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03-19-2011, 10:30 AM
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST  Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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|  Round 2: Black7series vs MeSsIaH Bash Biggs Tournament  10 Lines. Verses are due March 25th (Friday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.
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03-19-2011, 11:20 AM
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LOL...checkin in
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03-20-2011, 12:49 AM
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check
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03-21-2011, 01:59 AM
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for christs sake do some shoppin dawg.. it cant hurt its halloween, on New Years you was rockin the same shirt!!** get a clue biggs, you aint gon' Neva get ya mack on the truth is you look Better wit the mask on im clever wit the rap songs, sharp as a dart cousin while Biggs aint all the way there upstairs like his carved pumpkin this starved blumpkin ate its fuckin brains, all this food is a problem i even heard they had to surgicaly remove the spoon from his jaws man i'll catch em a lil wheezy,coughin', & pull out a milli in the mood to get shots in like ok youre a goon biggs, but whats a goon to a Goblin! **He wore same shirt in my last battle, it was a New Years eve pic
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03-21-2011, 07:43 AM
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You're too funny for words... Therefore, this isn't the wittiest scripture I've wrote, b!tch I can't blame him cuz he ugly... so he has to use the shittiest tricks to approach chicks No homo, but that's probably the prettiest picture you've posted* where's his Trick-or-Treat basket, did this pig swallow that too? He all excited, cuz Halloween the only time Bigg's got a BOO He tryna give a tough pose...like he's a pimp Well, you look like a joke...someone needs to give this skeez a primp He was tryna be a crossbreed for Halloween...hippopotamus in zebra prints He's tryna balance his toes...cuz he apparently BIGG Even that Jack-O-Lantern knows that he ain't the one scarin the kids *in other words, its the prettiest pic cuz his face is hidden Last edited by Monaco; 03-21-2011 at 08:46 PM. |
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03-21-2011, 10:02 AM
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lets get some votes
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03-21-2011, 01:28 PM
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thats 12 lines mayne
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03-21-2011, 01:42 PM
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ehh i c what ya doin wit those 2 lines, your good hommie
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03-22-2011, 01:10 PM
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lol...no prob man, as u already figured out - i just split the first two lines in half. anywayz, uppin for votes  |
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03-22-2011, 05:16 PM
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| MeSsIaH for christs sake do some shoppin dawg.. it cant hurt its halloween, on New Years you was rockin the same shirt!!** Hahaha, this was a solid hit, and my favourite bar of the battle...good stuff doggy. get a clue biggs, you aint gon' Neva get ya mack on the truth is you look Better wit the mask on This was ok, it's a pretty common joke to say around Halloween tho so it doesn't get much credit in a battle. im clever wit the rap songs, sharp as a dart cousin while Biggs aint all the way there upstairs like his carved pumpkin The wording in the 2nd line was abit choppy, but as far as the punch goes I thought it was pretty good. this starved blumpkin ate its fuckin brains, all this food is a problem i even heard they had to surgicaly remove the spoon from his jaws man Wasn't feelin this one homey, reminds me of 8 Mile too lol. i'll catch em a lil wheezy,coughin', & pull out a milli in the mood to get shots in like ok youre a goon biggs, but whats a goon to a Goblin! This was decent in regards to the picture but it lacks weight. Black7series You're too funny for words... Therefore, this isn't the wittiest scripture I've wrote, b!tch I can't blame him cuz he ugly... so he has to use the shittiest tricks to approach chicks No homo, but that's probably the prettiest picture you've posted* This is on the same level as MeSsIaH's 2nd bar, stuff like this is very common to say whenever someone has a mask on. where's his Trick-or-Treat basket, did this pig swallow that too? He all excited, cuz Halloween the only time Bigg's got a BOO I'm likin the punch here, but I feel you could've set it up better so it would've landed with more power...mentioning a chick somewhere in there would've helped. It's still good tho, my favourite bar in your verse. He tryna give a tough pose...like he's a pimp Well, you look like a joke...someone needs to give this skeez a primp He was tryna be a crossbreed for Halloween...hippopotamus in zebra prints This was aight, ok lil fat joke. He's tryna balance his toes...cuz he apparently BIGG Even that Jack-O-Lantern knows that he ain't the one scarin the kids This was mild, not really much power to it. Overall, this was a really close battle...tough one to call right away. When it comes to my favourite bar from each cat I'm feelin MeSsIaH's landed harder, and my next favourite bars were MeSsIaH's carved pumpkin line, and Black7's crossbreed line...and again I'm feelin MeSsIaH's. Other than that you both had a weak bar, a generic joke bar and a fat joke...but I'm feelin MeSsIaH took this by a small margin, he had the crisper jabs. My vote goes to MeSsIaH KOS
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03-23-2011, 06:18 PM
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Thx for the vote, Urb. Let's get some more - uppin'
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03-23-2011, 10:42 PM
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| MeSsIaH for christs sake do some shoppin dawg.. it cant hurt its halloween, on New Years you was rockin the same shirt!!** vs Black7Series where's his Trick-or-Treat basket, did this pig swallow that too? He all excited, cuz Halloween the only time Bigg's got a BOO this was definitely a close battle, for me this battle came down to these punches. I do like messiahs punch where it is solid and definitely picks apart biggs and his 2010 shirt but i feel it lacked creativity. I like Blacks punch because it was creative and a lil funny but it loses some shine because it couldve been polished better. in the end it was realllllly close, so i judged on creativity, and i went with B7S
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03-24-2011, 08:52 AM
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| Mess for christs sake do some shoppin dawg.. it cant hurt its halloween, on New Years you was rockin the same shirt!!**
the truth is you look Better wit the mask on
while Biggs aint all the way there upstairs like his carved pumpkin
i even heard they had to surgicaly remove the spoon from his jaws man
like ok youre a goon biggs, but whats a goon to a Goblin!
overal pretty mild verse, some decent concepts in there that could have used minor tweeking to become solid hits ~ b7s You're too funny for words... Therefore, this isn't the wittiest scripture I've wrote, b!tch I can't blame him cuz he ugly... so he has to use the shittiest tricks to approach chicks No homo, but that's probably the prettiest picture you've posted*
He all excited, cuz Halloween the only time Bigg's got a BOO
Well, you look like a joke...someone needs to give this skeez a primp He was tryna be a crossbreed for Halloween...hippopotamus in zebra prints
Even that Jack-O-Lantern knows that he ain't the one scarin the kids
this was decent, seen better tho Vote = b7s Had a better, more consistent, play on the pic. And if you ask me, aLL mask comments are pretty generic considering it was holloween...if he hadn't been wearing a mask the joke would be he doesn't need one...since he is wearing a mask the joke is that he's hiding his face...all variations of a You're so ugly... are played.
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03-24-2011, 11:20 AM
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i vote messiah... i did like the scheme in the prettiest picture you've postied/shitties tricks to approach chicks/etc., but it was the same punch messiah dropped pretty much an even tho' the scheme was nice, the delivery just wasn't as sharp on it... messiah didn't come with his best verse, but the opener was nice an i laughed at the goon to a goblin shit, only cuz i was in a thread a week or so ago @ netcees havin the goon vs goblin discussion...i do think ya coulda done more with the opener tho'...i did like black's zebra prints line... in the end, first read i had black takin it, but on second go-around his misses were a lot farther off the mark than messiah's, an they were about even in good lines, so yeah, messiah gets this...pz
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03-25-2011, 01:59 AM
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| MesSi: for christs sake do some shoppin dawg.. it cant hurt its halloween, on New Years you was rockin the same shirt!! haha, good observation, still, it seemed kinda bland get a clue biggs, you aint gon' Neva get ya mack on the truth is you look Better wit the mask on schemes were tight and although the accent downplays it a bit, for me that is, it's still tight, it's more of a live delivery though im clever wit the rap songs, sharp as a dart cousin while Biggs aint all the way there upstairs like his carved pumpkin pretty good, punch lacked substance though i feel. this starved blumpkin ate its fuckin brains, all this food is a problem i even heard they had to surgicaly remove the spoon from his jaws man average i'll catch em a lil wheezy,coughin', & pull out a milli in the mood to get shots in like ok youre a goon biggs, but whats a goon to a Goblin! okay, with a flexish twist B57: You're too funny for words... Therefore, this isn't the wittiest scripture I've wrote, b!tch I can't blame him cuz he ugly... so he has to use the shittiest tricks to approach chicks No homo, but that's probably the prettiest picture you've posted okay for a few rhymes but you really weren't saying much, and that's 4 lines... GONE. plus, explaining contextual shit like: *in other words, its the prettiest pic cuz his face is hidden shouldn't have to be explained my man where's his Trick-or-Treat basket, did this pig swallow that too? He all excited, cuz Halloween the only time Bigg's got a BOO this concept was pretty nice, although the setup, like biggs said, DID need work, rhyme was slightly off too I feel He tryna give a tough pose...like he's a pimp Well, you look like a joke...someone needs to give this skeez a primp He was tryna be a crossbreed for Halloween...hippopotamus in zebra prints flow was tight, however, the final result was a bit of a let down, concept wise that is He's tryna balance his toes...cuz he apparently BIGG Even that Jack-O-Lantern knows that he ain't the one scarin the kids nah... mess, idk your verse was okay i guess, but fuck, i wanna hear you over a beat, i reckon you'd cut sick. overall, your shit here tonight however, was mild. bs7, idk, you verse had some mad potential but fell short I feel. you're rhymes/flow are VERY good but there's something that's lacking there i feel... soul maybe, idk. use more vivid imagery and flesh out your punches more. you seem kinda mechanical in your approach with no with grand result to show for it... you nomean?? I was initially gonna go with B7 when i read this shit earlier today but on second glance, idk. there was too much inconsistency in there i feel, so i gotta give this one to mess for having a more tighter and more ARTFUL verse really, peas VOTE: M3
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03-27-2011, 02:56 AM
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for christs sake do some shoppin dawg.. it cant hurt its halloween, on New Years you was rockin the same shirt!!** *Im guessing this was in another pic before...seems like a pretty solid opener(I think ive seen the pic too) get a clue biggs, you aint gon' Neva get ya mack on the truth is you look Better wit the mask on *This was ok...just a light jab...you coulda worked on this a little to make it hit harder. im clever wit the rap songs, sharp as a dart cousin while Biggs aint all the way there upstairs like his carved pumpkin *This coulda been worded better to make it hit harder, making it just ok(Nice concept, but you coulda done more with it IMO...get ur punch and figure out a dope wordplay or add some nice multis or something in there...the concept is the easy part...making it dope is the trick.) this starved blumpkin ate its fuckin brains, all this food is a problem i even heard they had to surgicaly remove the spoon from his jaws man *The part I was feeling most about this was the carryover from the last bar....other than that there wasn't anything here I was into really. i'll catch em a lil wheezy,coughin', & pull out a milli in the mood to get shots in like ok youre a goon biggs, but whats a goon to a Goblin! *Meh...you went at his pic, but this was mostly just words with no real punch to it. Not a very strong closer when you have other bars in this verse that were stronger and better suited to leave an impression...not bad, but this lacked power. ************************************************** ****** You're too funny for words... Therefore, this isn't the wittiest scripture I've wrote, b!tch I can't blame him cuz he ugly... so he has to use the shittiest tricks to approach chicks No homo, but that's probably the prettiest picture you've posted* *Overall this was a decent set up to a punch that didn't land that hard, and I think you wasted some of ur verse tryna bring that in...overall it was ok, but I don't think it was worth the sacrifice of lines. where's his Trick-or-Treat basket, did this pig swallow that too? He all excited, cuz Halloween the only time Bigg's got a BOO *Punch here related to the pic and wasnt too bad...add some more rhymes to make it hit harder and you'll have more success. He tryna give a tough pose...like he's a pimp Well, you look like a joke...someone needs to give this skeez a primp He was tryna be a crossbreed for Halloween...hippopotamus in zebra prints *LOL...decent hit on the pic...not the hardest punch but it was aimed directly...rhymes were decent here, but was stretched overall. He's tryna balance his toes...cuz he apparently BIGG Even that Jack-O-Lantern knows that he ain't the one scarin the kids *A nice concept here to close off the verse, and rhymes werent bad either...not the hardest hitter, but an ok close Hmmmmmmm, this is a pretty close one. Opener-Mess...it was more direct without sacrificing any of his verse with a better oveall hit IMO. Personals/pic hits-B7S...he attacked the pic thruout, and Mess's 4th seemed indirect at the pic to me. Punches-Tie, I counted 4 hits(2 decent, 2 not so much from each) Wordplay-Tie...didn't see any from either Multis/internals-I think both had good and bad points here with ups and downs...Mess had the carryovers, but Black had the larger syllable counts, I think B7S takes this bya pubic hair. Closer-Tie...both coulda done more to leave a better impression on the reader to finish off the verse. This is really close but I have B7S taking this slighlty, mostly weighing on taking the pic hits more than winning the most categories....this could go either way, but Im gonna go with B7S here...good battle guys ***Vote Black7Series*** Peace.
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03-29-2011, 03:12 PM
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| 3-3 Uppin for more votes. KOS
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03-30-2011, 09:30 AM
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Messiah, you had a decent verse overall, your opener was the best in the whole battle and i do remember the pic you are talking about, he had it a profile pic when i joined FF on facebook lol.. some of your punches lacked weight so it coulda been worded better IMO.. B7S, comparing to Messiah opener, you started kind of soft, you had good multies, nice punches, but even you had couple that lacked weight, what i liked about ur verse is the pic hits, nice work there and the multies, but you rhyme scheme wasnt that clean.. this was a close battle, but IMO B7S edged it..
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04-04-2011, 06:37 AM
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This was a tough battle to judge. Messiah had the better structure. Black's structure is strange, especially that first section. Black had more stand out's. I liked the boo line, and the jack o lantern line was decent. Messiah had the all the way upstairs line that had potential, it could have been worded better though. I'm going to go with Black for having the two stand out punches in the battle. v/ Black7series |
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04-05-2011, 01:08 PM
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| Black7series wins 5-3. KOS
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