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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| Bash Biggs Tournament ![]() 10 Lines. Verses are due March 25th (Friday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.
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| burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI
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__________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface |
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| vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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burt blaze... again, wtf!? check
__________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L |
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| vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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fuck ya hoodies and rings, you just an e-thug please bruz you gotta be a double-D cup at least, huh?? /// he eats so much pudding that he couldn't be thin i mean, look at his chin, somebody book him a gym /// with woolly skin and you know he loves pulling his thing cause when Pee-Wee's in his hands... THAT'S what's pulling his strings!! ^^ /// he looks ill, so is he planning to die? is there air within that giant bag you're standing inside?!?! no really though /// what's the plastic FOR this spastic whore looks trapped in a quarantined-jap radioactive core ///
__________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L |
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| burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI
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Thanks for the photo submission, and permission to commence the dissin Won't see Biggs in a tourney when his lines are dull as his facial expression So this hack get lit by the flashin pic, he snapped it quick Like Dale Earnhardt's neck when he crashed his whip Ain't dropped a verse in a while ...maybe cause you comin real as that wall made of plastic bricks Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him You displayin' gear that makes me think you're white trash with trailers near Or that you campeign with queers sportin a hat for the Champagne of Beers* * - Miller High Life's slogan is the Champagne of Beers...and I honestly have always associated that brand to trailer trash
__________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface Last edited by Burt Blaze; 03-25-2011 at 04:57 AM. |
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| vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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holy fuck you got over 2100 posts?? last time i checked you were at like 1000 or so... damn... free post... my bad... btw, i see you brought your multi game, GL
__________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L |
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| Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Cap City KY
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i gotta say this is one of my favorite ED verses, and i thought 4 sure after i read his verse this battle was his.. & then i read burts verse & i was like.. damn this is on of my favorite Burt verses, or maybe im drunk.. i dunno.. either way im goin with ED here but i think Burt had a respectable performance, i guess the better wording sold me VOTE- ED
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| Yes, it's me... Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are?
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this was a close battle...i liked some of what ED had, the closer was nice... burt had some cool stuff in there, i liked the misdirection on the dale earnhardt shit, but the first line not rhymin really threw me off...little awkward in the wordin in parts of the verse as well... ED didn't absolutely kill it, but he threw some nice ideas out, includin the is there any air in there line... vote=ED...pz
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| Junior Member Join Date: May 2010
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| B. Blaze Thanks for the photo submission, and permission to commence the dissin Won't see Biggs in a tourney when his lines are dull as his facial expression Nahhh...wording was confusing. Very weak opener So this hack get lit by the flashin pic, he snapped it quick Like Dale Earnhardt's neck when he crashed his whip Ain't dropped a verse in a while ...maybe cause you comin real as that wall made of plastic bricks Killer flow and I'm diggin' the "real as that wall made of plastic bricks" line...nice Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him Hahaha...this is nice good flow and good observation. well executed You displayin' gear that makes me think you're white trash with trailers near Or that you campeign with queers sportin a hat for the Champagne of Beers* Lol...solid closer ED fuck ya hoodies and rings, you just an e-thug please bruz you gotta be a double-D cup at least, huh?? /// This was way too basic and very weak for an opener IMO he eats so much pudding that he couldn't be thin i mean, look at his chin, somebody book him a gym /// Lol...again, pretty basic...but I really like the flow in this one and although it was simple, it was comical....not bad with woolly skin and you know he loves pulling his thing cause when Pee-Wee's in his hands... THAT'S what's pulling his strings!! ^^ /// Nahh he looks ill, so is he planning to die? is there air within that giant bag you're standing inside?!?! This was iight. It could have been executed much better no really though /// what's the plastic FOR this spastic whore looks trapped in a quarantined-jap radioactive core /// The flow right here is EXCELLENT. But, although it sounds hot, the substance isn't as outstanding as the flow My vote goes to: Burt Blaze I've seen a lot better from ED. His flow was definitely nice, but the majority of his lines lacked creativity and weren't structured as well as Burt's lines IMO. Honestly, I was surprised to see ED drop this verse because I usually like readin' his verses as they've got a high-quality flow AND hard-hitting punches...but this particular verse just didn't do it for me. As far as Burt goes...quite frankly, I think this is one of your better verses. Besides the half-assed opener (lol), this verse was great in every aspect IMO. I see you spent some time incorporating multis into this one. But, even though you focused on multis, it doesn't seem as if you gave up on the actual substance of your lines...excellent verse overall. And, this is one of the few verses (from Round 1 AND Round 2) that actually looks like something you'd expect to see in a tourney battle Good job, both of you. Have a good weekend! Last edited by Monaco; 03-26-2011 at 07:01 AM. |
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| Pain Killers Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: East Coast
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fuck ya hoodies and rings, you just an e-thug please bruz you gotta be a double-D cup at least, huh?? /// kind of a weak opener imo he eats so much pudding that he couldn't be thin i mean, look at his chin, somebody book him a gym /// lol this made me laugh a lil not bad with woolly skin and you know he loves pulling his thing cause when Pee-Wee's in his hands... THAT'S what's pulling his strings!! ^^ /// hahaha damn this was a sick bar he looks ill, so is he planning to die? is there air within that giant bag you're standing inside?!?! no really though /// ehhh sorta weak with no punch what's the plastic FOR this spastic whore looks trapped in a quarantined-jap radioactive core ehh again, just slightly bteter then the previous bar but still a lil sketchy 2 good bars and a few slip ups , not bad Thanks for the photo submission, and permission to commence the dissin Won't see Biggs in a tourney when his lines are dull as his facial expression very straight forward punch So this hack get lit by the flashin pic, he snapped it quick Like Dale Earnhardt's neck when he crashed his whip not rreally feelin this one, not that heavy Ain't dropped a verse in a while ...maybe cause you comin real as that wall made of plastic bricks this was better, but i personally woulda rhymed something in the set up isntead of the previous bar but best line so far from u Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him lol decent haha You displayin' gear that makes me think you're white trash with trailers near Or that you campeign with queers sportin a hat for the Champagne of Beers* alright closer, pretty straight forward again same as other guy, got 2 bars i like then the rest is alright my vote will go to burt though, they both had 2 decent bars and the rest were pretty average or less, cept Burts other bars were better flow/multies and punches were more direct , ED's others were similiar as well except they kinda were very bland in comparison |
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| | #11 |
| vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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| haha... voters are so polite these days uppin
__________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L |
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| burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI
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2 ~ 2 uppin
__________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface |
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| Elevated Design fuck ya hoodies and rings, you just an e-thug please bruz you gotta be a double-D cup at least, huh?? /// I like the way you started this, but the 2nd line I wasn't feelin...fat jokes are gettin played in this tourney and that picture is from when I was into alot of drugs and weighed 25 pounds less than I do now. he eats so much pudding that he couldn't be thin i mean, look at his chin, somebody book him a gym /// Not feelin this bar either, too generic. with woolly skin and you know he loves pulling his thing cause when Pee-Wee's in his hands... THAT'S what's pulling his strings!! ^^ /// This was ok, still mostly mild tho...I was lookin forward to what both of you would say about Pee Wee but I didn't feel this had much power to it. he looks ill, so is he planning to die? is there air within that giant bag you're standing inside?!?! This was aight, but the diss was too indirect to land very hard, no really though /// what's the plastic FOR this spastic whore looks trapped in a quarantined-jap radioactive core /// Now this was pretty good, it's your best bar in my opinion. That plastic brick background was put up for jokes cause Rydah posted some pictures in his room which had a real brick wall lol. Burt Thanks for the photo submission, and permission to commence the dissin Won't see Biggs in a tourney when his lines are dull as his facial expression Good opener here, a solid jab at me while usin the picture in reference. So this hack get lit by the flashin pic, he snapped it quick Like Dale Earnhardt's neck when he crashed his whip Ain't dropped a verse in a while ...maybe cause you comin real as that wall made of plastic bricks Nice multi's and punch, another good bar. Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him This is easily my favourite bar of round 2, it was a solid punch and made me laugh pretty hard too lol.You displayin' gear that makes me think you're white trash with trailers near Or that you campeign with queers sportin a hat for the Champagne of Beers* Nice with the multi's again and the diss was decent too. High Life is a cheap beer where you live? Cause around here it's not, it's usually my summer time beer...I don't know anybody other than me that drinks it tho. Overall, I think this was a clear cut victory for Burt...the only bar I felt in ED's verse was his closer, and I found Burt's verse was consistent with hits...and his Pee Wee bar was tight so he gets the vote from me. My vote goes to Burt Blaze KOS
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| burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI
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thanks for the votes 3~2 uppin
__________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface | |
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| ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown.
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| Mayhammin: he had the double d line.. jokes.. look at his chin, somebody book him a gym /// with woolly skin... Quite clever if u ask me..relating to the book he's holding wit the gym.. is there air within that giant bag you're standing inside?!?! in the pic it looks like he's inside a bag. so descent.. the peewee line he had confused me but i think hes talking about peewee playing wacking it like he did in the theater yrs ago.. Burnt Toast: Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him Roflazoola!!!!! dude also had the queers n beers line..descent.. However im feeling only a few lines from burnt, that peewee line was fireworks....while marty boy had more jabs.. this is a very close battle.. With that saidParty Marty gets this by a hair..cause he kept jabbing..
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| burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI
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I s'pose Party Marty is ED. 3~3 uppin.
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| vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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btw, the lines: and you know he loves pulling his thing cause when Pee-Wee's in his hands... THAT'S what's pulling his strings!! ^^ /// is referring to his draw STRING being caught in the pee-wee box, and also his love for jacking off his pee-wee. fyi... 'pulling his strings' is an expression, so this line would also be known as a play on expression... a very over looked punch if you ask me UPPIN'
__________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L Last edited by Elevated Design; 04-01-2011 at 04:21 AM. |
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| 3-3 on the upps. KOS
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| The Don Corleone Join Date: May 2005 Location: England
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Elevated's verse felt very flexy. It dissed Bigg's, but there wasn't much behind the lines, no real concept to most of them. The Pee-Wee line was the exception, which was ok. Burt started with a solid line, it was probably the stand out of the battle. Comin real was ok. Pee-Wee line was ok. I wasn't feeling the closer. Burt was more consistent and had more to his concepts than Elevated, so he takes this. v/ Burt Blaze |
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| Yes, it's me... Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are?
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| archivin for future personal references if we ever battle again...
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| burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI
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4~3 uppin
__________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface |
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| vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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^^ na fuck it, you got this one burt. let's get this next round cracking
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| Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens
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This battle was ok, i was expecting some fire from two vets but there was only line that made me laugh alil: Burt Blaze "Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him" This was the only line with real heat that made me laugh so my Vote goes Blaze
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| Burt wins 5-3. KOS
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