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07-28-2011, 05:34 PM
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST  Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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|  Final: Black7series vs MeSsIaH vs PoizonusJK Bash Biggs Tournament Final  16 Lines. Verses are due August 5th (Friday) by Midnight . If you post first you cannot edit your verse after 2nd person has dropped. If you post second you cannot edit your verse after 3rd person has dropped. If you post third you cannot edit your verse after a vote has been dropped.
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07-28-2011, 06:51 PM
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wow...
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07-28-2011, 09:46 PM
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07-29-2011, 06:00 AM
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07-29-2011, 01:03 PM
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| Hahaha, good luck boys  KOS
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08-05-2011, 11:04 AM
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I always wondered whether you was a Kim or a Lee/Kimora Lee and I ain't talkin' Simmons dude You been in the closet so long that you left ya boxes in the livin' room He got that infant bird pose...like he tryin' to fly, but he'll fall and cry What you really need is a bigger bra and a smaller tie Look at you...maybe if you was surrounded by a bunch of dumbo fags, you'd spew eminence But how do I take you seriously when you look like a jumbo bag of M&Ms? Makin' this a DEFAULT pic would make ya BEACON DROP...Someone keep this creep on lock! His head looks like a mutant orange with a leaf on top Biggs looks like he gettin' ready to move to New York quick and marry a guy* F*cka, this could be a "Before" pic from "How Do I Look?" or "Hoarding: Buried Alive" Skip the french fries fatty fellow, do some Pec Flys Ain't nothin' whiz/Wiz about you besides that "Black and Yellow" necktie He only k when he fed like he reppin' Kevin Federline And that $2 rug the only time this pu$$y's steppin' outta line As far as the prize money's concerned...I only take CASH deposits That's probly why this CHUBBY THIEF look like he just got back from Baskin' ROBBIN' * NY just approved gay marriage, lol Last edited by Monaco; 08-05-2011 at 02:21 PM. |
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08-06-2011, 12:05 AM
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me? im jet fly.. takin bitches for test drives you? you sex guys.. we can tell by the neck tie dawg, whats wit the bra? its a shell of ya breast size yea, sure its a joke.. why dont you tell us the next lie Die!! you fat bitch.. and quit postin ya drag pics how long you been on calfs dick for that shit? faggot i bash biggs, if for nothin else jackin his moms fit and comin out the closet rockin some Elton John shit you get no props.. no applauds when the show stops nobody cares if you can do the robot in no socks lay off the corn' pops and pork' chops, its yo option dude or in 5 years you'll be givin blow jobs for food im a rap king.. you aint shit but a drag queen a fat fein for caffeine.. you need to be on the track team when the smoke clears count the votes.. and i'll stack up my profit youve been bashed Biggs.. now take ya faggot ass back in the closet
__________________ Champion hoodie on... prolly lookin bummy wit it had it on a month straight... i been gettin money wit it Styles Last edited by MeSsIaH; 08-06-2011 at 12:26 AM. |
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08-06-2011, 05:52 AM
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my bad y'all i completely spaced this shit out, been mad busy for me lately...DQ if you want, my apologies either way... i don't have to go crazy-with-a-hatchet, or put this manlady-in-a-casket listen-bro,-it's-true.. this pic-alone-is-PROOF, that all canadians-are-faggots i got-stretchers, for this cross-dresser.. when my crew-stomp-you this ain't mulan-rouge, listen julie newmar-2.. ya username should be too-wong-fu now, ain't-that-a-disgrace.. lookin like he mixed ajax-with-his-haze smoked himself retarded, grabbed a bic an only shaved-HALF-of-his-face i'm not a fake-bastard-that-hates.. this rocky horror masquerade-is-valiant a fat dude in a bra, strikin homo poses for photos? another saturday-at-alan's but this is more-than-rap.. you got a donkey's face an a horse's-swag an the fact you wear an orange-flag, just proves that you're-a-fag good L-rd,-you're-fat.. i'm surprised your broke ass could even afford-that-hat of course-it's-sad.. is it that hard to make ya clothes at least SORTA-match? i'm aggressively-natured.. you'd sell sexual-favors, for X-to-a-raver at best-you're-a-flamer.. an every round the pics you post get progressively-gayer so no matter saint-or-a-sinner.. the $100 is mine, i been slayin-beginners accept y'all fate-an-chill, i'm 'bout to take-the-bill, like payin-for-dinner g/luck...pz
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08-07-2011, 01:46 PM
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| I'll drop a vote on this in the next day or two, been too busy today. OPEN FOR VOTES!! KOS
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08-08-2011, 03:08 PM
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uppppppin' for votes homies |
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08-09-2011, 07:15 AM
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G/luck fellas ^^^4 Votes
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08-13-2011, 12:49 PM
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not that keen on that one bruv
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08-15-2011, 02:17 PM
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| Black7series I always wondered whether you was a Kim or a Lee/Kimora Lee and I ain't talkin' Simmons dude You been in the closet so long that you left ya boxes in the livin' room This was a pretty good opener, you had some wordplay in the setup, and the "in the closet" punch was pretty original with use of the picture. He got that infant bird pose...like he tryin' to fly, but he'll fall and cry What you really need is a bigger bra and a smaller tie Haha, solid jab here...the setup could've been abit better in relation to the punch but this was still a good bar. Look at you...maybe if you was surrounded by a bunch of dumbo fags, you'd spew eminence But how do I take you seriously when you look like a jumbo bag of M&Ms? This didn't have much power to it but you made good use of the picture, decent bar. Makin' this a DEFAULT pic would make ya BEACON DROP...Someone keep this creep on lock! His head looks like a mutant orange with a leaf on top This is one of the mild bars in your verse. Biggs looks like he gettin' ready to move to New York quick and marry a guy* F*cka, this could be a "Before" pic from "How Do I Look?" or "Hoarding: Buried Alive" This is my favourite bar in your verse, definitely feelin this one. You had a punch in both lines, and you took full adavantage of the picture too...tight shit son. Skip the french fries fatty fellow, do some Pec Flys Ain't nothin' whiz/Wiz about you besides that "Black and Yellow" necktie I'm likin the concept of this ish, but I don't feel that it was used to it's full potential...the punch could've been set up abit better. He only k when he fed like he reppin' Kevin Federline And that $2 rug the only time this pu$$y's steppin' outta line This is the other bar in your verse I found to be mild, the punch was aight but I felt the first line was forced. As far as the prize money's concerned...I only take CASH deposits That's probly why this CHUBBY THIEF look like he just got back from Baskin' ROBBIN' This was aight, decent closer. MeSsIaH me? im jet fly.. takin bitches for test drives you? you sex guys.. we can tell by the neck tie dawg, whats wit the bra? its a shell of ya breast size yea, sure its a joke.. why dont you tell us the next lie These 4 lines were a weak start to your verse, the punches are generic with no creativity to them. Die!! you fat bitch.. and quit postin ya drag pics how long you been on calfs dick for that shit? faggot Now this is the type of stuff I'm lookin for lol, the punch could've had more sting to it but I like this. i bash biggs, if for nothin else jackin his moms fit and comin out the closet rockin some Elton John shit This is mild, just doesn't have much weight to it. you get no props.. no applauds when the show stops nobody cares if you can do the robot in no socks  This bar made me laugh, it's not the hardest hit but I'm feelin it.lay off the corn' pops and pork' chops, its yo option dude or in 5 years you'll be givin blow jobs for food im a rap king.. you aint shit but a drag queen a fat fein for caffeine.. you need to be on the track team Some more weak lines, the creativity just ain't there homey. when the smoke clears count the votes.. and i'll stack up my profit youve been bashed Biggs.. now take ya faggot ass back in the closet Mild closer. PJK i don't have to go crazy-with-a-hatchet, or put this manlady-in-a-casket listen-bro,-it's-true.. this pic-alone-is-PROOF, that all canadians-are-faggots This was ok, the punch is mild but the multi's make up for it. i got-stretchers, for this cross-dresser.. when my crew-stomp-you this ain't mulan-rouge, listen julie newmar-2.. ya username should be too-wong-fu Haha, this was good...it's a well rounded bar. now, ain't-that-a-disgrace.. lookin like he mixed ajax-with-his-haze smoked himself retarded, grabbed a bic an only shaved-HALF-of-his-face You're the only one who noticed that, I'm feelin this punch you formed from it lol.i'm not a fake-bastard-that-hates.. this rocky horror masquerade-is-valiant a fat dude in a bra, strikin homo poses for photos? another saturday-at-alan's but this is more-than-rap.. you got a donkey's face an a horse's-swag an the fact you wear an orange-flag, just proves that you're-a-fag Not feelin these lines, and for the same reason I told MeSsIaH...the creativity just ain't there. good L-rd,-you're-fat.. i'm surprised your broke ass could even afford-that-hat of course-it's-sad.. is it that hard to make ya clothes at least SORTA-match? Haha, this didn't land very hard but it was comical. i'm aggressively-natured.. you'd sell sexual-favors, for X-to-a-raver at best-you're-a-flamer.. an every round the pics you post get progressively-gayer This was aight, mostly mild...multi's were on point tho. so no matter saint-or-a-sinner.. the $100 is mine, i been slayin-beginners accept y'all fate-an-chill, i'm 'bout to take-the-bill, like payin-for-dinner This is my favourite closer of the 3 verses, good finish. Overall, good showing guys...props to the 3 of you for makin it to the final of this tournament. MeSsIaH, I have to admit that I was expecting more from you in this one. You became one of my favourite cats to read throughout this tournament, but in this verse you didn't seem to bring much heat. You had some funny ish in there but nothin that made alot of impact. PoizonusJK, your verse had it's ups and downs...it was the consistency that lacked most. You already know your rhymes/flow was on point, but the majority of your punches didn't land real hard. I know you've been busy with your live battles and shows, so just wanna say I appreciate you takin the time to show for this ish. Black7series, in my opinion your verse was the best of the 3. You had the most creativity, my favourite bar of the battle...and the most well rounded verse in this battle. So with that said, you get my vote. My vote goes to Black7series. KOS
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08-15-2011, 05:30 PM
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wtf is up with your pictures tho'...REAL TALK...
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08-20-2011, 09:38 PM
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thx for the feedback + vote, biggs ... uppin' for more votes pleaasee  |
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08-22-2011, 08:51 AM
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I don't know if my vote will count because I'm not gonna do a bar by bar breakdown. Droppin some feed because Urban Eskimo asked me to. I thought it was between Detour & Black. I liked Messiah's robot with no socks line, it was my favorite out of everyones, but the other lines didnt stand out to me. I have to agree that I think Black took this one. It was honestly pretty close even though Detour hurriedly wrote this. The complex multies make it nicely flow but oftentimes take away from a harder punch; because of that I feel Black had his punches on point just a little more. I liked his opener, been in the closet so long left boxes in the living room and the steppin outta line bar. It's hard to say who woulda won this in person cause Detour's multies are sick as fuck to listen to live, but for this I'm going with Black. Vote: Black7series |
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08-23-2011, 07:01 PM
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| B7S He got that infant bird pose...like he tryin' to fly, but he'll fall and cry What you really need is a bigger bra and a smaller tie Biggs looks like he gettin' ready to move to New York quick and marry a guy* F*cka, this could be a "Before" pic from "How Do I Look?" or "Hoarding: Buried Alive" MeSsIaH Die!! you fat bitch.. and quit postin ya drag pics how long you been on calfs dick for that shit? faggot PJK i got-stretchers, for this cross-dresser.. when my crew-stomp-you this ain't mulan-rouge, listen julie newmar-2.. ya username should be too-wong-fu vote: Black7 I think black edged this out over the other two. i find his two highlit bars to be funnier than the others. Peejs mutli where technically pretty good, having to rush forced him to reduced the quality of his bars. as for messi, he seemed to run out of solid concepts and was stringing shit together so could get this over with.
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08-25-2011, 04:03 AM
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will edit in my vote when i get off work
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08-30-2011, 04:01 AM
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PJK took it...
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08-30-2011, 02:02 PM
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| Black7series leads 3-0, still waitin on votes from Burt Blaze, Methodic and Kempo. (Aswell as anybody else who wants to leave a detailed vote.) KOS
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08-30-2011, 02:08 PM
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__________________ www.soundcloud.com/74thStreetRecords www.soundclick.com/74thStreetRecords www.reverbnation.com/TheRealDetour www.myspace.com/74thStreetRecords ugh.. my word is my pride but wisdom is bleak, and that's a word from the wise serve to survive.. murder and bribe and when it got too heavy, i pushed my burdens aside | |
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09-12-2011, 10:30 AM
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got to fully breakdown my vote later but I will say PJK took this one...funny verses all around had me rolling but yes PJK has my vote...(edit later today or tomorrow with a full breakdown)
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09-13-2011, 03:50 PM
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| pjk: i'm aggressively-natured.. you'd sell sexual-favors, for X-to-a-raver at best-you're-a-flamer.. an every round the pics you post get progressively-gayer Honestly, expected more... way more from this verse. I don't know if it's a combination of the current battles you're in and the state of B-Boys today, but something was not clickin' for me. The flow is straight here, as ALWAYS. I can never knock the flow or the creative rhyme schemes... but the punches really were not doing it for me here. *** mess: i bash biggs, if for nothin else jackin his moms fit and comin out the closet rockin some Elton John shit Not a bad verse. A lot of the lines made me smirk. It did seem that most of it was more over simplified concepts to make a forced rhyme scheme work... example would be the corn pops/ pork chops/ no socks line. Much like P's verse, I simply expected more. *** black: Makin' this a DEFAULT pic would make ya BEACON DROP...Someone keep this creep on lock! His head looks like a mutant orange with a leaf on top The flow was a bit choppy in parts but you stayed focused on delivering punchlines directly related to the pic. You didn't resort to run of the mill Canadian or fat jokes just to meet the line requirement. Overall, the most relevant verse of this round... the most enjoyable to read as well. *** Vote = Black7Series Closer battle than my breakdown makes it sound but I feel that PJK & Mess fell short where Black excelled.
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09-20-2011, 02:53 PM
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| Black7series wins 4-2-0 and the $100 cash prize! I'll message you about payment options. KOS
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