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03-19-2011, 10:25 AM
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST  Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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|  Round 2: god 0f war vs NostradaVus Bash Biggs Tournament  10 Lines. Verses are due March 25th (Friday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.
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03-19-2011, 02:20 PM
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03-19-2011, 06:04 PM
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Check, I think Im gonna have fun with this one haha
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03-23-2011, 01:50 AM
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you might not ever "heel"... but she MOVED ON AND FLIRTS I know your bitch walks all over you, the PROOFS ON THAT SHIRT*(Check pink t-shirt on left) YOU'VE GOT A THIRST...DARE EXPLAIN, PLEASE TO THE WORLD you don't PAIR N' LAY, SLEEP, but still SHARE THE SAME SHEETS WITH YA GIRL?(2 beds) you AINT LEAVIN THE PEARL...I bet this FOOL GOES FER THE GUYS started FROM HIS SLIPPERS, for RUNNING QUICKER to pull the WOOL OVER YA EYES (Slippers look like they are made from wool) he loves a BONER SURPRISE, he dont TOUCH DRUGS, but hes FUCKED UP he ain't READYING FOR BUD PUFFS...he's just STEADYING HIS BUTT PLUG HEAVY INTO NUT RUBS...please B-Boys, FIRE THIS MAN reHIRE HIM AN', FIRE AGAIN, he couldn't be a "stand-up guy' hes too TIRED TO STAND(Sitting in pic) Peace, Good Luck GOW
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03-25-2011, 09:26 PM
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How much longer you need?
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03-26-2011, 07:10 AM
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This was nice, too bad ur opponent didn't show up...I was waitin' to see this battle  |
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03-27-2011, 01:20 PM
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| Yes, it's me...  Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are?
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hey i post at netcees where he an beyond do, so i'm-a let 'em now...don't DQ 'em hopefully, he's around to be honest he never posts here outside of tourneys so he probably forgot...
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03-27-2011, 06:31 PM
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man i forgot all bout this is ti to late yall need to let me know if it is keep me in urban i jus forgot dawg had a bad week |
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03-27-2011, 07:08 PM
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if my longevity at this site has any influence, i say keep the battle open...nostra came with that fire, an i'd hate to see it get wasted on a no-show...just key somethin up gow, YOU CAN DO IT!!
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03-28-2011, 02:29 PM
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did you forget again?
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03-28-2011, 04:37 PM
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Biggs...whats the deal with this...you extending this stil???l...cat checked back in a couple days ago but still hasnt responded.
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03-29-2011, 01:14 AM
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confirm or deny
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03-29-2011, 01:49 AM
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^^^LOL^^^
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03-29-2011, 07:07 PM
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How much of an extension does this dude need??? I saw him on net-cees.com and he told me he'll drop...I dropped almost a week ago.
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03-29-2011, 10:33 PM
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| vital sines  Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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this is an outrage... i'll break this shit down if he doesn't show
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03-29-2011, 10:53 PM
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LOL...I think I was finally able to convince him to drop
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03-29-2011, 11:58 PM
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haha word...i ain't never seen him just no-show in a tourney, i said y'all should keep it open cuz i know it'd be a dope battle an i figured once i reminded him he'd get on it, but i guess dude's got a bunch of shit goin on right now... hopefully he comes thru, cuz i'd like to see it namean...
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03-30-2011, 06:53 PM
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Anyone willing to break this down, it would be appreciated...I don't think this cat is showing.
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03-31-2011, 12:29 AM
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you might not ever "heel"... but she MOVED ON AND FLIRTS I know your bitch walks all over you, the PROOFS ON THAT SHIRT*(Check pink t-shirt on left) ^^^heel wordplay is way too corny for people to be usin in 2011...that said, the punch itself was cool...nice scheme...fuck an explanation, ESPECIALLY at the end of the line...if you MUST, throw one at the end of the verse, but even that i tend to shy away from... YOU'VE GOT A THIRST...DARE EXPLAIN, PLEASE TO THE WORLD you don't PAIR N' LAY, SLEEP, but still SHARE THE SAME SHEETS WITH YA GIRL?(2 beds) ^^^nice multies, tho' 'pair an lay, sleep' was awkwardly worded...good idea an punch tho', i just think you shoulda found a different method of beginnin the second line...i get you wanted to play off the scheme, but this is one of those situations where you might shoulda just stuck with what you had scheme-wise an focused on properly settin up the diss, especially since the set up is done completely in one line (the actual set up line doesn't reference the punch really, tho' it leads into it - however, to really lead into it, second shoulda started with "why" as in please explain why...etc.)... you AINT LEAVIN THE PEARL...I bet this FOOL GOES FER THE GUYS started FROM HIS SLIPPERS, for RUNNING QUICKER to pull the WOOL OVER YA EYES (Slippers look like they are made from wool) ^^^you capped ain't haha i see...didn't like this punch tho', i think i told you that in that PM...in fact, i just remembered i already broke this down, so i'm not sure why i'm doin it again lmao but fuck it...lol if this breakdown is mad different from the last one... he loves a BONER SURPRISE, he dont TOUCH DRUGS, but hes FUCKED UP he ain't READYING FOR BUD PUFFS...he's just STEADYING HIS BUTT PLUG ^^^i remember tellin you i woulda like to see the first line's schemes have the same extension the second's do (somethin like don't use methamphetamines or touch drugs, don't know about fucked up part lol)...line of the battle easily tho', very nasty visual, i kinda mad at you for that haha... HEAVY INTO NUT RUBS...please B-Boys, FIRE THIS MAN reHIRE HIM AN', FIRE AGAIN, he couldn't be a "stand-up guy' hes too TIRED TO STAND(Sitting in pic) ^^^cool punch, but not the best one... 86 the explanations an you'll be good...'tis a shame gow didn't show, as i said above when i put my rep on the line lmao it woulda been a good match up for sure...pz
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03-31-2011, 01:35 AM
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^Respect^
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03-31-2011, 02:37 PM
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you might not ever "heel"... but she MOVED ON AND FLIRTS I know your bitch walks all over you, the PROOFS ON THAT SHIRT*(Check pink t-shirt on left) I think the set up could've been done better but this was a nice bar still, I like how you added the "heel" part in there too it went well with the punch. YOU'VE GOT A THIRST...DARE EXPLAIN, PLEASE TO THE WORLD you don't PAIR N' LAY, SLEEP, but still SHARE THE SAME SHEETS WITH YA GIRL?(2 beds) Haha, that's one of the spare bedrooms at my moms place...this was pretty good tho. Only thing I can mention is the "you've got a thirst" at the beginning of the bar, it didn't have any relevance to this bar or the last...so I saw it as a pointless multi. you AINT LEAVIN THE PEARL...I bet this FOOL GOES FER THE GUYS started FROM HIS SLIPPERS, for RUNNING QUICKER to pull the WOOL OVER YA EYES (Slippers look like they are made from wool) This was an aight concept, but I'm not feelin the way you executed it...just didn't find it to have much power compared to the rest of your bars. he loves a BONER SURPRISE, he dont TOUCH DRUGS, but hes FUCKED UP he ain't READYING FOR BUD PUFFS...he's just STEADYING HIS BUTT PLUG  I was wonderin how you'd come at me in regards to the zong, this was jokes lol.HEAVY INTO NUT RUBS...please B-Boys, FIRE THIS MAN reHIRE HIM AN', FIRE AGAIN, he couldn't be a "stand-up guy' hes too TIRED TO STAND(Sitting in pic) Good closer, not exactly a haymaker but still a nice punch. This was a solid verse homey, too bad god 0f war no showed. KOS
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03-31-2011, 03:09 PM
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| NostradaVus wins. god 0f war no shows. KOS
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