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Urban Eskimo · 05-04-2011, 08:50 AM

Bash Biggs Tournament

12 Lines.

Verses are due May 11th (Wednesday) by Midnight .

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Urban Eskimo · 05-04-2011, 08:51 AM

You two are the only undefeated battlers left in the tourney, good luck.

KOS

Burt Blaze · 05-04-2011, 12:23 PM

check

PoizonusJK · 05-04-2011, 07:28 PM

check if i must

Burt Blaze · 05-10-2011, 03:54 PM

ok.

This is sad, Biggs just stands like his chick is bad- but stop pretendin
Like you didn't roll thru and go to the thinnest ass at the weight watchers convention//
Grippin a beer, you trippin in here- tryna stay fresh in a shirt thats lookin straight outta K-Mart
Peep the meat on those heifers, size 16's or better, it's no wonder they keepin the place dark//
Can't be too mad, dude's knockin brew back till they lookin like dimes, he's smarty
Besides, those dames that waddle may be a gang of models at Lane Bryant's catalog release party//
And the chick in the pink and black, thinkin thats a cute outfit she got on
When the only reason her arms up and swingin is cause somebody asked "who's down for a food run?"//
Yo I'm just teasing, this pic made it too easy- but low self esteem means fats chicks usually is tho
You knew from the get go, that one of these bitches would swallow if you told 'em it was Crisco//
So I'm not hatin, eventho this pic looks like it was taken in a dim lit basement- do ya thing dude
But I gotta know, how you fit so many big bottom hoes in one shot without a panoramic angle?//

PoizonusJK · 05-12-2011, 03:19 PM

my apologies for the lateness..y'all can DQ me if you want, either way...didn't wanna just not drop anything tho'...

why you always so lazy in ya photos? maybe you're just slow, bro
rich white kids, in pics like this are the reason we think canadians are homos
i can see ya chest hair from over here.. the fact is it's SO weird
i'm floored flat, cuz you look like borat.. just slightly fatter, with no beard
first he's obese, then slim.. then back to eatin so fast he starts chokin
ya weight bounces up an down like a shock's motion in trucks when offroadin
you pale fucker.. i bet you a faggot that likes suckin off male truckers
an hangin out with huge bitches that resemble piles of whale blubber
the shell bucker, take ya to school.. you gettin played for the fool
i said photoshop some hoes in shots, but these all appear to be related to you
you don't stand a chance in a brawl holmes.. get ya jaw bone crushed
cuz you're either a lawn gnome.. or i guess kidpac is all grown up

* - kidpac/delz...if you don't know who that is then i don't know what the fuck to tell you...pz

MeSsIaH · 05-13-2011, 10:08 PM

burt-only line im really feelin at all is the K-Mart/Place Dark shit... the rest were pretty corny honestly.. expected alot better

PJK- I liked 2 bars of yours, Offroading/starts choking & Male truckes/whale blubber, other then those kinda mild, but those were # 1 & 2 Punch of the battle so im goin PJK here

PJK

Elevated Design · 05-21-2011, 03:20 AM

Burt Blaze:
This is sad, Biggs just stands like his chick is bad- but stop pretendin
Like you didn't roll thru and go to the thinnest ass at the weight watchers convention//
haha, pretty funny

Grippin a beer, you trippin in here- tryna stay fresh in a shirt thats lookin straight outta K-Mart
Peep the meat on those heifers, size 16's or better, it's no wonder they keepin the place dark//
haha, more lolz and nice schemes too

Can't be too mad, dude's knockin brew back till they lookin like dimes, he's smarty
Besides, those dames that waddle may be a gang of models at Lane Bryant's catalog release party//
"he's smarty" was a bit iffy i thought, but other than that the wording was good... still not the hardest punch

And the chick in the pink
and black, thinkin thats a cute outfit she got on
When the only reason her arms up and swingin is cause somebody asked "who's down for a food run?"//
average, setup coulda been slicker though

Yo I'm just teasing, this pic made it too easy- but low self esteem means fats chicks usually is tho
You knew from the get go, that one of these bitches would swallow if you told 'em it was Crisco//
kinda feeling this in way... but it wasn't hard

So I'm not hatin, eventho this pic looks like it was taken in a dim lit basement- do ya thing dude
But I gotta know, how you fit so many big bottom hoes in one shot without a panoramic angle?//
I don't know how but he did... not really doing it for me

PoizonusJK:

why you always so lazy in ya photos? maybe you're just slow, bro
rich white kids, in pics like this are the reason we think canadians are homos
white kids/like this scheme was already but the rest was poor

i can see ya chest hair from over here.. the fact is it's SO weird
i'm floored flat, cuz you look like borat.. just slightly fatter, with no beard
ha, okay

first he's obese, then slim.. then back to eatin so fast he starts chokin
ya weight bounces up an down like a shock's motion in trucks when offroadin
nice stuff

you pale fucker.. i bet you a faggot that likes suckin off male truckers
an hangin out with huge bitches that resemble piles of whale blubber
haha, this was decent imagery

the shell bucker, take ya to school.. you gettin played for the fool
i said photoshop some hoes in shots, but these all appear to be related to you
yeah, i remember that punch you spat in the other battle. this felt rushed to me though

you don't stand a chance in a brawl holmes.. get ya jaw bone crushed
cuz you're either a lawn gnome.. or i guess kidpac is all grown up
nice flow, okay closer

pretty good battle lads but special mention to baze, i think your writing has come a long way, props on that. at the end of the day I'm gonna give this one to PJK though for having the more polished verse. Punches were on par really, "male trucker" and "offroading" were solid... so was blazes "k-mart" and crisco shit.

VOTE: PJK

Urban Eskimo · 05-24-2011, 02:38 PM

I don't have time to do a full breakdown for this so I'll just leave a paragraph explanation. Burt had a pretty good verse, decent jabs at all the females in the picture...but there wasn't one punch directed at me tho. You kept it consistent with your punches, there wasn't one weak one in there...but there also wasn't any that made me say ouch either. PJK's verse was the same in that regard, there weren't any weak punches but none that hit especially hard, the closest he had to a haymaker was his closer...that made me chuckle lol. The difference in this battle was that PJK focused more on punchin me rather than the people around me, and that's what gave him the edge in the end for me.

My vote goes to PJK

KOS

Urban Eskimo · 05-24-2011, 02:39 PM

PoizonusJK wins 3-0

KOS

05-04-2011, 08:50 AM	#1
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Round 4: Burt Blaze vs PoizonusJK Bash Biggs Tournament 12 Lines. Verses are due May 11th (Wednesday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped. __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

05-04-2011, 08:51 AM	#2
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	You two are the only undefeated battlers left in the tourney, good luck. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

05-04-2011, 12:23 PM	#3
Burt Blaze burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI Posts: 2,441	check __________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface

05-04-2011, 07:28 PM	#4
PoizonusJK Yes, it's me... Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are? Posts: 1,154	check if i must __________________ www.soundcloud.com/74thStreetRecords www.soundclick.com/74thStreetRecords www.reverbnation.com/TheRealDetour www.myspace.com/74thStreetRecords ugh.. my word is my pride but wisdom is bleak, and that's a word from the wise serve to survive.. murder and bribe and when it got too heavy, i pushed my burdens aside

05-10-2011, 03:54 PM	#5
Burt Blaze burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI Posts: 2,441	ok. This is sad, Biggs just stands like his chick is bad- but stop pretendin Like you didn't roll thru and go to the thinnest ass at the weight watchers convention// Grippin a beer, you trippin in here- tryna stay fresh in a shirt thats lookin straight outta K-Mart Peep the meat on those heifers, size 16's or better, it's no wonder they keepin the place dark// Can't be too mad, dude's knockin brew back till they lookin like dimes, he's smarty Besides, those dames that waddle may be a gang of models at Lane Bryant's catalog release party// And the chick in the pink and black, thinkin thats a cute outfit she got on When the only reason her arms up and swingin is cause somebody asked "who's down for a food run?"// Yo I'm just teasing, this pic made it too easy- but low self esteem means fats chicks usually is tho You knew from the get go, that one of these bitches would swallow if you told 'em it was Crisco// So I'm not hatin, eventho this pic looks like it was taken in a dim lit basement- do ya thing dude But I gotta know, how you fit so many big bottom hoes in one shot without a panoramic angle?// __________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface Last edited by Burt Blaze; 05-11-2011 at 05:39 AM.

05-12-2011, 03:19 PM	#6
PoizonusJK Yes, it's me... Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are? Posts: 1,154	my apologies for the lateness..y'all can DQ me if you want, either way...didn't wanna just not drop anything tho'... why you always so lazy in ya photos? maybe you're just slow, bro rich white kids, in pics like this are the reason we think canadians are homos i can see ya chest hair from over here.. the fact is it's SO weird i'm floored flat, cuz you look like borat.. just slightly fatter, with no beard first he's obese, then slim.. then back to eatin so fast he starts chokin ya weight bounces up an down like a shock's motion in trucks when offroadin you pale fucker.. i bet you a faggot that likes suckin off male truckers an hangin out with huge bitches that resemble piles of whale blubber the shell bucker, take ya to school.. you gettin played for the fool i said photoshop some hoes in shots, but these all appear to be related to you you don't stand a chance in a brawl holmes.. get ya jaw bone crushed cuz you're either a lawn gnome.. or i guess kidpac is all grown up * - kidpac/delz...if you don't know who that is then i don't know what the fuck to tell you...pz __________________ www.soundcloud.com/74thStreetRecords www.soundclick.com/74thStreetRecords www.reverbnation.com/TheRealDetour www.myspace.com/74thStreetRecords ugh.. my word is my pride but wisdom is bleak, and that's a word from the wise serve to survive.. murder and bribe and when it got too heavy, i pushed my burdens aside

05-13-2011, 10:08 PM	#7
MeSsIaH Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Cap City KY Posts: 847	burt-only line im really feelin at all is the K-Mart/Place Dark shit... the rest were pretty corny honestly.. expected alot better PJK- I liked 2 bars of yours, Offroading/starts choking & Male truckes/whale blubber, other then those kinda mild, but those were # 1 & 2 Punch of the battle so im goin PJK here PJK __________________ Champion hoodie on... prolly lookin bummy wit it had it on a month straight... i been gettin money wit it Styles

05-21-2011, 03:20 AM	#8
Elevated Design vital sines Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW Posts: 860	Burt Blaze: This is sad, Biggs just stands like his chick is bad- but stop pretendin Like you didn't roll thru and go to the thinnest ass at the weight watchers convention// haha, pretty funny Grippin a beer, you trippin in here- tryna stay fresh in a shirt thats lookin straight outta K-Mart Peep the meat on those heifers, size 16's or better, it's no wonder they keepin the place dark// haha, more lolz and nice schemes too Can't be too mad, dude's knockin brew back till they lookin like dimes, he's smarty Besides, those dames that waddle may be a gang of models at Lane Bryant's catalog release party// "he's smarty" was a bit iffy i thought, but other than that the wording was good... still not the hardest punch And the chick in the pink and black, thinkin thats a cute outfit she got on When the only reason her arms up and swingin is cause somebody asked "who's down for a food run?"// average, setup coulda been slicker though Yo I'm just teasing, this pic made it too easy- but low self esteem means fats chicks usually is tho You knew from the get go, that one of these bitches would swallow if you told 'em it was Crisco// kinda feeling this in way... but it wasn't hard So I'm not hatin, eventho this pic looks like it was taken in a dim lit basement- do ya thing dude But I gotta know, how you fit so many big bottom hoes in one shot without a panoramic angle?// I don't know how but he did... not really doing it for me PoizonusJK: why you always so lazy in ya photos? maybe you're just slow, bro rich white kids, in pics like this are the reason we think canadians are homos white kids/like this scheme was already but the rest was poor i can see ya chest hair from over here.. the fact is it's SO weird i'm floored flat, cuz you look like borat.. just slightly fatter, with no beard ha, okay first he's obese, then slim.. then back to eatin so fast he starts chokin ya weight bounces up an down like a shock's motion in trucks when offroadin nice stuff you pale fucker.. i bet you a faggot that likes suckin off male truckers an hangin out with huge bitches that resemble piles of whale blubber haha, this was decent imagery the shell bucker, take ya to school.. you gettin played for the fool i said photoshop some hoes in shots, but these all appear to be related to you yeah, i remember that punch you spat in the other battle. this felt rushed to me though you don't stand a chance in a brawl holmes.. get ya jaw bone crushed cuz you're either a lawn gnome.. or i guess kidpac is all grown up nice flow, okay closer pretty good battle lads but special mention to baze, i think your writing has come a long way, props on that. at the end of the day I'm gonna give this one to PJK though for having the more polished verse. Punches were on par really, "male trucker" and "offroading" were solid... so was blazes "k-mart" and crisco shit. VOTE: PJK __________________ Doin' time was fulla stress G... all the... fightings and stabbings and men finding men sexy one tried to test me... didn't find it humourous beat him with a pillow case filled with cans a tuna fish L

05-24-2011, 02:38 PM	#9
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	I don't have time to do a full breakdown for this so I'll just leave a paragraph explanation. Burt had a pretty good verse, decent jabs at all the females in the picture...but there wasn't one punch directed at me tho. You kept it consistent with your punches, there wasn't one weak one in there...but there also wasn't any that made me say ouch either. PJK's verse was the same in that regard, there weren't any weak punches but none that hit especially hard, the closest he had to a haymaker was his closer...that made me chuckle lol. The difference in this battle was that PJK focused more on punchin me rather than the people around me, and that's what gave him the edge in the end for me. My vote goes to PJK KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

05-24-2011, 02:39 PM	#10
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	PoizonusJK wins 3-0 KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

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