Round 3: god 0f war vs PoizonusJK - B-Boys.com - Hip-Hop Rap Forums

Urban Eskimo · 04-06-2011, 03:16 PM

Bash Biggs Tournament

12 Lines.

Verses are due April 14th (Thursday) by Midnight .

Voting is highly important to this tournament.
Vote on as many battles as possible.

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PoizonusJK · 04-15-2011, 01:41 PM

i straight up forgot about this shit...

i really don't wanna no-show this tournament cuz i ain't tryna do b-boys like that, but for real i'm mad swamped...

major car collision, two remodelin jobs an i almost broke my knee yesterday...i'd love to sit down an write somethin for this, but it might be a few days before i can get around to it...

so if y'all gotta 86 me so be it, if you wanna give me a few days then that's cool too, either way...

i'll let gow know, but i'm pretty sure he didn't think he was still even in this thing, so he probably doesn't even know this battle's up...pz

Urban Eskimo · 04-15-2011, 01:56 PM

I'll give you guys till the end of the weekend.

KOS

MeSsIaH · 04-16-2011, 02:33 AM

shittttttt. pj i dont need days 2 write a verse, so i KNOW u dont, get it in bruh, some flex shit b good nuff 4 a W WTF

god 0f war · 04-16-2011, 08:34 AM

^^^^^^whot he fuck is that rofl

and im here i will drop something by tomorow night

god 0f war · 04-16-2011, 04:31 PM

keystyle

we all know this kid is trife,and all u'll ever give is strife
its funny how the girl on the end, has more of a leg up then u ever did wit life
n lets keep this thing fair, none of them bitches seem scared
so its obvious you play the father figure, when u look old enough to be theres
those r ugly asian wobbly bitches, no reason to be cocky chickens
i mean one girls wearing a green belt, n we still dont think her bodys kickin
n you acting black is wretched, that shit almos left me breathless
after i seen ur pic n realise this kid, was whiter then that bitches chest is
that chic in the back i couldnt smash it dawg, so get the ratchets drawn
cuz i aint seen a girl like that bear arms, since u put ur fuckin jacket on
n u look like a rapist, theres no msitaken, this cat is a creep
its the first time we ever seen u with females, n there all asking for peace

PoizonusJK · 04-17-2011, 04:56 PM

haha @ mess puttin me on blast...W.T.F. all day lol...

fuck it, here goes...

i'm not-for-the-guessin, so i got-a-suggestion: quit postin up-ya-photos
i can't tell if this scrub-is-froto, or just-some-homo disguised as a drunken-hobo
you ain't no player,-stop-it-duke.. cuz while you makin-lots-of-loot
every time you attempt-to-ball, you just spend-it-all on asian-prostitutes
game-is-awful-too.. instead of findin a bad-sex-slave-to-smash-with
ya pulled a short tranny with knees that look like she's had-decades-of-practice
he tries-mackin-dames-but-then.. this white-bastard-ain't-a-pimp
when he lives in the same motel room david carradine died-masterbatin-in
but truth be told, i just hope this pic is only ya impression-of-a-gay-pirate
or a text-rappin meth-addict with the complexion-of-the-AIDS-virus
turnin this guy-into-cold-cuts.. tryin-to-roll-up, like he dyin-to-hold-nuts
if you doubt-he's-gay.. just know he 'bout-as-straight as the line-in-his-bowl-cut

...g/luck...pz

eRek · 04-20-2011, 07:54 AM

war had that father figure line..n his closer was killer..however pj had spending loot wit prositutes, that tranny line was funny, n the addict line..
i feel pj just ripped biggs harder..
V: Pjizzy

Urban Eskimo · 04-22-2011, 01:24 PM

god 0f war

we all know this kid is trife,and all u'll ever give is strife
its funny how the girl on the end, has more of a leg up then u ever did wit life
This was a pretty solid opener, nice use of the pic mixed with some creativity.
n lets keep this thing fair, none of them bitches seem scared
so its obvious you play the father figure, when u look old enough to be theres
I didn't find this to hit the target so hard, it was still aight just didn't have much impact.
those r ugly asian wobbly bitches, no reason to be cocky chickens
i mean one girls wearing a green belt, n we still dont think her bodys kickin
This was a decent idea, and I like the attempt here but I still didn't find it landed very hard.
n you acting black is wretched, that shit almos left me breathless
after i seen ur pic n realise this kid, was whiter then that bitches chest is
Ok jab here, nice use of the picture too.
that chic in the back i couldnt smash it dawg, so get the ratchets drawn
cuz i aint seen a girl like that bear arms, since u put ur fuckin jacket on
This bar has the potential to be dope if polished, it was a tight concept but I feel it was missing somethin...it just didn't hit as hard as it could have.
n u look like a rapist, theres no msitaken, this cat is a creep
its the first time we ever seen u with females, n there all asking for peace
This was a decent closer, nothin too hard hittin but a good finish.

PJK

i'm not-for-the-guessin, so i got-a-suggestion: quit postin up-ya-photos
i can't tell if this scrub-is-froto, or just-some-homo disguised as a drunken-hobo
Again with the froto huh lol, this bar didn't have alot to it aside from the multi's...punch was mild.
you ain't no player,-stop-it-duke.. cuz while you makin-lots-of-loot
every time you attempt-to-ball, you just spend-it-all on asian-prostitutes
Hahaha, this was jokes and a nice picture diss...this bar was on point.
game-is-awful-too.. instead of findin a bad-sex-slave-to-smash-with
ya pulled a short tranny with knees that look like she's had-decades-of-practice
Another good jab lol, and that end rhyme multi is tight too.
he tries-mackin-dames-but-then.. this white-bastard-ain't-a-pimp
when he lives in the same motel room david carradine died-masterbatin-in
This was decent.
but truth be told, i just hope this pic is only ya impression-of-a-gay-pirate
or a text-rappin meth-addict with the complexion-of-the-AIDS-virus
Nah, not feelin this one my man.
turnin this guy-into-cold-cuts.. tryin-to-roll-up, like he dyin-to-hold-nuts
if you doubt-he's-gay.. just know he 'bout-as-straight as the line-in-his-bowl-cut
Damn lol, this was executed nicely...solid closer.

Overall, this was a pretty good battle...both cats dropped some nice lines makin it a close one to call. god 0f war's verse was more concept oriented while PJK threw those direct punches. god 0f war had a handful of creative concepts but the execution lacked in spots which dulled the punches. Aside from PJK's aids virus line he kept it pretty consistent, and had a few punches that really hit the target well...so in the end I'm gonna have to go with PJK in this one.

My vote goes to PJK.

KOS

Urban Eskimo · 04-26-2011, 01:33 PM

2-0 uppin for more votes.

KOS

god 0f war · 04-27-2011, 07:03 PM

"stabs pjk"

I WIN

Burt Blaze · 04-28-2011, 02:59 PM

My favorite line from GOW was his opner. everything else had potential but seemed to lack in execution.

PJK's opener was weak IMO. Favorite lines was the decades of practice line & closer.

This one was close. Both some things that worked and some things that didn't. PJK inched this one out just cause his lines that landed hit harder than GOW's while hit lines that didn't did not miss as much as GOW's. Decent read tho and creative use of pic.

vote = Pajamma K

Urban Eskimo · 04-29-2011, 03:24 PM

PoizonusJK wins 3-0.

KOS

04-06-2011, 03:16 PM	#1
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Round 3: god 0f war vs PoizonusJK Bash Biggs Tournament 12 Lines. Verses are due April 14th (Thursday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped. __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

04-15-2011, 01:41 PM	#2
PoizonusJK Yes, it's me... Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are? Posts: 1,154	i straight up forgot about this shit... i really don't wanna no-show this tournament cuz i ain't tryna do b-boys like that, but for real i'm mad swamped... major car collision, two remodelin jobs an i almost broke my knee yesterday...i'd love to sit down an write somethin for this, but it might be a few days before i can get around to it... so if y'all gotta 86 me so be it, if you wanna give me a few days then that's cool too, either way... i'll let gow know, but i'm pretty sure he didn't think he was still even in this thing, so he probably doesn't even know this battle's up...pz __________________ www.soundcloud.com/74thStreetRecords www.soundclick.com/74thStreetRecords www.reverbnation.com/TheRealDetour www.myspace.com/74thStreetRecords ugh.. my word is my pride but wisdom is bleak, and that's a word from the wise serve to survive.. murder and bribe and when it got too heavy, i pushed my burdens aside

04-15-2011, 01:56 PM	#3
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	I'll give you guys till the end of the weekend. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

04-16-2011, 02:33 AM	#4
MeSsIaH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Cap City KY Posts: 847	shittttttt. pj i dont need days 2 write a verse, so i KNOW u dont, get it in bruh, some flex shit b good nuff 4 a W WTF __________________ Champion hoodie on... prolly lookin bummy wit it had it on a month straight... i been gettin money wit it Styles

04-17-2011, 04:56 PM	#7
PoizonusJK Yes, it's me... Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are? Posts: 1,154	haha @ mess puttin me on blast...W.T.F. all day lol... fuck it, here goes... i'm not-for-the-guessin, so i got-a-suggestion: quit postin up-ya-photos i can't tell if this scrub-is-froto, or just-some-homo disguised as a drunken-hobo you ain't no player,-stop-it-duke.. cuz while you makin-lots-of-loot every time you attempt-to-ball, you just spend-it-all on asian-prostitutes game-is-awful-too.. instead of findin a bad-sex-slave-to-smash-with ya pulled a short tranny with knees that look like she's had-decades-of-practice he tries-mackin-dames-but-then.. this white-bastard-ain't-a-pimp when he lives in the same motel room david carradine died-masterbatin-in but truth be told, i just hope this pic is only ya impression-of-a-gay-pirate or a text-rappin meth-addict with the complexion-of-the-AIDS-virus turnin this guy-into-cold-cuts.. tryin-to-roll-up, like he dyin-to-hold-nuts if you doubt-he's-gay.. just know he 'bout-as-straight as the line-in-his-bowl-cut ...g/luck...pz __________________ www.soundcloud.com/74thStreetRecords www.soundclick.com/74thStreetRecords www.reverbnation.com/TheRealDetour www.myspace.com/74thStreetRecords ugh.. my word is my pride but wisdom is bleak, and that's a word from the wise serve to survive.. murder and bribe and when it got too heavy, i pushed my burdens aside

04-16-2011, 08:34 AM	#5
god 0f war Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 50	^^^^^^whot he fuck is that rofl and im here i will drop something by tomorow night

04-16-2011, 04:31 PM	#6
god 0f war Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 50	keystyle we all know this kid is trife,and all u'll ever give is strife its funny how the girl on the end, has more of a leg up then u ever did wit life n lets keep this thing fair, none of them bitches seem scared so its obvious you play the father figure, when u look old enough to be theres those r ugly asian wobbly bitches, no reason to be cocky chickens i mean one girls wearing a green belt, n we still dont think her bodys kickin n you acting black is wretched, that shit almos left me breathless after i seen ur pic n realise this kid, was whiter then that bitches chest is that chic in the back i couldnt smash it dawg, so get the ratchets drawn cuz i aint seen a girl like that bear arms, since u put ur fuckin jacket on n u look like a rapist, theres no msitaken, this cat is a creep its the first time we ever seen u with females, n there all asking for peace

04-20-2011, 07:54 AM	#8
eRek ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown. Posts: 1,252	war had that father figure line..n his closer was killer..however pj had spending loot wit prositutes, that tranny line was funny, n the addict line.. i feel pj just ripped biggs harder.. V: Pjizzy __________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA

04-22-2011, 01:24 PM	#9
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	god 0f war we all know this kid is trife,and all u'll ever give is strife its funny how the girl on the end, has more of a leg up then u ever did wit life This was a pretty solid opener, nice use of the pic mixed with some creativity. n lets keep this thing fair, none of them bitches seem scared so its obvious you play the father figure, when u look old enough to be theres I didn't find this to hit the target so hard, it was still aight just didn't have much impact. those r ugly asian wobbly bitches, no reason to be cocky chickens i mean one girls wearing a green belt, n we still dont think her bodys kickin This was a decent idea, and I like the attempt here but I still didn't find it landed very hard. n you acting black is wretched, that shit almos left me breathless after i seen ur pic n realise this kid, was whiter then that bitches chest is Ok jab here, nice use of the picture too. that chic in the back i couldnt smash it dawg, so get the ratchets drawn cuz i aint seen a girl like that bear arms, since u put ur fuckin jacket on This bar has the potential to be dope if polished, it was a tight concept but I feel it was missing somethin...it just didn't hit as hard as it could have. n u look like a rapist, theres no msitaken, this cat is a creep its the first time we ever seen u with females, n there all asking for peace This was a decent closer, nothin too hard hittin but a good finish. PJK i'm not-for-the-guessin, so i got-a-suggestion: quit postin up-ya-photos i can't tell if this scrub-is-froto, or just-some-homo disguised as a drunken-hobo Again with the froto huh lol, this bar didn't have alot to it aside from the multi's...punch was mild. you ain't no player,-stop-it-duke.. cuz while you makin-lots-of-loot every time you attempt-to-ball, you just spend-it-all on asian-prostitutes Hahaha, this was jokes and a nice picture diss...this bar was on point. game-is-awful-too.. instead of findin a bad-sex-slave-to-smash-with ya pulled a short tranny with knees that look like she's had-decades-of-practice Another good jab lol, and that end rhyme multi is tight too. he tries-mackin-dames-but-then.. this white-bastard-ain't-a-pimp when he lives in the same motel room david carradine died-masterbatin-in This was decent. but truth be told, i just hope this pic is only ya impression-of-a-gay-pirate or a text-rappin meth-addict with the complexion-of-the-AIDS-virus Nah, not feelin this one my man. turnin this guy-into-cold-cuts.. tryin-to-roll-up, like he dyin-to-hold-nuts if you doubt-he's-gay.. just know he 'bout-as-straight as the line-in-his-bowl-cut Damn lol, this was executed nicely...solid closer. Overall, this was a pretty good battle...both cats dropped some nice lines makin it a close one to call. god 0f war's verse was more concept oriented while PJK threw those direct punches. god 0f war had a handful of creative concepts but the execution lacked in spots which dulled the punches. Aside from PJK's aids virus line he kept it pretty consistent, and had a few punches that really hit the target well...so in the end I'm gonna have to go with PJK in this one. My vote goes to PJK. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

04-26-2011, 01:33 PM	#10
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	2-0 uppin for more votes. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

04-27-2011, 07:03 PM	#11
god 0f war Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 50	"stabs pjk" I WIN

04-28-2011, 02:59 PM	#12
Burt Blaze burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI Posts: 2,441	My favorite line from GOW was his opner. everything else had potential but seemed to lack in execution. PJK's opener was weak IMO. Favorite lines was the decades of practice line & closer. This one was close. Both some things that worked and some things that didn't. PJK inched this one out just cause his lines that landed hit harder than GOW's while hit lines that didn't did not miss as much as GOW's. Decent read tho and creative use of pic. vote = Pajamma K __________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface

04-29-2011, 03:24 PM	#13
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	PoizonusJK wins 3-0. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

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