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04-06-2011, 03:11 PM
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|  Round 3: Alain El Khoury vs eRek vs Rudy Bash Biggs Tournament  12 Lines. Verses are due April 14th (Thursday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after 3rd opponent has dropped. If you post third you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.
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04-06-2011, 05:02 PM
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Is 12 the limit lol ? I got ammo on this Chizzzeck
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04-08-2011, 07:23 AM
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IN...
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04-10-2011, 09:00 AM
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| ..RHYME SCieNCE..  Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown.
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this will be interesting..
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04-17-2011, 01:08 PM
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That's alotta white girl for one pic, tell me, whered you find them brother More importantly bigs, how much did you sniff to get ya eyes that color? Look, I know its hard to find some better hoes when yo eyes are hella swolle But them first two cougars got bat wings that defy genetic codes Let this be a lesson,the kids desperateness gets his neck wrenched hard Bouncers clenching his cuz bigs kep jumpn in pics with broads he never met before The saddest tragedy, I feel bad for how little ass this man has seen He has "nobody" n he hangs with those who understand like HAND from Addams family In fact, they all turned their backs on him, all thinking "sup with this dude?" Trust me bigs, love isnt blind... they just got tired of looking at you
__________________ I used to be a lonely man only mad Until I got a million dollars, shiiiiiiiit Now if i only had some fuckking hair I'd pull it, faster than a bullet out of Tupac's chest Before the ambulance came too late to do it - Em Last edited by Rudy; 04-17-2011 at 04:39 PM. |
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04-17-2011, 09:24 PM
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I didn't know dudes could get a hotflash this suckas smashed...word?... suckas trashed isn't is that rosie o'donnell's dykin mass?? Nawh it's just a BiGG stupid ass lookin like a diaper rash! I aint tryin to be brash but these broads don't know that there's a stalker tryin too grab they ass this shitface mofo probably so excited that he probably splashed his underwear while he's whispering in that chicks ear, "hey boo, boo, this a be d yogi bear" stumbling fumbling with that cracked out glare i swear he be crying that," life's unfair!" cause he can't get no hoes he's standing there blew so much up nose n unaware he's busted from all that hot air just like his shirt we know he's square looking like a oversized pair at last time to take it to class without demeaning he's justa dirty horny guy that needs that ice bucket 4 a cool cleaning.. sober up brotha...
__________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA Last edited by eRek; 04-18-2011 at 12:41 PM. |
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04-19-2011, 01:11 PM
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here you go.. sorry didnt have internet access. Waw let me bow for the 4 chicks and lady maggot Don’t blush now biggs bcz your skirt aint showing faggot.. Who let this weirdo into the club rolling with a G king clout.. Laying his filthy hands on girls, look at her poor face freaking out.. Look at you hiding pussy behind 4 others like a slut.. After a hard fuck waiting in line to get a facial shot.. (no homo) If you try the girls dresses on you, you’d look great with that girly face But it wouldn’t work bcz you wouldn’t even fit in the white dress surly ace.. I aint talking shit I spit hits, it hurts so you know it’s the best of.. My writs, take a look at your face bcz you are obviously pissed off..
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04-19-2011, 07:47 PM
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|  Alain El Khoury Waw let me bow for the 4 chicks and lady maggot Don?t blush now biggs bcz your skirt aint showing faggot.. Mediocre opener Who let this weirdo into the club rolling with a G king clout.. Laying his filthy hands on girls, look at her poor face freaking out.. Haha...nice Look at you hiding pussy behind 4 others like a slut.. After a hard fuck waiting in line to get a facial shot.. (no homo) Nahh If you try the girls dresses on you, you?d look great with that girly face But it wouldn?t work bcz you wouldn?t even fit in the white dress surly ace.. I don't get this one I aint talking shit I spit hits, it hurts so you know it?s the best of.. My writs, take a look at your face bcz you are obviously pissed off.. "best of" and "pissed off" don't rhyme plus the material lacked sting so closer was weak in comparison to the rest of your verse eRek I didn't know dudes could get a hotflash this suckas smashed...word?... suckas trashed isn't is that rosie o'donnell's dykin mass?? Nawh it's just a BiGG stupid ass lookin like a diaper rash! Flow is superb...but the punch itself lacked sting I aint tryin to be brash but these broads don't know that there's a stalker tryin too grab they ass this shitface mofo probably so excited that he probably splashed his underwear Yoo...I could've SWORN this punch was worded differently...DID YOU CHANGE IT? Because I laughed my azz off when I read the "old" version of it...this new version is worded kinda weird...but then again, I dunno if you changed the wording or not...I may be hallucinating lmao while he's whispering in that chicks ear, "hey boo, boo, this a be d yogi bear" stumbling fumbling with that cracked out glare i swear he be crying that," life's unfair!" ROFL....funny. I think you changed the wording on this one also...first time was better but this is still funny sh!t cause he can't get no hoes he's standing there blew so much up nose n unaware he's busted from all that hot air just like his shirt we know he's square looking like a oversized pair Nahhh at last time to take it to class without demeaning he's justa dirty horny guy that needs that ice bucket 4 a cool cleaning.. sober up brotha... Compared to the rest of your verse...this closer was on the weak side Rudy That's alotta white girl for one pic, tell me, whered you find them brother More importantly bigs, how much did you sniff to get ya eyes that color? LOL...decent opener Look, I know its hard to find some better hoes when yo eyes are hella swolle But them first two cougars got bat wings that defy genetic codes Nahh Let this be a lesson,the kids desperateness gets his neck wrenched hard Bouncers clenching his cuz bigs kep jumpn in pics with broads he never met before He's not jumpin' in this pic bro lol The saddest tragedy, I feel bad for how little ass this man has seen He has "nobody" n he hangs with those who understand like HAND from Addams family Not feelin' this one In fact, they all turned their backs on him, all thinking "sup with this dude?" Trust me bigs, love isnt blind... they just got tired of looking at you LOL...I guess you saved the best for last...good closer Overall, this is prob gonna be the toughest battle I ever vote on lol...This was a hard decision but I have to go with eRek on this one...seemed like he outdid the other two by being slightly more consistent...but erek - I seriously have a feeling u changed around the wording in ur verse becuz I think I read ur verse as soon as u posted it and I was like "Damn, this is nice!"....and then all of a sudden when I came in to vote, it seemed kinda different...you shouldve left it the way it was...the first version was way better...again, I'm not sure if it's just me or you actually did change it around....anywayz, every1 had some good ish...Rudy and Alain had some nice creative punches in there but in the end, I think eRek outdid them by being slightly more consistent.... So my vote goes to: eRek |
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04-19-2011, 07:51 PM
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oh and by the way, plz vote on my battle guys  i appreciate it thank you don't forget to vote this is the link: http://www.b-boys.com/forums/showthread.php?t=21651 i'd appreciate your vote it would be nice if you guys voted LOL
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04-19-2011, 08:36 PM
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| ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown.
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.My bad I doubted myself for second n changed my layout..well u live n learn..
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04-22-2011, 11:45 AM
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| Rudy That's alotta white girl for one pic, tell me, whered you find them brother More importantly bigs, how much did you sniff to get ya eyes that color? I've found myself sayin this quite abit lately, but I'm not really feelin the punches that come in the form of a question...it's more of an observation than a diss. This was an aight bar, it just didn't have any power to it. Look, I know its hard to find some better hoes when yo eyes are hella swolle But them first two cougars got bat wings that defy genetic codes This was decent, I'm not exactly sure what bat wings means but it was still comical...decent jab considering. Let this be a lesson,the kids desperateness gets his neck wrenched hard Bouncers clenching his cuz bigs kep jumpn in pics with broads he never met before This was ok, I already expected to get hit with punches of this nature...I also expected to see somethin more creative tho. It was ok like I said, but it was pretty straight forward so again it doesn't land very hard. The saddest tragedy, I feel bad for how little ass this man has seen He has "nobody" n he hangs with those who understand like HAND from Addams family This was a solid bar until the part where you said I hang with those who understand, and that's only cause it was worded weirdly. I'm likin the concept of "nobody" but I feel you could've worded this better for a stronger result. In fact, they all turned their backs on him, all thinking "sup with this dude?" Trust me bigs, love isnt blind... they just got tired of looking at you Now this was nice, definately a strong closer and the best bar in your verse. eRek I didn't know dudes could get a hotflash this suckas smashed...word?... suckas trashed isn't is that rosie o'donnell's dykin mass?? Nawh it's just a BiGG stupid ass lookin like a diaper rash! This was a good start, the wording was abit choppy but the punch was hard. I aint tryin to be brash but these broads don't know that there's a stalker tryin too grab they ass this shitface mofo probably so excited that he probably splashed his underwear while he's whispering in that chicks ear, "hey boo, boo, this a be d yogi bear" stumbling fumbling with that cracked out glare i swear he be crying that," life's unfair!" Wasn't feelin this chunk here, I didn't feel that anything connected...and the Yogi Bear ish was kinda corny. cause he can't get no hoes he's standing there blew so much up nose n unaware he's busted from all that hot air just like his shirt we know he's square looking like a oversized pair This was better, it doesn't have alot of power but it was decent in regards to the pic. at last time to take it to class without demeaning he's justa dirty horny guy that needs that ice bucket 4 a cool cleaning.. sober up brotha... Nah, this was off target...light closer. Alain Waw let me bow for the 4 chicks and lady maggot Don?t blush now biggs bcz your skirt aint showing faggot.. Haha, this was funny...it was only a mild jab but it made me laugh tho. Who let this weirdo into the club rolling with a G king clout.. Laying his filthy hands on girls, look at her poor face freaking out.. This was another mild jab, and slightly comical again. Look at you hiding pussy behind 4 others like a slut.. After a hard fuck waiting in line to get a facial shot.. (no homo) Nah, this one missed the target man. If you try the girls dresses on you, you?d look great with that girly face But it wouldn?t work bcz you wouldn?t even fit in the white dress surly ace.. The first line here was a good set up, but then the diss missed the target again. I aint talking shit I spit hits, it hurts so you know it?s the best of.. My writs, take a look at your face bcz you are obviously pissed off.. I don't think I look pissed off, I'm havin a great time there lol...I see how you could say that because of the red face tho. Overall, my favourite verse of the 3 was Rudy's...followed by Alain and then eRek's. Rudy didn't have any weak bars in my opinion, he only had one power punch but the rest were atleast aimed well. Alain was the most straight forward in his verse with the simple punches, the first couple landed but the rest not so much. eRek's bars were aimed well but it was the wording which held him back, the first bar is a perfect example...it has the potential to be a stinger rather than just good. Anyways, that's what I have to say... My vote goes to Rudy. KOS
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04-29-2011, 03:26 PM
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| 1-1-0 uppin for more votes. KOS
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04-30-2011, 11:02 PM
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i thought i already hit this up... erek had some aiight stuff, but nothin really stood out too hard to me...there were a couple corny lines, such as the diaper rash one, but overall it wasn't a bad verse...just no real stand outs... alain had a pretty crappy verse all around...concepts were bland, rhyme schemes were bland as well...verse was an easy read cuz the lines were short, but aside from that wasn't really diggin it... rudy had a decent verse...the opener an closer were two of the better lines...more developed rhyme scheme throughout, an he had some corny ideas but some lines that got snickers as well... vote=rudy...just came better all around, no hate, don't really know how else to put it...pz
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05-02-2011, 04:59 AM
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| Fav Rudy Line In fact, they all turned their backs on him, all thinking "sup with this dude?" Trust me bigs, love isnt blind... they just got tired of looking at you everything else was sorta bland. and THING is the hand's name from addams family, workin that into the scheme may have made the line better. Fav eRek line I didn't know dudes could get a hotflash this suckas smashed...word?... suckas trashed isn't is that rosie o'donnell's dykin mass?? Nawh it's just a BiGG stupid ass lookin like a diaper rash! This is funny, everything else in the verse had potential too just didn't see it come together and land for you. Fav Alain line ~none~ In the typical fashion I found nothing that stood out as a decent diss, there was no creativity to it. Vote = Rudy Had to read the two verses a few times, it was hard to decide. Very close, a little work on a few lines in both would have made a huge difference. Rudy inched this one out IMO because the flow and rhyme schemes made even the mediocre concepts sound decent.
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05-02-2011, 10:36 AM
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Vote Rudy He basically won every aspect.. not an unbelievable verse by any means but the clear winner.. no punch in any verse stood out to me, but i feel like Rudy missed by alot less than his counterparts
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05-02-2011, 12:54 PM
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| Rudy wins 4-1-0 KOS
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