Round 1: Elevated Design vs Young Pro. 1 - B-Boys.com - Hip-Hop Rap Forums

Urban Eskimo · 03-08-2011, 04:02 PM

Bash Biggs Tournament

10 Lines.

Verses are due March 12th (Saturday) by Midnight .

Voting is highly important to this tournament.
Vote on as many battles as possible.

If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped.
If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.

Elevated Design · 03-08-2011, 09:17 PM

check it

Young Pro.1 · 03-10-2011, 09:22 AM

in..

Elevated Design · 03-12-2011, 12:02 AM

I've never seen a chest hairier
BUT WAIT!! it gets scarier
that kinda gaze, is a sign-ya gay at rest areas ///
this faggot thinks he's photogenic...
but I can only gives this bozo credit for being homo-centric ///
he got a chick but never plays in her legs
he wanks naked instead
if she was happy she'd be making the bed!! ////
this place is dead yo, where'd the heads go??
it seems the only thing you CAN coordinate with success... is red clothes ///
you don't go on dates, more like all day cyber
he's overweight...
so they had to make his door frame wider /// ^^

Syd · 03-12-2011, 11:51 PM

yo elevated design u in australia too! i'm in brisbane bro holla! nice to see i'm not the only one.

Elevated Design · 03-13-2011, 06:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Syd

yo elevated design u in australia too! i'm in brisbane bro holla! nice to see i'm not the only one.

oh yeah, how'd you fare in the floods?

Young Pro.1 · 03-13-2011, 06:59 PM

I'll break ten of you's, couldn't have heart If I ripped off?
my own tentricles, & gave 'em for ya' health like a miracle
surviving's like a being a Natzi in the projects, minimal
he think I'm fat, girl-less, & hairy? I think I'm changin' his mind
I'll hit 'em wit' a 12 gauge and elevate his design
I'm on that Brooklyn shit, pool sticks, or get carved with a knife
I'll fuck you from the inside out 'cuz I'm larger than life
my syllables bang like a drum stick dentin' ya chest
I'll put 'em a sleep for a lifetime, when he attemptin' a rest
fuck the dry cleaners, I'll have yo' whole skeleton pressed

!!!

NostradaVus · 03-13-2011, 07:20 PM

***Elevated Design***

I've never seen a chest hairier
BUT WAIT!! it gets scarier
that kinda gaze, is a sign-ya gay at rest areas ///
Not the hardest shot, but overall good usage of the pic and decent rhyming. Pretty good opener
this faggot thinks he's photogenic...
but I can only gives this bozo credit for being homo-centric ///
This was ok, but I really wasn't feeling much power behind it.
he got a chick but never plays in her legs
he wanks naked instead
if she was happy she'd be making the bed!! ////
I think you coulda added a couple syllables in some form of a multi and this woulda been a lot tighter...still good, but a multi could pushed this over the top IMO
this place is dead yo, where'd the heads go??
it seems the only thing you CAN coordinate with success... is red clothes ///
This was aimed at the pic, but I don't think this hit the hardest...ok concept, but you coulda done more

you don't go on dates, more like all day cyber
he's overweight...
so they had to make his door frame wider /// ^^
Good attention to detail...this wasn't a haymaker, but it connected and followed the criteria...good closer

***Young Pro***

I'll break ten of you's, couldn't have heart If I ripped off?
my own tentricles, & gave 'em for ya' health like a miracle
surviving's like a being a Natzi in the projects, minimal
he think I'm fat, girl-less, & hairy? I think I'm changin' his mind
I'll hit 'em wit' a 12 gauge and elevate his design
I'm on that Brooklyn shit, pool sticks, or get carved with a knife
I'll fuck you from the inside out 'cuz I'm larger than life
my syllables bang like a drum stick dentin' ya chest
I'll put 'em a sleep for a lifetime, when he attemptin' a rest
fuck the dry cleaners, I'll have yo' whole skeleton pressed
You had some aight shit in there, nothing too hard hitting, but not bad...problem is, none of it was aimed at Biggs picture, but more at ur opponent...this completely missed the criteria, so didn't bother doing a bar bybar...next time, read the rules.

***Vote Elevated design***

Syd · 03-13-2011, 07:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elevated Design

oh yeah, how'd you fare in the floods?

man where i live we was cooler than a mufucka though some other folks were swimming and shit in their backyards otherwise thnk the lord most o ma peeps is good. what bout u man? sheet i recon there gon be an earthquake here soon man, there been floods, cyclones, fires and julia gillards carbon tax so def an earthquake next! you originally aussie bro?

Elevated Design · 03-13-2011, 07:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Young Pro.1

I'll break ten of you's, couldn't have heart If I ripped off?
my own tentricles, & gave 'em for ya' health like a miracle
surviving's like a being a Natzi in the projects, minimal
he think I'm fat, girl-less, & hairy? I think I'm changin' his mind
I'll hit 'em wit' a 12 gauge and elevate his design
I'm on that Brooklyn shit, pool sticks, or get carved with a knife
I'll fuck you from the inside out 'cuz I'm larger than life
my syllables bang like a drum stick dentin' ya chest
I'll put 'em a sleep for a lifetime, when he attemptin' a rest
fuck the dry cleaners, I'll have yo' whole skeleton pressed

!!!

are you serious?

Burt Blaze · 03-14-2011, 06:31 AM

no giving a line by line breakdown

ed

nice verse, consistency with clever jabs at the pic. well placed concepts worked into decent punches.

~

yp1

Quote:

he think I'm fat, girl-less, & hairy? I think I'm changin' his mind
I'll hit 'em wit' a 12 gauge and elevate his design

L...M...A...O! Are you serious? You know he wasn't talkin about you right? The tourney is called BASH BIGGS! Get it? It's a pic battle i which Biggs posts a pic for people to diss instead of each other... You failed on multiple levels here cause even if aimed at ED it wasn't that great of a battle verse.

~

Vote = Elevated Design

MeSsIaH · 03-14-2011, 07:05 AM

yea this is comical.. i liked EDs verse, i thought the red clothes line was pretty solid, that bar alone kills pro's whole verse, like burt said u failed on multiple levels here bro, so for obvious reasons EDs takin this, i had more trouble with my no show opp

VOTE ELEVATED DESIGN

Young Pro.1 · 03-14-2011, 07:14 AM

lol this shit is funny
my fault biggs, I think I keep lettin' niggas down
I just went in
I needa sharpen up my battlin' skills

1.

Rudy · 03-14-2011, 08:26 AM

V/ Elevated Design

for obvious reasons, hopefully i dont need to explain

eRek · 03-14-2011, 09:24 AM

Pro what dimension are u from???

Urban Eskimo · 03-14-2011, 02:27 PM

Elevated Design wins 4-0

KOS

03-08-2011, 04:02 PM	#1
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Round 1: Elevated Design vs Young Pro. 1 Bash Biggs Tournament 10 Lines. Verses are due March 12th (Saturday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped. __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

03-08-2011, 09:17 PM	#2
Elevated Design vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW Posts: 860	check it __________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L

03-12-2011, 12:02 AM	#4
Elevated Design vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW Posts: 860	I've never seen a chest hairier BUT WAIT!! it gets scarier that kinda gaze, is a sign-ya gay at rest areas /// this faggot thinks he's photogenic... but I can only gives this bozo credit for being homo-centric /// he got a chick but never plays in her legs he wanks naked instead if she was happy she'd be making the bed!! //// this place is dead yo, where'd the heads go?? it seems the only thing you CAN coordinate with success... is red clothes /// you don't go on dates, more like all day cyber he's overweight... so they had to make his door frame wider /// ^^ __________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L Last edited by Elevated Design; 03-13-2011 at 06:43 PM.

03-13-2011, 07:20 PM	#8
NostradaVus Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 88	*Elevated Design* I've never seen a chest hairier BUT WAIT!! it gets scarier that kinda gaze, is a sign-ya gay at rest areas /// Not the hardest shot, but overall good usage of the pic and decent rhyming. Pretty good opener this faggot thinks he's photogenic... but I can only gives this bozo credit for being homo-centric /// This was ok, but I really wasn't feeling much power behind it. he got a chick but never plays in her legs he wanks naked instead if she was happy she'd be making the bed!! //// I think you coulda added a couple syllables in some form of a multi and this woulda been a lot tighter...still good, but a multi could pushed this over the top IMO this place is dead yo, where'd the heads go?? it seems the only thing you CAN coordinate with success... is red clothes /// This was aimed at the pic, but I don't think this hit the hardest...ok concept, but you coulda done more you don't go on dates, more like all day cyber he's overweight... so they had to make his door frame wider /// ^^ Good attention to detail...this wasn't a haymaker, but it connected and followed the criteria...good closer *Young Pro* I'll break ten of you's, couldn't have heart If I ripped off? my own tentricles, & gave 'em for ya' health like a miracle surviving's like a being a Natzi in the projects, minimal he think I'm fat, girl-less, & hairy? I think I'm changin' his mind I'll hit 'em wit' a 12 gauge and elevate his design I'm on that Brooklyn shit, pool sticks, or get carved with a knife I'll fuck you from the inside out 'cuz I'm larger than life my syllables bang like a drum stick dentin' ya chest I'll put 'em a sleep for a lifetime, when he attemptin' a rest fuck the dry cleaners, I'll have yo' whole skeleton pressed You had some aight shit in there, nothing too hard hitting, but not bad...problem is, none of it was aimed at Biggs picture, but more at ur opponent...this completely missed the criteria, so didn't bother doing a bar bybar...next time, read the rules. *Vote Elevated design* __________________ I'll come thru with kung fu, you can call me Wu-tang cuz I'm running thru you... like I was Lui Kang.

03-14-2011, 07:05 AM	#12
MeSsIaH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Cap City KY Posts: 847	yea this is comical.. i liked EDs verse, i thought the red clothes line was pretty solid, that bar alone kills pro's whole verse, like burt said u failed on multiple levels here bro, so for obvious reasons EDs takin this, i had more trouble with my no show opp VOTE ELEVATED DESIGN __________________ Champion hoodie on... prolly lookin bummy wit it had it on a month straight... i been gettin money wit it Styles

03-10-2011, 09:22 AM	#3
Young Pro.1 Buck, Buck Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: LA Posts: 2,785	in..

03-12-2011, 11:51 PM	#5
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	yo elevated design u in australia too! i'm in brisbane bro holla! nice to see i'm not the only one.

03-13-2011, 06:59 PM	#7
Young Pro.1 Buck, Buck Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: LA Posts: 2,785	I'll break ten of you's, couldn't have heart If I ripped off? my own tentricles, & gave 'em for ya' health like a miracle surviving's like a being a Natzi in the projects, minimal he think I'm fat, girl-less, & hairy? I think I'm changin' his mind I'll hit 'em wit' a 12 gauge and elevate his design I'm on that Brooklyn shit, pool sticks, or get carved with a knife I'll fuck you from the inside out 'cuz I'm larger than life my syllables bang like a drum stick dentin' ya chest I'll put 'em a sleep for a lifetime, when he attemptin' a rest fuck the dry cleaners, I'll have yo' whole skeleton pressed !!!

03-14-2011, 07:14 AM	#13
Young Pro.1 Buck, Buck Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: LA Posts: 2,785	lol this shit is funny my fault biggs, I think I keep lettin' niggas down I just went in I needa sharpen up my battlin' skills 1.

03-14-2011, 08:26 AM	#14
Rudy Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens Posts: 229	V/ Elevated Design for obvious reasons, hopefully i dont need to explain __________________ I used to be a lonely man only mad Until I got a million dollars, shiiiiiiiit Now if i only had some fuckking hair I'd pull it, faster than a bullet out of Tupac's chest Before the ambulance came too late to do it - Em

03-14-2011, 09:24 AM	#15
eRek ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown. Posts: 1,252	Pro what dimension are u from??? __________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA

03-14-2011, 02:27 PM	#16
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Elevated Design wins 4-0 KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

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