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04-06-2011, 03:23 PM
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST  Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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|  Round 3: Black7series vs Elevated Design Bash Biggs Tournament  12 Lines. Verses are due April 14th (Thursday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.
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04-06-2011, 07:01 PM
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04-07-2011, 10:41 PM
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| vital sines  Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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cheq
__________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L |
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04-13-2011, 04:49 PM
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hey broskis, i MIGHT not be able to post up my verse by the deadline tomorrow and thus may require an extension (if you all are okay with that)...my schedule is extremely crazy right now and I barely have the time to sit my azz down and write something lol....I'm gonna TRY MY BEST to post by tomorrow, but just in case I don't, I want to give u all a heads up so u don't think I'm pullin' a "No Show"
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04-14-2011, 05:10 AM
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| vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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haha, that works well for me. i've been putting this verse off but i'll try for tomorrow night at some point
__________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L |
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04-14-2011, 02:49 PM
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Alright homie, I've never asked for an extension and I didn't wanna break my streak lol...so here's a lil something i put together: - Talk about mismatchin'...he rockin' a rainbow of browns... Fat f*ck, even the ketchup bottles lay low when you're around You may be "Da Biggest"... but my rap skits' enough to getchya ass kicked and ya face booked... and I ain't talkin' pokes and comments Oh, and this wack pic makes you look like Ratcliffe next to Pocahontas You and ya clown ass crew's like a circus, chief...You ain't intimidatin'... Loser ass b*tch, you got no hope...even ya shirt's belief is disintegratin' He the type o' ni**a that'll act all tough outside of the ring... but when in da pen, dense/INDEPENDENCE like HO CHI MINH He look mad gangsta with that sideways hat and that low-key grin ...kinda like B-Rad Gluckman's* obese twin * from "Malibu's Most Wanted" - I'm cool wit' you droppin whenever, ED...no worries Last edited by Monaco; 04-14-2011 at 06:42 PM. |
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04-17-2011, 07:00 AM
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| vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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had a solid weekend, I woulda dropped sooner. gl player... you look gay-with ya cap spun now you may-just get smacked son he ain't no player OR mack, he's just dating the fat one /// he loves poking on a whale, who prolly broke alot a scales so the other chick's the only one that's smoking on ya table /// I'd leave her open at the navel then fuck her raw but when the staff saw the size of YOUR chick, they swiftly latched the cupboard door^^ /// easy now, I'm only being a clown dude ya lady LOOKS nice but she's prob-ab-ly playing around TOO!! /// never 'concept heavy', when he's tryna phrase a punch but from the way ya hunched I'd say your brain must've weighed a tun!! /// son you aren't ghetto, damn you just a large-jello fan it's the retarded son of Gumby and the Marshmellow Man ///
__________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L |
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04-17-2011, 04:28 PM
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| Requiescat in pace  Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens
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| Elevated Design you look gay-with ya cap spun now you may-just get smacked son he ain't no player OR mack, he's just dating the fat one Lmao, this was ii, flow was def on point he loves poking on a whale, who prolly broke alot a scales so the other chick's the only one that's smoking on ya table This was ok, couldve been worked better tho missing the strong comical sting I'd leave her open at the navel then fuck her raw but when the staff saw the size of YOUR chick, they swiftly latched the cupboard door lol fat jokes, its ok not too great easy now, I'm only being a clown dude ya lady LOOKS nice but she's prob-ab-ly playing around TOO!! nah... never 'concept heavy', when he's tryna phrase a punch but from the way ya hunched I'd say your brain must've weighed a tun!! nah... on you aren't ghetto, damn you just a large-jello fan it's the retarded son of Gumby and the Marshmellow Man lmao i actually laughed more at the setup than the punch, "Large jello fan", the punch mehhh flow was on point but the closer couldve been stronger. B7S Talk about mismatchin'...he rockin' a rainbow of browns... Fat f*ck, even the ketchup bottles lay low when you're around lmao great punch, but the setup didnt match and really didnt do its job of leading into the punch You may be "Da Biggest"... but my rap skits' enough to getchya ass kicked and ya face booked... and I ain't talkin' pokes and comments Oh, and this wack pic makes you look like Ratcliffe next to Pocahontas nah i wasnt feeling this at all You and ya clown ass crew's like a circus, chief...You ain't intimidatin'... Loser ass b*tch, you got no hope...even ya shirt's belief is disintegratin' This is another comical punch, my favorite but like up top the setup isnt doing its job and takes away from punch He the type o' ni**a that'll act all tough outside of the ring... but when in da pen, dense/INDEPENDENCE like HO CHI MINH He look mad gangsta with that sideways hat and that low-key grin ...kinda like B-Rad Gluckman's* obese twin nah, again this didnt hit at all for me, got a giggle for b-rad gluckmans referrence but the rest was blehhhh V/ E.D. hIs punches were funny and his misses werent as bad as black's. I did find Black opening punch and "belief" were def more clever than all of E.Ds but the setups didnt lead into em well and the took alot out of it for me. Close battle that was pretty good read for laughs.
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04-18-2011, 07:01 AM
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04-19-2011, 07:52 PM
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show some love n vote  lol
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04-20-2011, 07:23 AM
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| ..RHYME SCieNCE..  Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown.
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black You may be "Da Biggest"... but my rap skits' enough to getchya ass kicked and ya face booked... and I ain't talkin' pokes and comments Oh, and this wack pic makes you look like Ratcliffe next to Pocahontas clever i had to read it twice but i digg it.. You and ya clown ass crew's like a circus, chief...You ain't intimidatin'... Loser ass b*tch, you got no hope...even ya shirt's belief is disintegratin tight.. vs. party marty easy now, I'm only being a clown dude ya lady LOOKS nice but she's prob-ab-ly playing around TOO!! /// that was played off smooth never 'concept heavy', when he's tryna phrase a punch but from the way ya hunched I'd say your brain must've weighed a tun!! /// im trying to understand it but it sounds kinda like a compliment to me..right? either way i dont know. son you aren't ghetto, damn you just a large-jello fan it's the retarded son of Gumby and the Marshmellow Man /// jokes.. this was close but I feel if marty would of not focused on the chick n more on biggs..it would of worked on his favor.. so black gets this for cleverness n directness..also black not everyone knows b-rad if u would of had a pic it would of had more of a sting.. V: Black
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04-20-2011, 10:02 AM
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Thanks for the vote, man. Appreciate it! By the way, yeah ur right not everyone knows B-Rad Gluckman. But, u prob didn't notice that I put a link on his name so u could just click on it and you'll see his pic...the pic does make that punch sting more, haha. Great minds think alike, bro LOL Again, thanks for voting |
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04-22-2011, 01:57 PM
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| Black7series Talk about mismatchin'...he rockin' a rainbow of browns... Fat f*ck, even the ketchup bottles lay low when you're around  This was a well rounded bar, you dissed my appearence in the first line and used the picture very nicely to formulate a comical punch...solid opener homey.You may be "Da Biggest"... but my rap skits' enough to getchya ass kicked and ya face booked... and I ain't talkin' pokes and comments Oh, and this wack pic makes you look like Ratcliffe next to Pocahontas This was your weakest bar, the diss itself is aight but everything else I wasn't feelin. You and ya clown ass crew's like a circus, chief...You ain't intimidatin'... Loser ass b*tch, you got no hope...even ya shirt's belief is disintegratin' Again you made good use of the picture to formulate a punch, this time you left out the comedy and kept it raw. He the type o' ni**a that'll act all tough outside of the ring... but when in da pen, dense/INDEPENDENCE like HO CHI MINH He look mad gangsta with that sideways hat and that low-key grin ...kinda like B-Rad Gluckman's* obese twin The first 2 lines were ok, you focused more on the concept instead of the punch...and lol at the last couple lines, good jab. Elevated Design you look gay-with ya cap spun now you may-just get smacked son he ain't no player OR mack, he's just dating the fat one /// Damn, you're comin out swingin hard after that loss last round...this was cuttin deep, nice stinger man. he loves poking on a whale, who prolly broke alot a scales so the other chick's the only one that's smoking on ya table /// This was a cool bar, nice play on the smoking ish. I'd leave her open at the navel then fuck her raw but when the staff saw the size of YOUR chick, they swiftly latched the cupboard door^^ /// This is gettin kinda bland now, bar is mild. easy now, I'm only being a clown dude ya lady LOOKS nice but she's prob-ab-ly playing around TOO!! /// This bar wasn't landing for me, it just didn't have any impact in my opinion. never 'concept heavy', when he's tryna phrase a punch but from the way ya hunched I'd say your brain must've weighed a tun!! /// Nah, not feelin this one either... son you aren't ghetto, damn you just a large-jello fan it's the retarded son of Gumby and the Marshmellow Man /// This was a very nice jab, it's along the same lines as Black7's closer but I feel this one hits abit harder, solid finish.Overall, this was another pretty good battle...every battle this round has been close. ED came out swingin hard with the first half of his verse, then he had a couple bars that fell flat but then ended it off hard with that gumby/marshmellow man line. Black7 had a tight opener and closer too, he also had a few lines that didn't get much credit from me. He had the more creative and comical verse I thought, but ED went for the throat with those punches he landed...so I'm feelin he had the stronger battle verse by a small margin. My vote goes to Elevated Design. KOS
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04-23-2011, 12:22 AM
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| vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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thanks for votes. and biggs, haha, i felt bad when i was writing this verse man. I'm glad you didn't take it to heart. uppin' the shit !!
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04-25-2011, 08:44 AM
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| burtblaze.bandcamp.com  Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI
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Very close battle. Both had concepts and punches and aimed at the pic. I do feel ED did a slightly better job stayin consistant and not having any filler bars in there. Vote = Elevated Design
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04-26-2011, 01:31 PM
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| Elevated Design wins 3-1. KOS
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