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05-04-2011, 08:56 AM
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST  Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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|  Round 4: MeSsIaH vs NostradaVus Bash Biggs Tournament  12 Lines. Verses are due May 11th (Wednesday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.
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05-04-2011, 04:29 PM
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Haha...check
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05-09-2011, 03:54 AM
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*Hopefully you check in...not my best effort, but its almost 5am here and I have a busy week ahead of me. I SEND EVIL RHYMES>>> Not even at the table, so fat ur date'll say "Get some BREAD, FEED THE GUY" ur fist isn't clenched but ur bitch is a wench without the MEDIEVAL TIMES about to finish it off, she finished y'all off, NUTS BREW IN HER COFFEE cuz that ain't a mixed drink...its dripped dink...a CUP FULL OF BUKKAKE got some on her neck, cum on her breasts...ur GIRLS WRECKLESS should be a bit more discreet...the bitch wore the skeet...a PEARL NECKLACE(is wearing one I think...it could be fake lol) I'll grab the 2 daggers from ur arm, and JAM 'EM IN UR TEMPLES grab a sword from the rack, cut ur head off...body STANDS 'N THEN IT TREMBLES like the first in this mission, this verse has a vision but could SHARE THE SAME WORDS every time you go out, you stay true no doubt cuz you WEAR THE SAME SHIRT http://www.b-boys.com/forums/showthread.php?t=20899 Peace, Good luck Messiah.
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05-09-2011, 03:59 AM
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Shit...I just realized Im too $hort on lines. @ Biggs...can this be 10 instead of 12? If not, I'll drop 2 more tonight after work...I need some sleep.
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05-11-2011, 01:19 PM
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im announcin' the word, i'll put the armor down if im joustin' wit Urb grab that bitch you got ya arm around & put her mouth on the curb im dead serious, she look like some shit out a scary movie oh shit.. i got it.. this cunt looks exactly like Gary Busey!! and dont laugh Biggs.. cuz i'll tell ya truth B you look like a fat Ricky Ricardo off of I Love Lucy wit ya grizzly chest.. been hibernate'n since the middle of winter this bear dont care bout' medieval times.. he jus went for the dinner as for ya bitch, i'd hit er' if she was a little bit thinner but for now.. well.. i'll jus say she aint the pick of the litter this kids a beginner.. im double him.. i get the hustle in when it comes to Biggs only thing doublin's his double chin 
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05-12-2011, 12:13 PM
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good shit Nos.. lets get some votes
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05-12-2011, 03:29 PM
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I SEND EVIL RHYMES>>> Not even at the table, so fat ur date'll say "Get some BREAD, FEED THE GUY" ur fist isn't clenched but ur bitch is a wench without the MEDIEVAL TIMES ^^^ehh...cool inner in the second line, but it comes off as filler...maybe i'm missin the connection between fist isn't clenched an bitch is a wrench...what does his fist have to do with her bein a wrench? about to finish it off, she finished y'all off, NUTS BREW IN HER COFFEE cuz that ain't a mixed drink...its dripped dink...a CUP FULL OF BUKKAKE ^^^dink? wtf? forced to me there, never heard that word before used for anything lol...but the punch itself is good...coulda been like "biggs thinks it's a mixed drink, when it a cup full..." or somethin, i dunno... got some on her neck, cum on her breasts...ur GIRLS WRECKLESS should be a bit more discreet...the bitch wore the skeet...a PEARL NECKLACE(is wearing one I think...it could be fake lol) ^^^ehh... I'll grab the 2 daggers from ur arm, and JAM 'EM IN UR TEMPLES grab a sword from the rack, cut ur head off...body STANDS 'N THEN IT TREMBLES ^^^i like imagery lines, but this one fell short... like the first in this mission, this verse has a vision but could SHARE THE SAME WORDS every time you go out, you stay true no doubt cuz you WEAR THE SAME SHIRT ^^^coulda flipped that concept much harder...internals are there, but come across forced in the sense that they don't really seem to be the right words to deliver the concept...for internals to really work they have to connect to the concept...schemes in general...it seems like you rhyme to rhyme, but the rhymes aren't developin the concept... im announcin' the word, i'll put the armor down if im joustin' wit Urb grab that bitch you got ya arm around & put her mouth on the curb ^^^swaggerish... im dead serious, she look like some shit out a scary movie oh shit.. i got it.. this cunt looks exactly like Gary Busey!! ^^^coulda been flipped harder, but i did laugh at the picture of busey, not even lookin at the chick, just at how crooked dude's eyes are...one way bigger than the other...drugs FUCKED his face up lmao... and dont laugh Biggs.. cuz i'll tell ya truth B you look like a fat Ricky Ricardo off of I Love Lucy ^^^i like this, but mainly cuz my moms used to watch that show religiously...i see the resemblance...i think you coulda worded it better, but good reference... wit ya grizzly chest.. been hibernate'n since the middle of winter this bear dont care bout' medieval times.. he jus went for the dinner ^^^i actually laughed at this one haha... as for ya bitch, i'd hit er' if she was a little bit thinner but for now.. well.. i'll jus say she aint the pick of the litter ^^^this seemed like filler to be honest... this kids a beginner.. im double him.. i get the hustle in when it comes to Biggs only thing doublin's his double chin ^^^ehh... kinda trailed off in the last few lines, but had some good ones in there...not the best verse i've seen from you mayne, dunno what happened here...not a lot of effort it seemed... vote-messiah...close battle, cuz messiah slacked, but also close cuz nostra slacked...this wasn't anywhere near the caliber of his last verse...maybe the picture provided less ammo for you or somethin, i dunno...the went for the dinner line was the big stand out to me, but i liked the lucy reference...gary busey was a good idea, but coulda been delivered more comedically...good match y'all...pz
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05-12-2011, 06:10 PM
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at PJK...wench,not wrench...wench was a medieval term for women back in the day...its not an endearing term.
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05-13-2011, 12:05 AM
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__________________ www.soundcloud.com/74thStreetRecords www.soundclick.com/74thStreetRecords www.reverbnation.com/TheRealDetour www.myspace.com/74thStreetRecords ugh.. my word is my pride but wisdom is bleak, and that's a word from the wise serve to survive.. murder and bribe and when it got too heavy, i pushed my burdens aside | |
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05-14-2011, 06:50 AM
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|  NOSTRADAVUS Not even at the table, so fat ur date'll say "Get some BREAD, FEED THE GUY" ur fist isn't clenched but ur bitch is a wench without the MEDIEVAL TIMES Honestly, I did not understand the "clenched/wench" line at all, homie about to finish it off, she finished y'all off, NUTS BREW IN HER COFFEE cuz that ain't a mixed drink...its dripped dink...a CUP FULL OF BUKKAKE  got some on her neck, cum on her breasts...ur GIRLS WRECKLESS should be a bit more discreet...the bitch wore the skeet...a PEARL NECKLACE(is wearing one I think...it could be fake lol) Dudee...I think you should've focused more on the target here (which would be Urban)...you're putting too much of your focus on his girl....not that you shouldn't...but you should've kept it balanced I'll grab the 2 daggers from ur arm, and JAM 'EM IN UR TEMPLES grab a sword from the rack, cut ur head off...body STANDS 'N THEN IT TREMBLES Flex like the first in this mission, this verse has a vision but could SHARE THE SAME WORDS every time you go out, you stay true no doubt cuz you WEAR THE SAME SHIRT Closer was weak, IMO NostradaVus, I dunno what to say man...your battle verses are usually sick as f*ck...but you did say this wasn't your best effort so I'm guessin' that's why you didn't go hard in this round. Honestly, I was lookin' forward to your drop and when you posted, I was like "I gotta check it out"...and when I read it...I was like "Nahh, seriously?" hahaha. No offense bro, but you should've put a little more effort into your verse. MeSSiah im announcin' the word, i'll put the armor down if im joustin' wit Urb grab that bitch you got ya arm around & put her mouth on the curb Flow is sick as f*ck but the punch itself lacks sting...overall, mediocre opener im dead serious, she look like some shit out a scary movie oh shit.. i got it.. this cunt looks exactly like Gary Busey!! LMFAO...nice and dont laugh Biggs.. cuz i'll tell ya truth B you look like a fat Ricky Ricardo off of I Love Lucy LMAO nice again wit ya grizzly chest.. been hibernate'n since the middle of winter this bear dont care bout' medieval times.. he jus went for the dinner ROFL...You're officially killin' it haha. This is legit! as for ya bitch, i'd hit er' if she was a little bit thinner but for now.. well.. i'll jus say she aint the pick of the litter LOL this kids a beginner.. im double him.. i get the hustle in when it comes to Biggs only thing doublin's his double chin wow, after all those laughs you had to top it off with a weak-ass closer, hahaWhat can I say, Messiah? This ish made me laugh. Plus, the pic on the bottom really added to the: "  " Other than your somewhat weak opener and very weak closer, the rest of this verse was pretty ill IMOMy vote goes to: Messiah |
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05-21-2011, 08:57 AM
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| NostradaVus I SEND EVIL RHYMES>>> Not even at the table, so fat ur date'll say "Get some BREAD, FEED THE GUY" ur fist isn't clenched but ur bitch is a wench without the MEDIEVAL TIMES This opener was kind've disappointing, it was way too simple to hold much weight. The first line is nothin new for this tourney, and the diss on my girl could've been done alot better I think lol...you lacked creativity in this bar. about to finish it off, she finished y'all off, NUTS BREW IN HER COFFEE cuz that ain't a mixed drink...its dripped dink...a CUP FULL OF BUKKAKE Not really feelin this bar, the "nuts brew in her coffee" was clearly a filler rhyme...and the punch wasn't very hard in my opinion either. got some on her neck, cum on her breasts...ur GIRLS WRECKLESS should be a bit more discreet...the bitch wore the skeet...a PEARL NECKLACE(is wearing one I think...it could be fake lol) This was abit better than your last bar, it's a continuation of the same theme but it was done better. I'll grab the 2 daggers from ur arm, and JAM 'EM IN UR TEMPLES grab a sword from the rack, cut ur head off...body STANDS 'N THEN IT TREMBLES There wasn't much to this bar, you incorporated the weapons from the picture but aside from that it's just a generic violence bar. like the first in this mission, this verse has a vision but could SHARE THE SAME WORDS every time you go out, you stay true no doubt cuz you WEAR THE SAME SHIRT I'm likin the jab at me about wearin the same shirt, but I don't feel you executed it with much power...decent closer. MeSsIaH im announcin' the word, i'll put the armor down if im joustin' wit Urb grab that bitch you got ya arm around & put her mouth on the curb This is along the same lines as Nostra's 2nd last bar, you use a Medieval theme but the punch was too simple too hit hard. im dead serious, she look like some shit out a scary movie oh shit.. i got it.. this cunt looks exactly like Gary Busey!! Hahaha, at first I didn't see any relation but the more I look at both pictures I'm seein it more and more lol. This was a comical bar man, good jab. and dont laugh Biggs.. cuz i'll tell ya truth B you look like a fat Ricky Ricardo off of I Love Lucy Haha, another decent jab. wit ya grizzly chest.. been hibernate'n since the middle of winter this bear dont care bout' medieval times.. he jus went for the dinner This was aight, nothin really strong but not bad. as for ya bitch, i'd hit er' if she was a little bit thinner but for now.. well.. i'll jus say she aint the pick of the litter Again this was aight, but also again it was too simple to have much weight to it. this kids a beginner.. im double him.. i get the hustle in when it comes to Biggs only thing doublin's his double chin Pretty good jab here to finish your verse off, it's another fat joke but this time you were slightly creative with it. Overall, I'm gonna have to say I was let down by Nostra's verse...I expected quite abit more outta him. And on the flipside, I was impressed with MeSsIaH in this round. He didn't have any knockout punches but he kept it consistent with jabs, and had comedy mixed in there aswell...so I'm feelin he came out on top in this one. My vote goes to MeSsIaH KOS
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05-21-2011, 09:02 AM
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