. im a sinner but ima follow you, like Steve in your head.. when i pass through your Church I believe in(be leaving) you dead.. big ups Biggs.. i hope i bashed you good enough lol Peace homie.. __________________ I GOT NO ATTITUDE, ATTITUDE GOT ME..

03-12-2011, 09:12 AM	#6
Burt Blaze burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI Posts: 2,441	not doin a line by line breakdown alain typical fashion...the lines weren't very clever and the last 2 bars were just BS filler oxy the last line was the best of the whole verse. a lot of the rest was mild but decent. Vote = Oxy more enjoyability in the verse and better concepts in attackin the pic. __________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface

03-14-2011, 02:08 AM	#9
NostradaVus Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 88	*Alain* what is that? the whack is back, you are far from fads with a lame odor. Bigs shot his hat after he knew that he and my shit wear the same color.. Decent concept, but this doesnt land that well. Odor/color is off, but you DO speak a different language lol. Bash bigs is the right term bcz im shooting strikes and more man.. you are pathetic with that silly face standing looking like an orphan.. Ur attacking the pic, but it isn't doing much damage here...punch is kinda basic spending your money on getting bashed, save it to pay for new noses.. the only time you are big is when you are shopping for few clothes.. "Pay for a new nose"woulda cleaned that up a little...this was pretty mild tho. you are the most disgusting thing ive ever got to know before thy rap.. step in my gap, you are prepared to trap a lap, see? you are ready for my slap.. This is mostly filler...there wasn't anything I was reallydiggin here im a sinner but ima follow you, like Steve in your head.. when i pass through your Church I believe in(be leaving) you dead.. Im not sure who Steve is,but this is prolly the best wordplay Ive seen from you...props for that, this wasn't the hardest attack on the pic, but it was a decent closer. *Oxy* Look at this queer ass clown, lucky he ain't Near my Town Or i'd be suffocating em , when my punches Ear/Air Em Out (Look at his ear haha) Not bad, but you coulda done a little more with this to open the verse IMO...simple wordplay, so it doesnt add too much, but it connects to pic so its not bad. Gunna be wrapped in 'Caution' with this Fellow's Great Scream Cuz right after I murder you it'll be like ya Pic, a Yellow Tape Scene Good stuff here...nice attention to detail His Heads got a large circumference but it ain't no Big thing .. And that's either a large fitted or this Shit Stain has a Thick Brain This was just ok...rhymes were decent, but the punch was pretty basic With girls i'm stacking Tens, for you it's 2011 and you Lack the Trends so i'll cut up ya chest and put blood on ya Hat just so you can Match Again This was some decent horrocore imagery...not the hardest hitting set, but the visual was solid. My verse gives em recognition, only way he Stands Out .. Cause Wen asked who Thinks Bigg's is Dope? Even he kept his Hands down Lol...decent way to close...not a haymaker, but it was laughs...good stuff. Opener-Oxy...even tho his bar was missing something, he had that little extra to take it Punches-Oxy Personals/Pic hits-Oxy Multis-Oxy Wordplay-Alain(Be leaving/ was more creative than ear/air IMO) Closer-Oxy...this was pretty good, but I think some cats slept on ur yellow tape line *Overall, I think Oxy took this convincingly...Ive seen better from Alain before, but he had some ok stuff in there. I think if he stuck more direct to the pic and had a couple solid punches he coulda put upmore of a fight* Vote,Oxy Peace. __________________ I'll come thru with kung fu, you can call me Wu-tang cuz I'm running thru you... like I was Lui Kang.

03-04-2011, 09:06 PM	#3
Oxy Pain Killers Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: East Coast Posts: 63	check

03-11-2011, 03:51 PM	#5
Oxy Pain Killers Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: East Coast Posts: 63	Look at this queer ass clown, lucky he ain't Near my Town Or i'd be suffocating em , when my punches Ear/Air Em Out (Look at his ear haha) Gunna be wrapped in 'Caution' with this Fellow's Great Scream Cuz right after I murder you it'll be like ya Pic, a Yellow Tape Scene His Heads got a large circumference but it ain't no Big thing .. And that's either a large fitted or this Shit Stain has a Thick Brain With girls i'm stacking Tens, for you it's 2011 and you Lack the Trends so i'll cut up ya chest and put blood on ya Hat just so you can Match Again My verse gives em recognition, only way he Stands Out .. Cause Wen asked who Thinks Bigg's is Dope? Even he kept his Hands down

03-12-2011, 11:49 PM	#7
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	i agree with burt ma vote goes to oxy i liked his last line

03-13-2011, 01:56 PM	#8
god 0f war Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 50	oxy had the best verse but wtf is wit this site n the air/ear type shit cuz if its wordplay its a super stretched wordplay so is that what yall r makin it? anyways i think oxy was way more consistent and got this battle pretty easily v/oxy

03-14-2011, 08:29 AM	#10
Rudy Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens Posts: 229	V/ Oxy Bodybag: My verse gives em recognition, only way he Stands Out .. Cause Wen asked who Thinks Bigg's is Dope? Even he kept his Hands down nothing alain said was good IMO, Oxy beat him with the closer alone __________________ I used to be a lonely man only mad Until I got a million dollars, shiiiiiiiit Now if i only had some fuckking hair I'd pull it, faster than a bullet out of Tupac's chest Before the ambulance came too late to do it - Em

03-14-2011, 08:58 AM	#11
Alain El Khoury Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 83	@ Nostra... lol man how couldnt you know who Steve is?? Murray?? hahahahahahaha i cant be mistaken.. or am i?? lol.. anyways i wrote that in a hurry, i dont put much effort in my drops in BBOYZ, maybe i should start doing that and thank you, yeah i speak TWO other languages lol.. nice battle Oxy, your 2nd bar and closer were really nice.. and Rudy can kiss my ass hahahaha look at your posts no. i hope you are enjoying it ma petit pede.. Peace out.. __________________ I GOT NO ATTITUDE, ATTITUDE GOT ME..

03-14-2011, 09:07 AM	#12
Rudy Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens Posts: 229	ill body you.... __________________ I used to be a lonely man only mad Until I got a million dollars, shiiiiiiiit Now if i only had some fuckking hair I'd pull it, faster than a bullet out of Tupac's chest Before the ambulance came too late to do it - Em

03-14-2011, 11:54 AM	#13
Alain El Khoury Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 83	yeah okay.. __________________ I GOT NO ATTITUDE, ATTITUDE GOT ME..

03-14-2011, 01:00 PM	#14
Rudy Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens Posts: 229	So set it up and get smacked __________________ I used to be a lonely man only mad Until I got a million dollars, shiiiiiiiit Now if i only had some fuckking hair I'd pull it, faster than a bullet out of Tupac's chest Before the ambulance came too late to do it - Em

03-14-2011, 02:25 PM	#15
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Oxy wins 5-0 KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

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