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03-19-2011, 09:54 AM
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST  Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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|  Round 2: Rudy vs Young Pro. 1 Bash Biggs Tournament  10 Lines. Verses are due March 25th (Friday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.
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03-21-2011, 08:05 AM
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| Requiescat in pace  Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens
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check, my drop could possibly end up being seeing how i got a midterm and a project coming up this week
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03-22-2011, 09:34 PM
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| Buck, Buck  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: LA
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03-23-2011, 12:06 AM
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| Buck, Buck Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: LA
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he ain't rappin', he jus checkin' the mic & that chain ain't real nor the rest of his life only please one person a day? how many dicks you blow in a month? his head's bigger than his body, look like his dome got the mumps he ain't livin' a high life, he jus cross eyed I'll put'em in a KFC chicken box, rick ross size lookin' like a stick figure, one of them fat albert niggas ICP makin' a come back? fuck that don't he keepin' dyin' on South Park? eskimo, rugrat you ain't from the projects, you from where they never bust guns at.. |
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03-23-2011, 04:26 PM
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| Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens
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im tired of starin at this blumpkin, that tough starin shits for nothing u cant rap circles round peeps ...just cuz yo head n popshield share the same circumference yo shirt is enourmous and the beanie you rockin is tight is hell its ironic, now hes walking target after buying his entire outfit there yo shit raps are wick-wack, and yo whol steez is type lame last time u " went in" behind a mic ... that was the guys name last battle i got blazed, but this here is easy as cake now before you was ricky gervais, now you kirby.... if he grew up on 8 mile your wild glare is akward b, yo tired ass aint got no cheese even ya wall knows that when you rap that papers gon b hard to see
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03-24-2011, 10:07 AM
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|  YP1 he ain't rappin', he jus checkin' the mic & that chain ain't real nor the rest of his life Pro: refers to the pic; Con: pretty basic. Overall, a mild opener only please one person a day? how many dicks you blow in a month? his head's bigger than his body, look like his dome got the mumps Lol...this is ok he ain't livin' a high life, he jus cross eyed I'll put'em in a KFC chicken box, rick ross size Lol...ok too lookin' like a stick figure, one of them fat albert niggas ICP makin' a come back? fuck that don't he keepin' dyin' on South Park? eskimo, rugrat you ain't from the projects, you from where they never bust guns at.. Honestly, I wasn't really able to comprehend the middle two lines...but anyways, this closer was ok...I wouldn't say it was outstanding, but not horrible either Rudy im tired of starin at this blumpkin, that tough starin shits for nothing u cant rap circles round peeps ...just cuz yo head n popshield share the same circumference LMFAO...solid opener yo shirt is enourmous and the beanie you rockin is tight is hell its ironic, now hes walking target after buying his entire outfit there I didn't really feel this one yo shit raps are wick-wack, and yo whol steez is type lame last time u " went in" behind a mic ... that was the guys name Lol...nice last battle i got blazed, but this here is easy as cake now before you was ricky gervais, now you kirby.... if he grew up on 8 mile This was iight...not "WOW" material, but not horrible either your wild glare is akward b, yo tired ass aint got no cheese even ya wall knows that when you rap that papers gon b hard to see I'm diggin' the flow in the closer. The punch wasn't too bad either My vote goes to: Rudy This was a tough decision but I vote Rudy because his opener was very well worded and hard-hitting. The reason I say this was a difficult vote is because both verses made me laugh, but Rudy's good lines went harder than that of YP1's...IMO. |
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03-27-2011, 02:10 AM
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YoungPro only had 4 sets aimed at the pic but none connected that well. You had concepts there, but didn't quite display them properly to hit with a solid punch...The crosseyed thing coulda been worked into something solid...I didnt notice that in the pic till I read this LOL, but being in the first line it didn't really have an effect.(Good attention to detail tho, just work on making it into a punch)coulda worked a "U'll cross ur eyes, when I put the dot on ur Tee." or something for a gunplay or whatever. Think Creative. Rudy kept aiming at the pic(First 2 sets were pretty good IMO)...rest were lighter jabs, but still connected and the closer was nice, haha...I don't think alot of people are gonna get that one unless you point it out, but thats a solid closer...good stuff. This vote is mostly based on punches aimed at Biggs pic...and Rudy for me took both punches and pic hits. IMO he paid better attention to details of the picture and demonstrated an overall better verse from open to close with more facets of the game slightly better used in some areas and moreso in others...Overall not a complete blowout, but there is a clear victor for me. ***Vote Rudy*** Peace, Dizzy D
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03-27-2011, 01:20 PM
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| Yes, it's me...  Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are?
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rudy gets this one... young had a couple nice ideas in there, nothin really hard hittin tho'...the lines were so short he didn't really develop anything, an you can drop short lines an make 'em funny, but you gotta have more in the set-up an smoother verbage...the kfc shit was kinda humerous...the mumps shit was aiight, but kinda cheesy at the same time...towards the end of your verse you really fell off with the whole rugrats/come back section... rudy had an okay verse, the outfit there/tight as hell shit don't even rhyme tho', so that threw me off for sure...the opener was a nice idea, tho' i say it coulda been delivered sharper with more attention given to the exact wordin...mic/mike plays are played out an have been for years...you could make it fresh with a modern reference maybe (i had a line against burt after MJ died that said "an as for rappin, jackson's dead, so leave the mic alone"), but even if you make it a current event line, you still gonna get dinged for usin a mic/mike line (i did)... overall, cool match, but rudy once again gets it...pz
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03-28-2011, 03:51 PM
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| Young Pro he ain't rappin', he jus checkin' the mic & that chain ain't real nor the rest of his life This was aight, not alot of power but an ok lil jab. only please one person a day? how many dicks you blow in a month? his head's bigger than his body, look like his dome got the mumps Haha, this is my favourite bar in your verse...the setup has a good jab at my shirt and the 2nd line is comical, I like this bar the best. he ain't livin' a high life, he jus cross eyed I'll put'em in a KFC chicken box, rick ross size I felt this was the weakest you had. lookin' like a stick figure, one of them fat albert niggas ICP makin' a come back? fuck that don't he keepin' dyin' on South Park? eskimo, rugrat you ain't from the projects, you from where they never bust guns at.. These lines were ok in regards to the picture, but the disses here were light. Rudy im tired of starin at this blumpkin, that tough starin shits for nothing u cant rap circles round peeps ...just cuz yo head n popshield share the same circumference This was ok, but I didn't feel it fully connected tho...the diss didn't feel relevant to the concept you were tryin to execute. I understand that you're sayin my head is round, but it doesn't relate enough to the "rap circles around"...the wording here could've been better, so it didn't land as hard as it potentially could have. yo shirt is enourmous and the beanie you rockin is tight is hell its ironic, now hes walking target after buying his entire outfit there This was a cool concept and decent punch, not bad...the end rhyme was choppy tho. yo shit raps are wick-wack, and yo whol steez is type lame last time u " went in" behind a mic ... that was the guys name Haha, another decent punch. last battle i got blazed, but this here is easy as cake now before you was ricky gervais, now you kirby.... if he grew up on 8 mile  This was pretty good, got a laugh from me and was a good diss.your wild glare is akward b, yo tired ass aint got no cheese even ya wall knows that when you rap that papers gon b hard to see This was mild. Overall, I was pretty impressed with Pro's verse...he definately learned from his last battle and attacked the picture much better this time, he had some pretty good disses on the picture in his verse but he didn't have the concepts in there like Rudy did so that's what gave Rudy the edge in the end...I felt his bars connected harder. My vote goes to Rudy. KOS
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03-29-2011, 06:20 AM
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| Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens
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Lol good looks on the votes N the feedback fellas. I reallly concentred on the first n last bars, the middle I pretty much keyd. The outfit ther/ tight as hell sounded better when I spoke em cuz I was accenting but didn't translate well on txt. @ nostra I don't like pointn shit out unless its an absolute necessity. @pjk good looks ur feedback is great u keep it real
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04-01-2011, 02:07 PM
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| Rudy wins 4-0. KOS
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