Round 4: Black7series vs eRek - B-Boys.com - Hip-Hop Rap Forums

Urban Eskimo · 05-04-2011, 09:00 AM

Bash Biggs Tournament

12 Lines.

Verses are due May 11th (Wednesday) by Midnight .

Voting is highly important to this tournament.
Vote on as many battles as possible.

If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped.
If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.

eRek · 05-04-2011, 11:18 AM

I really don't know what to say..

Urban Eskimo · 05-04-2011, 11:22 AM

Well, you have a week to figure it out.

KOS

eRek · 05-04-2011, 11:46 AM

lmao!

Monaco · 05-04-2011, 03:54 PM

bro...this is not a pic that i can crack on...y'all look perfect LOL....this is gonna be a hard one lol

Monaco · 05-06-2011, 01:39 PM

Early Bird Special, LOL.......

Dawg, it ain't a color thang...cuz you'd be wack whether you was Pewter Green, Red, or Black
It's funny how you askin' me to crack on a pic of y'all starin' at ya computer screen reviewin' a Black7 rap...
You look all confused on how I left you bruised in my last BIGGEST BASH...
while ya girl sittin' back and laughin' watchin' yo' @$$ get attacked

So many pics, and yet NOT ONCE have I seen this miser ballin',
You ain't hard, ni**a...you should be rockin' a visor, golfin'
I know that hat ain't a fashion statement...you just tryin' to hide ya baldness

Don't let the chick fool ya, cuz this brother's gay...
His kids gon' give him somethin' for Mother's Day
When it comes to mirrors, his ugly ass tends to look the other way

Filthy ANIMAL...somebody should find him a VET...
...cuz I'm 'bout to have this b@$tard's @$$ kicked faster than that chick could go from Blonde to Brunette

eRek · 05-13-2011, 07:39 PM

Honestly I don't even know what to say
this pic probably look better if u were out of way
oh how cute... ur behind ur honey pretending that ur lovly
to tell u the truth both of yall are ugly
i see u both infront of ur webcam ur lucky i wasn't there cause erek will have ur bitch slammed
while my stiff jams yall feelin how sick that i am
make u sick fam now she know im the man
strokin it n her hand with u watchin... n not givin a damn
knockin wheels off like the Michelin man.
i be rippin ur plan like ur girl gettin rammed
yes i can...I'll have her swallow my fist plus the hand
she'll be ginuwine wit it sayin she my number #1 FAN
whoa..

*Ginuwine got a track called:#1 fan.

Monaco · 05-14-2011, 11:19 AM

uppin'

PoizonusJK · 05-14-2011, 09:45 PM

hmm...

erek didn't really impress me too much here...both of y'all ugly line was so simplistic i don't know what to say...nothin stood out, real basic concepts with a real basic delivery...you need to spice it up with some humor, some cleverness, some rhyme schemes, etc...

black didn't come nearly as hard as i've seen him before, but i do think it was enough to pull the W...didn't really feel the closer, but i thought the opener was okay...i'd-a left the golfin line at just the first two an left the third bar out, cuz i thought the first two was the punch an i chuckled...the last line kinda let the steam out, real talk...

cool match, but yeah, black took it on most levels, humor, wordplay (not much really on either side), schemes, wit, etc...pz

eRek · 05-15-2011, 07:16 AM

Yeah dude that's the trashiest piece of crap verse I ever wrote..
Kids don't pay no attention to that nonsense, it was written by a drunken fool in 2min... no lie..
ROFLZ!!
on the real though that ish is nonsensical..

Burt Blaze · 05-17-2011, 04:50 AM

BMW

Dawg, it ain't a color thang...cuz you'd be wack whether you was Pewter Green, Red, or Black
It's funny how you askin' me to crack on a pic of y'all starin' at ya computer screen reviewin' a Black7 rap...
You look all confused on how I left you bruised in my last BIGGEST BASH...
while ya girl sittin' back and laughin' watchin' yo' @$$ get attacked

...meh

So many pics, and yet NOT ONCE have I seen this miser ballin',
You ain't hard, ni**a...you should be rockin' a visor, golfin'
I know that hat ain't a fashion statement...you just tryin' to hide ya baldness

straight flow... but not feelin the jokes here

Don't let the chick fool ya, cuz this brother's gay...
His kids gon' give him somethin' for Mother's Day
When it comes to mirrors, his ugly ass tends to look the other way

...could have been utilized better

Filthy ANIMAL...somebody should find him a VET...
...cuz I'm 'bout to have this b@$tard's @$$ kicked faster than that chick could go from Blonde to Brunette

this is ok, but nothin killer

not really feelin the verse, I think the pic could have been used more creatively

~

E

Honestly I don't even know what to say
this pic probably look better if u were out of way
oh how cute... ur behind ur honey pretending that ur lovly
to tell u the truth both of yall are ugly

straight forward approach but nothin clever

i see u both infront of ur webcam ur lucky i wasn't there cause erek will have ur bitch slammed
while my stiff jams yall feelin how sick that i am
make u sick fam now she know im the man
strokin it n her hand with u watchin... n not givin a damn

actually at a loss for words... not feelin any of this

knockin wheels off like the Michelin man.
i be rippin ur plan like ur girl gettin rammed
yes i can...I'll have her swallow my fist plus the hand
she'll be ginuwine wit it sayin she my number #1 FAN
whoa..

whoa... weak

honestly, really weak verse with no creativity

~

If I have to pick one... I'm gonna go with the Beemer guy. I dont think either of them dissed the pic creatively of with much effort.

eRek · 05-17-2011, 07:05 AM

cool alright I believe that's enough for b7 to get the W..
yeah ur right the effort lacked cause I loss motivation for this tourney..It's all good rippin pics aint really my thing every thing feels forced to me..

Urban Eskimo · 05-18-2011, 02:38 PM

I'm with the other 2 guys on sayin this was a pretty weak battle. Black7, you did a good job usin the pic but you didn't come with any heat in your lines. You had some comical ish in there but your punches were all mild, my favourite bar in your verse was your closer...I liked that one. eRek, I wouldn't doubt you on that verse bein a drunken key lol. You've actually been impressin me with some of the bars you dropped in this tournament, but this verse didn't have any mentionable moments lol...your closer was decent I guess. Black7series definately had the better verse in this battle, he didn't come very hard but he was still able to snatch the victory and move on to the semi finals.

My vote goes to Black7series.

KOS

Urban Eskimo · 05-18-2011, 02:39 PM

Black7series wins 3-0

KOS

05-04-2011, 11:18 AM	#2
eRek ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown. Posts: 1,252	I really don't know what to say.. __________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA

05-04-2011, 11:22 AM	#3
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Well, you have a week to figure it out. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

05-04-2011, 11:46 AM	#4
eRek ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown. Posts: 1,252	lmao! __________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA

05-06-2011, 01:39 PM	#6
Monaco Junior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 275	Early Bird Special, LOL....... Dawg, it ain't a color thang...cuz you'd be wack whether you was Pewter Green, Red, or Black It's funny how you askin' me to crack on a pic of y'all starin' at ya computer screen reviewin' a Black7 rap... You look all confused on how I left you bruised in my last BIGGEST BASH... while ya girl sittin' back and laughin' watchin' yo' @$$ get attacked So many pics, and yet NOT ONCE have I seen this miser ballin', You ain't hard, nia...you should be rockin' a visor, golfin' I know that hat ain't a fashion statement...you just tryin' to hide ya baldness Don't let the chick fool ya, cuz this brother's gay... His kids gon' give him somethin' for Mother's Day When it comes to mirrors, his ugly ass tends to look the other way Filthy ANIMAL...somebody should find him a VET... ...cuz I'm 'bout to have this b@$tard's @$$ kicked faster than that chick could go from Blonde** to Brunette Last edited by Monaco; 05-06-2011 at 01:57 PM.

05-13-2011, 07:39 PM	#7
eRek ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown. Posts: 1,252	Honestly I don't even know what to say this pic probably look better if u were out of way oh how cute... ur behind ur honey pretending that ur lovly to tell u the truth both of yall are ugly i see u both infront of ur webcam ur lucky i wasn't there cause erek will have ur bitch slammed while my stiff jams yall feelin how sick that i am make u sick fam now she know im the man strokin it n her hand with u watchin... n not givin a damn knockin wheels off like the Michelin man. i be rippin ur plan like ur girl gettin rammed yes i can...I'll have her swallow my fist plus the hand she'll be ginuwine wit it sayin she my number #1 FAN whoa.. Ginuwine got a track called:#1 fan. __________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA Last edited by eRek; 05-14-2011 at 10:56 AM.*

05-04-2011, 09:00 AM	#1
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Round 4: Black7series vs eRek Bash Biggs Tournament 12 Lines. Verses are due May 11th (Wednesday) by Midnight . Voting is highly important to this tournament. Vote on as many battles as possible. If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped. __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

05-04-2011, 03:54 PM	#5
Monaco Junior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 275	bro...this is not a pic that i can crack on...y'all look perfect LOL....this is gonna be a hard one lol

05-14-2011, 11:19 AM	#8
Monaco Junior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 275	uppin'

05-14-2011, 09:45 PM	#9
PoizonusJK Yes, it's me... Join Date: Mar 2000 Location: It's 3 A.M. - Do you know where your parents are? Posts: 1,154	hmm... erek didn't really impress me too much here...both of y'all ugly line was so simplistic i don't know what to say...nothin stood out, real basic concepts with a real basic delivery...you need to spice it up with some humor, some cleverness, some rhyme schemes, etc... black didn't come nearly as hard as i've seen him before, but i do think it was enough to pull the W...didn't really feel the closer, but i thought the opener was okay...i'd-a left the golfin line at just the first two an left the third bar out, cuz i thought the first two was the punch an i chuckled...the last line kinda let the steam out, real talk... cool match, but yeah, black took it on most levels, humor, wordplay (not much really on either side), schemes, wit, etc...pz __________________ www.soundcloud.com/74thStreetRecords www.soundclick.com/74thStreetRecords www.reverbnation.com/TheRealDetour www.myspace.com/74thStreetRecords ugh.. my word is my pride but wisdom is bleak, and that's a word from the wise serve to survive.. murder and bribe and when it got too heavy, i pushed my burdens aside

05-15-2011, 07:16 AM	#10
eRek ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown. Posts: 1,252	Yeah dude that's the trashiest piece of crap verse I ever wrote.. Kids don't pay no attention to that nonsense, it was written by a drunken fool in 2min... no lie.. ROFLZ!! on the real though that ish is nonsensical.. __________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA

05-17-2011, 04:50 AM	#11
Burt Blaze burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI Posts: 2,441	BMW Dawg, it ain't a color thang...cuz you'd be wack whether you was Pewter Green, Red, or Black It's funny how you askin' me to crack on a pic of y'all starin' at ya computer screen reviewin' a Black7 rap... You look all confused on how I left you bruised in my last BIGGEST BASH... while ya girl sittin' back and laughin' watchin' yo' @$$ get attacked ...meh So many pics, and yet NOT ONCE have I seen this miser ballin', You ain't hard, nia...you should be rockin' a visor, golfin' I know that hat ain't a fashion statement...you just tryin' to hide ya baldness straight flow... but not feelin the jokes here Don't let the chick fool ya, cuz this brother's gay... His kids gon' give him somethin' for Mother's Day When it comes to mirrors, his ugly ass tends to look the other way ...could have been utilized better Filthy ANIMAL...somebody should find him a VET... ...cuz I'm 'bout to have this b@$tard's @$$ kicked faster than that chick could go from Blonde to Brunette this is ok, but nothin killer not really feelin the verse, I think the pic could have been used more creatively ~ E Honestly I don't even know what to say this pic probably look better if u were out of way oh how cute... ur behind ur honey pretending that ur lovly to tell u the truth both of yall are ugly straight forward approach but nothin clever i see u both infront of ur webcam ur lucky i wasn't there cause erek will have ur bitch slammed while my stiff jams yall feelin how sick that i am make u sick fam now she know im the man strokin it n her hand with u watchin... n not givin a damn actually at a loss for words... not feelin any of this knockin wheels off like the Michelin man. i be rippin ur plan like ur girl gettin rammed yes i can...I'll have her swallow my fist plus the hand she'll be ginuwine wit it sayin she my number #1 FAN whoa.. whoa... weak honestly, really weak verse with no creativity ~ If I have to pick one... I'm gonna go with the Beemer guy. I dont think either of them dissed the pic creatively of with much effort. __________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House** (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface

05-17-2011, 07:05 AM	#12
eRek ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown. Posts: 1,252	cool alright I believe that's enough for b7 to get the W.. yeah ur right the effort lacked cause I loss motivation for this tourney..It's all good rippin pics aint really my thing every thing feels forced to me.. __________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA

05-18-2011, 02:38 PM	#13
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	I'm with the other 2 guys on sayin this was a pretty weak battle. Black7, you did a good job usin the pic but you didn't come with any heat in your lines. You had some comical ish in there but your punches were all mild, my favourite bar in your verse was your closer...I liked that one. eRek, I wouldn't doubt you on that verse bein a drunken key lol. You've actually been impressin me with some of the bars you dropped in this tournament, but this verse didn't have any mentionable moments lol...your closer was decent I guess. Black7series definately had the better verse in this battle, he didn't come very hard but he was still able to snatch the victory and move on to the semi finals. My vote goes to Black7series. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

05-18-2011, 02:39 PM	#14
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Black7series wins 3-0 KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

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