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05-25-2011, 01:56 PM
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|  Semi-Final: Elevated Design vs MeSsIaH Bash Biggs Tournament Me and a buddy with Doug Gilmour from the Toronto Maple Leafs (I'm in the blue shirt)  12 Lines. Verses are due June 2nd (Thursday) by Midnight . If you post first you cannot edit your verse after your opponent has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.
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05-25-2011, 04:00 PM
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__________________ Champion hoodie on... prolly lookin bummy wit it had it on a month straight... i been gettin money wit it Styles Last edited by MeSsIaH; 05-25-2011 at 07:23 PM. |
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05-26-2011, 01:05 AM
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| vital sines  Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: NSW
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06-01-2011, 06:37 PM
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your seein' a man, 2 kids, and 2 hands on hips but what you CANT see is Biggs has his pants unzipped!! kid ya hommie lookin like he aint ate in a while.. what is this? feed the children canadian style? his mom HAD to be a crackhead or a pill whore i feel for the lil fella.. he was a tablet away from stillborn!! this a real war, i'll drop bombs on you the size of billboards im Atlanta Brave, graves? i doug more than gilmour!! he aint a allstar, he drove there in a golf cart all dressed up.. and couldn't even get in the Ball Park!! so signin off.. its MeSsIaH.. known for merkin the amateurs PS. someone PLEASE tell that lil brat there aint no surfing in Canada!!
__________________ Champion hoodie on... prolly lookin bummy wit it had it on a month straight... i been gettin money wit it Styles Last edited by MeSsIaH; 06-01-2011 at 06:59 PM. |
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06-04-2011, 08:31 PM
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oi sorry man, i've had a fucked week and i've lost net access for a bit. i'll try 'n drop since pj ain't droppin now by the looks of it. i'll drop when i can
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06-05-2011, 03:19 PM
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Feed the children Canadian style...haha. sick drop, Mess
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06-10-2011, 05:50 AM
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guess its a no show
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06-10-2011, 06:09 PM
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the finals picture better not be a baby photo REAL TALK...
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06-11-2011, 08:29 AM
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06-11-2011, 08:33 AM
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06-11-2011, 12:31 PM
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your seein' a man, 2 kids, and 2 hands on hips but what you CANT see is Biggs has his pants unzipped!! ^^^i like the concept, think it coulda been worded/delivered in a more vicious way, but i still liked it.. kid ya hommie lookin like he aint ate in a while.. what is this? feed the children canadian style? ^^^once again, coulda been worded/delivered to be harder hittin, but i like the idea behind it... his mom HAD to be a crackhead or a pill whore i feel for the lil fella.. he was a tablet away from stillborn!! ^^^this is cool... this a real war, i'll drop bombs on you the size of billboards im Atlanta Brave, graves? i doug more than gilmour!! ^^^ehh, i get it, but not my favorite line from the verse... he aint a allstar, he drove there in a golf cart all dressed up.. and couldn't even get in the Ball Park!! ^^^haha that was kinda funny actually... so signin off.. its MeSsIaH.. known for merkin the amateurs PS. someone PLEASE tell that lil brat there aint no surfing in Canada!! ^^^same thing i said on the first two lines... all in all, you had some funny ideas an observations behind this, but the way you delivered the concepts was too basic...now, the basic shit can work, but the swag/style of it's gotta be hot...refer to the verse in our one on one battle to see what i mean, the style was drippin off it...you've improved your shit conceptually speakin, but it seems as if you've sacrificed some of that style that made your stuff so enjoyable to read in the first place... bring more of the style/flow/schemes back into it, but still come with the kinda concepts you're usin...it'll spice 'em up an make 'em that much more effective...if you're all flow/style/schemes, it's kinda bland...if you're all concepts an no style/flow/schemes, it's kinda bland...you wanna be the unification of both lol...don't mistake all this as hate, just tryna give you some helpful critique homeskillet...good verse, all the same...pz
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06-13-2011, 03:53 PM
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your seein' a man, 2 kids, and 2 hands on hips but what you CANT see is Biggs has his pants unzipped!! Hahaha, I liked this bar as an opener...somethin comical to kick things off. kid ya hommie lookin like he aint ate in a while.. what is this? feed the children canadian style? Damn! lol, this was tight...so simple but still ill. his mom HAD to be a crackhead or a pill whore i feel for the lil fella.. he was a tablet away from stillborn!! I know this isn't directed at me but damn you're still goin in on this ish, every line is heat so far. this a real war, i'll drop bombs on you the size of billboards im Atlanta Brave, graves? i doug more than gilmour!! This bar was basically just flex lines, it was a decent concept but it was missing the power. he aint a allstar, he drove there in a golf cart all dressed up.. and couldn't even get in the Ball Park!! Not bad, again the diss wasn't directed at me but it was still aight tho. so signin off.. its MeSsIaH.. known for merkin the amateurs PS. someone PLEASE tell that lil brat there aint no surfing in Canada!! Haha, good closer...another solid punch. Overall, I thought you had a pretty solid verse homey. You didn't focus on me very much with those punches, which loses you some points...but the majority of your verse was still tight, I think this just might be my favourite verse this round...it's too bad ED no showed. Good luck in the final man. KOS
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06-19-2011, 07:49 AM
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| MeSsIaH wins. Elevated Design no shows. KOS
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