Round 2: Oxy vs PoizonusJK - B-Boys.com - Hip-Hop Rap Forums

Urban Eskimo · 03-19-2011, 10:01 AM

Bash Biggs Tournament

10 Lines.

Verses are due March 25th (Friday) by Midnight .

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Oxy · 03-20-2011, 10:48 AM

check,

PoizonusJK · 03-20-2011, 12:05 PM

check

PoizonusJK · 03-22-2011, 09:05 PM

HEY OXY...go hard or go home, i'm on my fuck-you swag right now haha...

you 'bout to get steam rolled-in-the-booth, ya bones folded-in-groups
soon as i hit the block-in-Stroud, i'm poppin-rounds.. an you're holdin-the-proof
lose ya soul-an-ya-shoes.. you never-wild, need a better-style,-face-it
lookin like a decrepit-child-rapist, that lives in a pedophile's-basement
real talk, i'm hard as Robocop-when-spittin.. homo,-stop-an-listen
quit postin solo-shots-depictin ya lonely life an AT LEAST photoshop-a-chick-in!!
think you a killer?-please-guy.. wanna pretend you a real-MC?-fine
but you don't deal-an-squeeze-nines, ya biggest crime's stealin-street-signs
so bounce-with-all-the-bitchin, i'm bringin down-the-walls-an-kitchen
till the only things left intact, are that row of gin-flasks an ya alcohol-addiction

...fuck with it oxy, i dare you...pz

Oxy · 03-26-2011, 01:22 PM

Punches I'm landing them Quick, we know what you standin for bitch
so fuck college courses he's already the marketing Man for the Crips
cause the blue means he never sided for the green, its another advertisement for his team
in real life this harsh picture has a Large Figure, quit Sizing up Your Dreams
He ain't rhyming coool, definitely dont got his own Style tooo
And its over, even with that Composure Nobody will be SIGNin' You
theres always disputes with his parents askin how, an his Cries at Home Now
An this is his way of acting out, rockin a bandana inside his own house
You should Pass right thru.. cuz for this laugh, Bigg'll get Smacked up Good
He's So Funny! Cuz our Response to his raps same to his sign, don't make us "Crack up" dude

Elevated Design · 03-27-2011, 02:09 AM

PoizonusJK:

you 'bout to get steam rolled-in-the-booth, ya bones folded-in-groups
soon as i hit the block-in-Stroud, i'm poppin-rounds.. an you're holdin-the-proof
setup coulda been more relevant but nonetheless, this was a good opener

lose ya soul-an-ya-shoes.. you never-wild, need a better-style,-face-it
lookin like a decrepit-child-rapist, that lives in a pedophile's-basement
haha, very solid

real talk, i'm hard as Robocop-when-spittin.. homo,-stop-an-listen
quit postin solo-shots-depictin ya lonely life an AT LEAST photoshop-a-chick-in!!
slickening AND true

think you a killer?-please-guy.. wanna pretend you a real-MC?-fine
but you don't deal-an-squeeze-nines, ya biggest crime's stealin-street-signs
average, i reckon you coulda flipped this harder

so bounce-with-all-the-bitchin, i'm bringin down-the-walls-an-kitchen
till the only things left intact, are that row of gin-flasks an ya alcohol-addiction
not feeling the concept here

Oxy:

Punches I'm landing them Quick, we know what you standin for bitch
so fuck college courses he's already the marketing Man for the Crips
i don't know if i missed something here, but it was okay

cause the blue means he never sided for the green, its another advertisement for his team
in real life this harsh picture has a Large Figure, quit Sizing up Your Dreams
rhymes were good, but the concept was soft

He ain't rhyming coool, definitely dont got his own Style tooo
And its over, even with that Composure Nobody will be SIGNin' You
was not a bad idea, although the punch is kinda indirect

theres always disputes with his parents askin how, an his Cries at Home Now
An this is his way of acting out, rockin a bandana inside his own house
idk, this was pretty light

You should Pass right thru.. cuz for this laugh, Bigg'll get Smacked up Good
He's So Funny! Cuz our Response to his raps same to his sign, don't make us "Crack up" dude
averge

pj, you started off well with some funny, well schemaged rhymes, but faltered off towards the end there.

ox, i thought your verse was a decent read, but you didn't have anything very humorous or hard. some of your punches seemed kinda unclear to me, and you gotta come more direct i feel. you had good rhymes for the most part

i'm going with p for the w, cause his shit was better basically

VOTE: PoizonusJ

NostradaVus · 03-27-2011, 04:16 AM

Its past 5am here and I don't wanna do a full breakdown right now...but I'll try and get one in ASAP...BIGGS, Don't close this until I have my full say if you come to close it...anyways as it stands right now Im voting PJK for reasons soon to be explained.

Peace, Im crashing.

Urban Eskimo · 03-28-2011, 03:33 PM

PJK

you 'bout to get steam rolled-in-the-booth, ya bones folded-in-groups
soon as i hit the block-in-Stroud, i'm poppin-rounds.. an you're holdin-the-proof
This was more of a flex rhyme rather than diss, but it was relevant to the picture and a good opener...it just didn't have alot of power to it.
lose ya soul-an-ya-shoes.. you never-wild, need a better-style,-face-it
lookin like a decrepit-child-rapist, that lives in a pedophile's-basement
Hahaha, this was a solid jab...tight multi in that 2nd line too.
real talk, i'm hard as Robocop-when-spittin.. homo,-stop-an-listen
quit postin solo-shots-depictin ya lonely life an AT LEAST photoshop-a-chick-in!!
Keepin it tight on the multi tip with this bar too, I've been missin these types of rhymes in your battles lately so it's good to see you bringin that swag in again. This was another nice jab, and I plan on havin pictures of me with my girl/people in the rounds to come but don't think it's because of your influence in this bar lol.
think you a killer?-please-guy.. wanna pretend you a real-MC?-fine
but you don't deal-an-squeeze-nines, ya biggest crime's stealin-street-signs
Haha, this was a simple punch but it landed on target.
so bounce-with-all-the-bitchin, i'm bringin down-the-walls-an-kitchen
till the only things left intact, are that row of gin-flasks an ya alcohol-addiction
This was a decent closer, those aren't flasks on the ledge they're hockey trophy's from when I was a kid (it's my mom's house) lol...this was still an aight finish tho.

Oxy

Punches I'm landing them Quick, we know what you standin for bitch
so fuck college courses he's already the marketing Man for the Crips
This was mild, ok lil concept but the punch itself didn't have much weight to it.
cause the blue means he never sided for the green, its another advertisement for his team
in real life this harsh picture has a Large Figure, quit Sizing up Your Dreams
Again I found this bar to be mild, diss just isn't landin very hard.
He ain't rhyming coool, definitely dont got his own Style tooo
And its over, even with that Composure Nobody will be SIGNin' You
This was aight, still not alot of power tho.
theres always disputes with his parents askin how, an his Cries at Home Now
An this is his way of acting out, rockin a bandana inside his own house
Haha, this was a pretty good jab...it got a laugh from me.
You should Pass right thru.. cuz for this laugh, Bigg'll get Smacked up Good
He's So Funny! Cuz our Response to his raps same to his sign, don't make us "Crack up" dude
You contradicted yourself in this bar homey, you claimed that I'm funny but then said my raps don't make you crack up. It makes more sense the other way,I'm not sure if that's what you originally intended or what...but if so this was a decent bar.

Overall, PJK wasn't jokin when he said he was goin in for this battle...he definately brought some heat. Oxy had a decent verse of his own, you had some good concepts in there but it lacked in power...those bars didn't have the sting to them that PJK's did, so that's where you came up short.

My vote goes to PoizonusJK

KOS

Alain El Khoury · 03-30-2011, 09:42 AM

PJK, nice verse, made me chuckle, most of your punches landed and were hitting heavily, good work with the multies too tho some was a bit forced (maybe just me) but still were decent..

Oxy, nice verse man, you had good ideas but seemed a bit light, i dunno if its PJKs impact made it sound like this, maybe you woulda had a chance against someone else, Overall decent verse but wasnt good enough to top PJK.

Vote: PJK

Urban Eskimo · 04-01-2011, 01:57 PM

PoizonusJK wins 4-0.

KOS

03-19-2011, 10:01 AM	#1
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Round 2: Oxy vs PoizonusJK Bash Biggs Tournament 10 Lines. Verses are due March 25th (Friday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped. __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

03-20-2011, 12:05 PM	#3
PoizonusJK Yes, it's me... Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are? Posts: 1,154	check __________________ www.soundcloud.com/74thStreetRecords www.soundclick.com/74thStreetRecords www.reverbnation.com/TheRealDetour www.myspace.com/74thStreetRecords ugh.. my word is my pride but wisdom is bleak, and that's a word from the wise serve to survive.. murder and bribe and when it got too heavy, i pushed my burdens aside

03-22-2011, 09:05 PM	#4
PoizonusJK Yes, it's me... Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are? Posts: 1,154	HEY OXY...go hard or go home, i'm on my fuck-you swag right now haha... you 'bout to get steam rolled-in-the-booth, ya bones folded-in-groups soon as i hit the block-in-Stroud, i'm poppin-rounds.. an you're holdin-the-proof lose ya soul-an-ya-shoes.. you never-wild, need a better-style,-face-it lookin like a decrepit-child-rapist, that lives in a pedophile's-basement real talk, i'm hard as Robocop-when-spittin.. homo,-stop-an-listen quit postin solo-shots-depictin ya lonely life an AT LEAST photoshop-a-chick-in!! think you a killer?-please-guy.. wanna pretend you a real-MC?-fine but you don't deal-an-squeeze-nines, ya biggest crime's stealin-street-signs so bounce-with-all-the-bitchin, i'm bringin down-the-walls-an-kitchen till the only things left intact, are that row of gin-flasks an ya alcohol-addiction ...fuck with it oxy, i dare you...pz __________________ www.soundcloud.com/74thStreetRecords www.soundclick.com/74thStreetRecords www.reverbnation.com/TheRealDetour www.myspace.com/74thStreetRecords ugh.. my word is my pride but wisdom is bleak, and that's a word from the wise serve to survive.. murder and bribe and when it got too heavy, i pushed my burdens aside Last edited by PoizonusJK; 03-22-2011 at 09:19 PM.

03-26-2011, 01:22 PM	#5
Oxy Pain Killers Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: East Coast Posts: 63	Punches I'm landing them Quick, we know what you standin for bitch so fuck college courses he's already the marketing Man for the Crips cause the blue means he never sided for the green, its another advertisement for his team in real life this harsh picture has a Large Figure, quit Sizing up Your Dreams He ain't rhyming coool, definitely dont got his own Style tooo And its over, even with that Composure Nobody will be SIGNin' You theres always disputes with his parents askin how, an his Cries at Home Now An this is his way of acting out, rockin a bandana inside his own house You should Pass right thru.. cuz for this laugh, Bigg'll get Smacked up Good He's So Funny! Cuz our Response to his raps same to his sign, don't make us "Crack up" dude Last edited by Oxy; 03-26-2011 at 05:42 PM. Reason: EXPOING LAST BAR

03-27-2011, 02:09 AM	#6
Elevated Design vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW Posts: 860	PoizonusJK: you 'bout to get steam rolled-in-the-booth, ya bones folded-in-groups soon as i hit the block-in-Stroud, i'm poppin-rounds.. an you're holdin-the-proof setup coulda been more relevant but nonetheless, this was a good opener lose ya soul-an-ya-shoes.. you never-wild, need a better-style,-face-it lookin like a decrepit-child-rapist, that lives in a pedophile's-basement haha, very solid real talk, i'm hard as Robocop-when-spittin.. homo,-stop-an-listen quit postin solo-shots-depictin ya lonely life an AT LEAST photoshop-a-chick-in!! slickening AND true think you a killer?-please-guy.. wanna pretend you a real-MC?-fine but you don't deal-an-squeeze-nines, ya biggest crime's stealin-street-signs average, i reckon you coulda flipped this harder so bounce-with-all-the-bitchin, i'm bringin down-the-walls-an-kitchen till the only things left intact, are that row of gin-flasks an ya alcohol-addiction not feeling the concept here Oxy: Punches I'm landing them Quick, we know what you standin for bitch so fuck college courses he's already the marketing Man for the Crips i don't know if i missed something here, but it was okay cause the blue means he never sided for the green, its another advertisement for his team in real life this harsh picture has a Large Figure, quit Sizing up Your Dreams rhymes were good, but the concept was soft He ain't rhyming coool, definitely dont got his own Style tooo And its over, even with that Composure Nobody will be SIGNin' You was not a bad idea, although the punch is kinda indirect theres always disputes with his parents askin how, an his Cries at Home Now An this is his way of acting out, rockin a bandana inside his own house idk, this was pretty light You should Pass right thru.. cuz for this laugh, Bigg'll get Smacked up Good He's So Funny! Cuz our Response to his raps same to his sign, don't make us "Crack up" dude averge pj, you started off well with some funny, well schemaged rhymes, but faltered off towards the end there. ox, i thought your verse was a decent read, but you didn't have anything very humorous or hard. some of your punches seemed kinda unclear to me, and you gotta come more direct i feel. you had good rhymes for the most part i'm going with p for the w, cause his shit was better basically *VOTE: PoizonusJ* __________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L

03-20-2011, 10:48 AM	#2
Oxy Pain Killers Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: East Coast Posts: 63	check,

03-27-2011, 04:16 AM	#7
NostradaVus Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 88	Its past 5am here and I don't wanna do a full breakdown right now...but I'll try and get one in ASAP...BIGGS, Don't close this until I have my full say if you come to close it...anyways as it stands right now Im voting PJK for reasons soon to be explained. Peace, Im crashing. __________________ I'll come thru with kung fu, you can call me Wu-tang cuz I'm running thru you... like I was Lui Kang.

03-28-2011, 03:33 PM	#8
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	PJK you 'bout to get steam rolled-in-the-booth, ya bones folded-in-groups soon as i hit the block-in-Stroud, i'm poppin-rounds.. an you're holdin-the-proof This was more of a flex rhyme rather than diss, but it was relevant to the picture and a good opener...it just didn't have alot of power to it. lose ya soul-an-ya-shoes.. you never-wild, need a better-style,-face-it lookin like a decrepit-child-rapist, that lives in a pedophile's-basement Hahaha, this was a solid jab...tight multi in that 2nd line too. real talk, i'm hard as Robocop-when-spittin.. homo,-stop-an-listen quit postin solo-shots-depictin ya lonely life an AT LEAST photoshop-a-chick-in!! Keepin it tight on the multi tip with this bar too, I've been missin these types of rhymes in your battles lately so it's good to see you bringin that swag in again. This was another nice jab, and I plan on havin pictures of me with my girl/people in the rounds to come but don't think it's because of your influence in this bar lol. think you a killer?-please-guy.. wanna pretend you a real-MC?-fine but you don't deal-an-squeeze-nines, ya biggest crime's stealin-street-signs Haha, this was a simple punch but it landed on target. so bounce-with-all-the-bitchin, i'm bringin down-the-walls-an-kitchen till the only things left intact, are that row of gin-flasks an ya alcohol-addiction This was a decent closer, those aren't flasks on the ledge they're hockey trophy's from when I was a kid (it's my mom's house) lol...this was still an aight finish tho. Oxy Punches I'm landing them Quick, we know what you standin for bitch so fuck college courses he's already the marketing Man for the Crips This was mild, ok lil concept but the punch itself didn't have much weight to it. cause the blue means he never sided for the green, its another advertisement for his team in real life this harsh picture has a Large Figure, quit Sizing up Your Dreams Again I found this bar to be mild, diss just isn't landin very hard. He ain't rhyming coool, definitely dont got his own Style tooo And its over, even with that Composure Nobody will be SIGNin' You This was aight, still not alot of power tho. theres always disputes with his parents askin how, an his Cries at Home Now An this is his way of acting out, rockin a bandana inside his own house Haha, this was a pretty good jab...it got a laugh from me. You should Pass right thru.. cuz for this laugh, Bigg'll get Smacked up Good He's So Funny! Cuz our Response to his raps same to his sign, don't make us "Crack up" dude You contradicted yourself in this bar homey, you claimed that I'm funny but then said my raps don't make you crack up. It makes more sense the other way,I'm not sure if that's what you originally intended or what...but if so this was a decent bar. Overall, PJK wasn't jokin when he said he was goin in for this battle...he definately brought some heat. Oxy had a decent verse of his own, you had some good concepts in there but it lacked in power...those bars didn't have the sting to them that PJK's did, so that's where you came up short. My vote goes to PoizonusJK KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

03-30-2011, 09:42 AM	#9
Alain El Khoury Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 83	PJK, nice verse, made me chuckle, most of your punches landed and were hitting heavily, good work with the multies too tho some was a bit forced (maybe just me) but still were decent.. Oxy, nice verse man, you had good ideas but seemed a bit light, i dunno if its PJKs impact made it sound like this, maybe you woulda had a chance against someone else, Overall decent verse but wasnt good enough to top PJK. Vote: PJK __________________ I GOT NO ATTITUDE, ATTITUDE GOT ME..

04-01-2011, 01:57 PM	#10
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	PoizonusJK wins 4-0. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

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