Round 2: Alain El Khoury vs Syd - B-Boys.com - Hip-Hop Rap Forums

Urban Eskimo · 03-19-2011, 09:56 AM

Bash Biggs Tournament

10 Lines.

Verses are due March 25th (Friday) by Midnight .

Voting is highly important to this tournament.
Vote on as many battles as possible.

If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped.
If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.

Syd · 03-19-2011, 07:38 PM

Lmfao! Dats a fucked up picture!

Alain El Khoury · 03-20-2011, 08:36 AM

IN..

Syd · 03-20-2011, 02:57 PM

in..

Alain El Khoury · 03-25-2011, 03:32 PM

1st thought, bitch thinks he's spitting bars that flames
just as burning as that torch his written are sad, lame..

he aint good with his chick and cant bang fine words..
fuck it, not you nor this pic is worth my 10 lines jerk..

With me text rhymes gets sore and never making A hot..
Britney next time set urself on real fire before taking a shot..

take a break blue eyes, smelling like balls sack you creep..
ima make you cry your heart out till you fall back to sleep..

fault phony, playing with fake flames aint bold..
didnt you hear? only Fierce fire reveals true gold..

Alain El Khoury · 03-27-2011, 01:49 PM

UrbEsk.. if you are gonna DQ him.. id like a brief breakdown on my verse, kindly..

Syd · 03-27-2011, 08:14 PM

soz man i didnt have time for it, u cn go head and take it

Oxy · 03-27-2011, 08:42 PM

1st thought, bitch thinks he's spitting bars that flames
just as burning as that torch his written are sad, lame..
alright opener, nothing special tho

he aint good with his chick and cant bang fine words..
fuck it, not you nor this pic is worth my 10 lines jerk..
chuckled at this, idk why was diggin it

With me text rhymes gets sore and never making A hot..
Britney next time set urself on real fire before taking a shot..
lol was liking this one too, jokes so far

take a break blue eyes, smelling like balls sack you creep..
ima make you cry your heart out till you fall back to sleep..
ehhh .. light

fault phony, playing with fake flames aint bold..
didnt you hear? only Fierce fire reveals true gold..
alrite closer, just like the opener, wasn't that great tho

Elevated Design · 03-28-2011, 12:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Syd

soz man i didnt have time for it, u cn go head and take it

weak

Alain El Khoury · 03-28-2011, 09:44 AM

@ Syd: no sweat man..

@ Oxy: thank you, actually it was good that it made you laugh twice.. but yeah nothing heavy there.. i just tried to make it a multie verse..

Monaco · 03-29-2011, 02:02 PM

1st thought, bitch thinks he's spitting bars that flames
just as burning as that torch his written are sad, lame..
Not really feelin' this opener much...concept itself could've been a little better

he aint good with his chick and cant bang fine words..
fuck it, not you nor this pic is worth my 10 lines jerk..
I like this...I see ur joining the multi crew

With me text rhymes gets sore and never making A hot..
Britney next time set urself on real fire before taking a shot..
I don't get this...who's Britney?

take a break blue eyes, smelling like balls sack you creep..
ima make you cry your heart out till you fall back to sleep..
Lol...solid closer and flow was good

fault phony, playing with fake flames aint bold..
didnt you hear? only Fierce fire reveals true gold..
I didn't really feel the closer too much

Overall, this was a decent verse and I think your verses are definitely elevating...good job, man!

Alain El Khoury · 03-30-2011, 07:34 AM

appreciate it Black.. yeah im joining the multi crew lol and i wrote that in 14 min.. despite of that i have problem with the language but still trying my best... thanks again man..

Burt Blaze · 03-30-2011, 07:39 AM

yea Alain, now drop some votes on other battles

Urban Eskimo · 03-30-2011, 03:02 PM

1st thought, bitch thinks he's spitting bars that flames
just as burning as that torch his written are sad, lame..
You had an alright idea here but the wording was off tho.
he aint good with his chick and cant bang fine words..
fuck it, not you nor this pic is worth my 10 lines jerk..
This was aight, it was abit indirect for a picture battle tho.
With me text rhymes gets sore and never making A hot..
Britney next time set urself on real fire before taking a shot..
I don't know why you're callin me Britney lol, but this was ok...not alot of heat but not bad.
take a break blue eyes, smelling like balls sack you creep..
ima make you cry your heart out till you fall back to sleep..
This was my favourite bar in your verse, it was simple but I liked it.
fault phony, playing with fake flames aint bold..
didnt you hear? only Fierce fire reveals true gold..
This was fairly light, the concept was ok but you didn't present it with much power.

Overall, this was a decent verse man...too bad Syd decided to back out of the battle.

KOS

Urban Eskimo · 03-30-2011, 03:03 PM

Alain wins.

Syd no shows.

KOS

03-19-2011, 09:56 AM	#1
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Round 2: Alain El Khoury vs Syd Bash Biggs Tournament 10 Lines. Verses are due March 25th (Friday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped. __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

03-20-2011, 08:36 AM	#3
Alain El Khoury Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 83	IN.. __________________ I GOT NO ATTITUDE, ATTITUDE GOT ME..

03-25-2011, 03:32 PM	#5
Alain El Khoury Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 83	1st thought, bitch thinks he's spitting bars that flames just as burning as that torch his written are sad, lame.. he aint good with his chick and cant bang fine words.. fuck it, not you nor this pic is worth my 10 lines jerk.. With me text rhymes gets sore and never making A hot.. Britney next time set urself on real fire before taking a shot.. take a break blue eyes, smelling like balls sack you creep.. ima make you cry your heart out till you fall back to sleep.. fault phony, playing with fake flames aint bold.. didnt you hear? only Fierce fire reveals true gold.. __________________ I GOT NO ATTITUDE, ATTITUDE GOT ME..

03-27-2011, 01:49 PM	#6
Alain El Khoury Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 83	UrbEsk.. if you are gonna DQ him.. id like a brief breakdown on my verse, kindly.. __________________ I GOT NO ATTITUDE, ATTITUDE GOT ME..

03-28-2011, 09:44 AM	#10
Alain El Khoury Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 83	@ Syd: no sweat man.. @ Oxy: thank you, actually it was good that it made you laugh twice.. but yeah nothing heavy there.. i just tried to make it a multie verse.. __________________ I GOT NO ATTITUDE, ATTITUDE GOT ME..

03-19-2011, 07:38 PM	#2
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	Lmfao! Dats a fucked up picture!

03-20-2011, 02:57 PM	#4
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	in..

03-27-2011, 08:14 PM	#7
Syd Pro Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 370	soz man i didnt have time for it, u cn go head and take it

03-27-2011, 08:42 PM	#8
Oxy Pain Killers Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: East Coast Posts: 63	1st thought, bitch thinks he's spitting bars that flames just as burning as that torch his written are sad, lame.. alright opener, nothing special tho he aint good with his chick and cant bang fine words.. fuck it, not you nor this pic is worth my 10 lines jerk.. chuckled at this, idk why was diggin it With me text rhymes gets sore and never making A hot.. Britney next time set urself on real fire before taking a shot.. lol was liking this one too, jokes so far take a break blue eyes, smelling like balls sack you creep.. ima make you cry your heart out till you fall back to sleep.. ehhh .. light fault phony, playing with fake flames aint bold.. didnt you hear? only Fierce fire reveals true gold.. alrite closer, just like the opener, wasn't that great tho

03-29-2011, 02:02 PM	#11
Monaco Junior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 275	1st thought, bitch thinks he's spitting bars that flames just as burning as that torch his written are sad, lame.. Not really feelin' this opener much...concept itself could've been a little better he aint good with his chick and cant bang fine words.. fuck it, not you nor this pic is worth my 10 lines jerk.. I like this...I see ur joining the multi crew With me text rhymes gets sore and never making A hot.. Britney next time set urself on real fire before taking a shot.. I don't get this...who's Britney? take a break blue eyes, smelling like balls sack you creep.. ima make you cry your heart out till you fall back to sleep.. Lol...solid closer and flow was good fault phony, playing with fake flames aint bold.. didnt you hear? only Fierce fire reveals true gold.. I didn't really feel the closer too much Overall, this was a decent verse and I think your verses are definitely elevating...good job, man!

03-30-2011, 07:34 AM	#12
Alain El Khoury Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 83	appreciate it Black.. yeah im joining the multi crew lol and i wrote that in 14 min.. despite of that i have problem with the language but still trying my best... thanks again man.. __________________ I GOT NO ATTITUDE, ATTITUDE GOT ME..

03-30-2011, 07:39 AM	#13
Burt Blaze burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI Posts: 2,441	yea Alain, now drop some votes on other battles __________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface

03-30-2011, 03:02 PM	#14
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	1st thought, bitch thinks he's spitting bars that flames just as burning as that torch his written are sad, lame.. You had an alright idea here but the wording was off tho. he aint good with his chick and cant bang fine words.. fuck it, not you nor this pic is worth my 10 lines jerk.. This was aight, it was abit indirect for a picture battle tho. With me text rhymes gets sore and never making A hot.. Britney next time set urself on real fire before taking a shot.. I don't know why you're callin me Britney lol, but this was ok...not alot of heat but not bad. take a break blue eyes, smelling like balls sack you creep.. ima make you cry your heart out till you fall back to sleep.. This was my favourite bar in your verse, it was simple but I liked it. fault phony, playing with fake flames aint bold.. didnt you hear? only Fierce fire reveals true gold.. This was fairly light, the concept was ok but you didn't present it with much power. Overall, this was a decent verse man...too bad Syd decided to back out of the battle. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

03-30-2011, 03:03 PM	#15
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Alain wins. Syd no shows. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

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