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Old 03-19-2011, 10:22 AM   #1
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Old 03-21-2011, 04:46 AM   #2
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burt blaze... again, wtf!?

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fuck ya hoodies and rings, you just an e-thug
please bruz
you gotta be a double-D cup at least, huh?? ///
he eats so much pudding that he couldn't be thin
i mean, look at his chin, somebody book him a gym ///
with woolly skin
and you know he loves pulling his thing
cause when Pee-Wee's in his hands... THAT'S what's pulling his strings!! ^^ ///
he looks ill, so is he planning to die?
is there air within that giant bag you're standing inside?!?!
no really though ///
what's the plastic FOR
this spastic whore looks trapped in a quarantined-jap radioactive core ///
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Thanks for the photo submission, and permission to commence the dissin
Won't see Biggs in a tourney when his lines are dull as his facial expression
So this hack get lit by the flashin pic, he snapped it quick
Like Dale Earnhardt's neck when he crashed his whip
Ain't dropped a verse in a while
...maybe cause you comin real as that wall made of plastic bricks
Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often
Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him
You displayin' gear that makes me think you're white trash with trailers near
Or that you campeign with queers sportin a hat for the Champagne of Beers*

* - Miller High Life's slogan is the Champagne of Beers...and I honestly have always associated that brand to trailer trash
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Old 03-25-2011, 01:01 AM   #6
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holy fuck you got over 2100 posts?? last time i checked you were at like 1000 or so...

damn... free post... my bad... btw, i see you brought your multi game, GL
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i gotta say this is one of my favorite ED verses, and i thought 4 sure after i read his verse this battle was his.. & then i read burts verse & i was like.. damn this is on of my favorite Burt verses, or maybe im drunk.. i dunno.. either way im goin with ED here but i think Burt had a respectable performance, i guess the better wording sold me

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this was a close battle...i liked some of what ED had, the closer was nice...

burt had some cool stuff in there, i liked the misdirection on the dale earnhardt shit, but the first line not rhymin really threw me off...little awkward in the wordin in parts of the verse as well...

ED didn't absolutely kill it, but he threw some nice ideas out, includin the is there any air in there line...

vote=ED...pz
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Thanks for the photo submission, and permission to commence the dissin
Won't see Biggs in a tourney when his lines are dull as his facial expression
Nahhh...wording was confusing. Very weak opener

So this hack get lit by the flashin pic, he snapped it quick
Like Dale Earnhardt's neck when he crashed his whip
Ain't dropped a verse in a while
...maybe cause you comin real as that wall made of plastic bricks
Killer flow and I'm diggin' the "real as that wall made of plastic bricks" line...nice

Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often
Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him
Hahaha...this is nice good flow and good observation. well executed

You displayin' gear that makes me think you're white trash with trailers near
Or that you campeign with queers sportin a hat for the Champagne of Beers*
Lol...solid closer


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fuck ya hoodies and rings, you just an e-thug
please bruz
you gotta be a double-D cup at least, huh?? ///
This was way too basic and very weak for an opener IMO

he eats so much pudding that he couldn't be thin
i mean, look at his chin, somebody book him a gym ///
Lol...again, pretty basic...but I really like the flow in this one and although it was simple, it was comical....not bad

with woolly skin
and you know he loves pulling his thing
cause when Pee-Wee's in his hands... THAT'S what's pulling his strings!! ^^ ///
Nahh

he looks ill, so is he planning to die?
is there air within that giant bag you're standing inside?!?!
This was iight. It could have been executed much better

no really though ///
what's the plastic FOR
this spastic whore looks trapped in a quarantined-jap radioactive core ///
The flow right here is EXCELLENT. But, although it sounds hot, the substance isn't as outstanding as the flow

My vote goes to: Burt Blaze

I've seen a lot better from ED. His flow was definitely nice, but the majority of his lines lacked creativity and weren't structured as well as Burt's lines IMO. Honestly, I was surprised to see ED drop this verse because I usually like readin' his verses as they've got a high-quality flow AND hard-hitting punches...but this particular verse just didn't do it for me.

As far as Burt goes...quite frankly, I think this is one of your better verses. Besides the half-assed opener (lol), this verse was great in every aspect IMO. I see you spent some time incorporating multis into this one. But, even though you focused on multis, it doesn't seem as if you gave up on the actual substance of your lines...excellent verse overall. And, this is one of the few verses (from Round 1 AND Round 2) that actually looks like something you'd expect to see in a tourney battle

Good job, both of you.

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fuck ya hoodies and rings, you just an e-thug
please bruz
you gotta be a double-D cup at least, huh?? ///
kind of a weak opener imo

he eats so much pudding that he couldn't be thin
i mean, look at his chin, somebody book him a gym ///
lol this made me laugh a lil not bad

with woolly skin
and you know he loves pulling his thing
cause when Pee-Wee's in his hands... THAT'S what's pulling his strings!! ^^ ///
hahaha damn this was a sick bar

he looks ill, so is he planning to die?
is there air within that giant bag you're standing inside?!?!
no really though ///
ehhh sorta weak with no punch

what's the plastic FOR
this spastic whore looks trapped in a quarantined-jap radioactive core
ehh again, just slightly bteter then the previous bar but still a lil sketchy


2 good bars and a few slip ups , not bad


Thanks for the photo submission, and permission to commence the dissin
Won't see Biggs in a tourney when his lines are dull as his facial expression
very straight forward punch

So this hack get lit by the flashin pic, he snapped it quick
Like Dale Earnhardt's neck when he crashed his whip
not rreally feelin this one, not that heavy

Ain't dropped a verse in a while
...maybe cause you comin real as that wall made of plastic bricks
this was better, but i personally woulda rhymed something in the set up isntead of the previous bar but best line so far from u

Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often
Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him
lol decent haha

You displayin' gear that makes me think you're white trash with trailers near
Or that you campeign with queers sportin a hat for the Champagne of Beers*
alright closer, pretty straight forward again

same as other guy, got 2 bars i like then the rest is alright


my vote will go to burt though, they both had 2 decent bars and the rest were pretty average or less, cept Burts other bars were better flow/multies and punches were more direct , ED's others were similiar as well except they kinda were very bland in comparison
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Good job, both of you.

Have a good weekend!
haha... voters are so polite these days

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2 ~ 2

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Old 03-29-2011, 03:09 PM   #13
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fuck ya hoodies and rings, you just an e-thug
please bruz
you gotta be a double-D cup at least, huh?? ///
I like the way you started this, but the 2nd line I wasn't feelin...fat jokes are gettin played in this tourney and that picture is from when I was into alot of drugs and weighed 25 pounds less than I do now.
he eats so much pudding that he couldn't be thin
i mean, look at his chin, somebody book him a gym ///
Not feelin this bar either, too generic.
with woolly skin
and you know he loves pulling his thing
cause when Pee-Wee's in his hands... THAT'S what's pulling his strings!! ^^ ///
This was ok, still mostly mild tho...I was lookin forward to what both of you would say about Pee Wee but I didn't feel this had much power to it.
he looks ill, so is he planning to die?
is there air within that giant bag you're standing inside?!?!
This was aight, but the diss was too indirect to land very hard,
no really though ///
what's the plastic FOR
this spastic whore looks trapped in a quarantined-jap radioactive core ///
Now this was pretty good, it's your best bar in my opinion. That plastic brick background was put up for jokes cause Rydah posted some pictures in his room which had a real brick wall lol.

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Won't see Biggs in a tourney when his lines are dull as his facial expression
Good opener here, a solid jab at me while usin the picture in reference.
So this hack get lit by the flashin pic, he snapped it quick
Like Dale Earnhardt's neck when he crashed his whip
Ain't dropped a verse in a while
...maybe cause you comin real as that wall made of plastic bricks
Nice multi's and punch, another good bar.
Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often
Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him
This is easily my favourite bar of round 2, it was a solid punch and made me laugh pretty hard too lol.
You displayin' gear that makes me think you're white trash with trailers near
Or that you campeign with queers sportin a hat for the Champagne of Beers*
Nice with the multi's again and the diss was decent too. High Life is a cheap beer where you live? Cause around here it's not, it's usually my summer time beer...I don't know anybody other than me that drinks it tho.


Overall, I think this was a clear cut victory for Burt...the only bar I felt in ED's verse was his closer, and I found Burt's verse was consistent with hits...and his Pee Wee bar was tight so he gets the vote from me.

My vote goes to Burt Blaze


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Nice with the multi's again and the diss was decent too. High Life is a cheap beer where you live? Cause around here it's not, it's usually my summer time beer...I don't know anybody other than me that drinks it tho.
not the cheapest, but really the only people into it are rednecks and trailer folk

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Mayhammin:
he had the double d line..

jokes..

look at his chin, somebody book him a gym ///
with woolly skin
...

Quite clever if u ask me..relating to the book he's holding wit the gym..

is there air within that giant bag you're standing inside?!?!

in the pic it looks like he's inside a bag. so descent..

the peewee line he had confused me but i think hes talking about peewee playing wacking it like he did in the theater yrs ago..




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Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often
Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him


Roflazoola!!!!!

dude also had the queers n beers line..descent..

However im feeling only a few lines from burnt, that peewee line was fireworks....while marty boy had more jabs..
this is a very close battle.. With that saidParty Marty gets this by a hair..cause he kept jabbing..
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I s'pose Party Marty is ED. 3~3 uppin.
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btw, the lines:

and you know he loves pulling his thing
cause when Pee-Wee's in his hands... THAT'S what's pulling his strings!! ^^ ///

is referring to his draw STRING being caught in the pee-wee box, and also his love for jacking off his pee-wee. fyi... 'pulling his strings' is an expression, so this line would also be known as a play on expression... a very over looked punch if you ask me




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3-3 on the upps.


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Elevated's verse felt very flexy. It dissed Bigg's, but there wasn't much behind the lines, no real concept to most of them. The Pee-Wee line was the exception, which was ok. Burt started with a solid line, it was probably the stand out of the battle. Comin real was ok. Pee-Wee line was ok. I wasn't feeling the closer.

Burt was more consistent and had more to his concepts than Elevated, so he takes this.

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that picture is from when I was into alot of drugs and weighed 25 pounds less than I do now.
archivin for future personal references if we ever battle again...
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^^ na fuck it, you got this one burt. let's get this next round cracking
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This battle was ok, i was expecting some fire from two vets but there was only line that made me laugh alil:

Burt Blaze

"Urb looks like a pedophile waitin for boys to play grab ass often
Even Pee-Wee is screamin for somebody to get this fag's hands off him"

This was the only line with real heat that made me laugh so my Vote goes

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Burt wins 5-3.


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