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| Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Woodbridge,VA
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| 10 LINES No biting/ Feeding/ Recycling Check in due in 48 hrs. Verse due within 48 hrs of check in 1st verse can edit until 2nd verse posted 2nd verse can be edited unitl 1st vote is cast First to 5 votes wins (3-0 KO) All votes must be explained Must check in first before posting your verse Last edited by UZI; 12-18-2011 at 12:29 PM. |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Woodbridge,VA
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Check....
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| | #3 |
| Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2011
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check ... but as this is my first battle post on this website, I'll break tradition and drop first. Expect heat in ~24 hrs. And I'm doing it 10/10 instead of your 12/12.
Last edited by Apocalypse; 12-14-2011 at 11:32 AM. |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2011
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Don't need no gun, I'll just murk you with my words: your shit is worthless And what's worse is this UZI got virulently bit shit in his verses U jus can't hold ya own, we ain't knowin where your bitch-ass burb is In the groves of Woodbridge where the only known homes is houses And now this little mouse has got the clout to open his mouth His verbal stouses sound like they writ by stupid gits frum tha South Call the mods, and change ya name to Rabbit, now! Cuz, to be accurate, that's how wack you bust out When u read about UZI, u'll neva see "he punches tight" You're only black when ya ass's amongst a bunch a whites Last edited by Apocalypse; 12-12-2011 at 11:05 AM. Reason: Typing correction: first two bars were joined as one |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Woodbridge,VA
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This nigga says im worthless, but the truth is, im on the top floor;presidential suite while your stuck in the lobby Man your flow is so simple, so deformed & weak, dude you sound like Bill Cosby* You think your the next best cat in the game ?, well just makes you a pussy nigga; feline Me by the way you can call me a beast, grey hound; canine Its because of this that i show no mercy to a noob like you, so get on your knees and start beggin Man dont test me fool cause ill murder your ass, tear down your wall. You can call me Ronald Reagan** And let me tell you...."Apocalypse", that your next...on my list Gettin ready to be put....on my dish, cuz imma monster, but not a cannibal so dont call me....Albert Fish*** Your flow was wack like a lumped component, as for me i took this battle && owned it , I guess im done now & like Eminem, i've sung for the moment * Bill Cosby-an American comedian, actor, author ** Ronald Reagan- Former American President, Ended the cold war in Europe, tore down berlin wall ***Albert Fish- A serial killar & cannibal in the early-mid 1900's Last edited by UZI; 12-16-2011 at 05:43 PM. Reason: typin error .... |
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| | #6 |
| Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2011
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.?. I thought there was no feeding in this one .?. whatevs. I'll drop my second one in here in ~24hrs. And it'll only be ten as well. |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Woodbridge,VA
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And why are you gonna drop a second verse ? There's no need..... Last edited by UZI; 01-14-2012 at 12:27 PM. | |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2011
Posts: 24
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And as for the feeding? ... well, if the voters can't see it, I guess your bitch ass will get away with it. And, for the voters: this part of Uzi's verse got added after the original posting, and explained as a "typin' correction": Last edited by Apocalypse; 12-17-2011 at 04:17 AM. | |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Woodbridge,VA
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2nd of all, That's because i had originally wrote something else ... | |
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| | #10 |
| Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens
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If this open for judging.... V/ Uzi this was an inexperienced battle. I give it to uzi cuz he had the only concise punch with bill cosby line. Both you guys you could some more wit in your punches. As for the feeding, I think he was referring to the worthless rebuttal but he didnt really flip your punch on you to really be a feed, so it kinda was feed but not really.
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| | #11 |
| Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2011
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^If it weren't a feed, it was a straight up bite of the concept. And Uzi, you had nothing else there. You rewrote your verse after posting it. LMAO. Any other site would see you lose instantly for that. And change the thread title to show it's open for votes. 0-1 Uzi. Uppin. Last edited by Apocalypse; 12-17-2011 at 09:23 PM. |
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| | #12 | |
| Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Woodbridge,VA
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Dude , stop suckin' me and just let 'em votee iight ? | |
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| Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2011
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| This battle's been pending too long, so I'm gonna close it out with a quick vote. I've gotta go with UZI aswell, his verse was more creative with the punches which was enough to get the win over Apocalypse. My vote goes to UZI. KOS
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| UZI wins. KOS
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