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| Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens
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10 lines min bite, feed, recycle = dq Limit is 1 week from 2nd check
__________________ I used to be a lonely man only mad Until I got a million dollars, shiiiiiiiit Now if i only had some fuckking hair I'd pull it, faster than a bullet out of Tupac's chest Before the ambulance came too late to do it - Em Last edited by Rudy; 01-08-2012 at 12:10 PM. |
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| Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens
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__________________ I used to be a lonely man only mad Until I got a million dollars, shiiiiiiiit Now if i only had some fuckking hair I'd pull it, faster than a bullet out of Tupac's chest Before the ambulance came too late to do it - Em |
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| Newb Member Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: Florida
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| Newb Member Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: Florida
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I aint tryin to be Rude but let's not get confused You couldn't blaze Kryp if you was smokin on a doob* So now that the records straight, I aint layin down my jersey for Rudy At the end of this movie, Kryp'll leave this Brother Bluer than John Belushi** Let's face it, you to small to play ball, you aint meant for the fame Kryp spit flames that'll leave Rudy Hunchbacked at Notre Dame Simple and plain, to sooth the pain, you gone need more than just Asprin cuz shots from the ratchet, leave Sean Astin colder than Aspen, closed casket *** Try to Jack my Victory and Ima Lex Luger ya**** put the Ruger to Ruettiger, introduce him to lucifer Explinations (my bad if to many, I guess I'll learn over time how this is done) * Kryp is a term for weed in florida. not sure if they use that term else where. ** John Belushi was an actor who stared in the movie Blues Brothers. *** Sean Astin is the actor who played Daniel "Rudy" Ruettiger in the movie Rudy. **** Lex Luger is a wrestler who defeated the wrestler Jack Victory to defend one of his title matches. |
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| Requiescat in pace Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Woodside, Queens
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thought he playd for Miami U, dude just lied He only calls himself a hurricane cuz he blew some guys Pussy? Thats a huge no no for this homo thug queen Cuz he kryp n keeps it gangsta for his slo-mo love scenes I kno u been up in the ass men cuz ya quick to pick up on a catchy trend When uve been in the closet so long, u develop a strong fashion sense Im combustible like huxtible, you wont get a deal When it comes to talent ima coogi, n u dnt fit the Bill This emo fuck writes poems cuz life is a bitch You dont wear your heart on your sleeves... you just slicin your wrists I got the mightest wit, you just like to be whipped He only crossed swords with me cuz he thought it might be with dicks
__________________ I used to be a lonely man only mad Until I got a million dollars, shiiiiiiiit Now if i only had some fuckking hair I'd pull it, faster than a bullet out of Tupac's chest Before the ambulance came too late to do it - Em Last edited by Rudy; 01-04-2012 at 11:41 PM. |
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| Newb Member Join Date: Jan 2012
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this was nice,,sports references on point..@rudy,,,the cosby lines was straight nasty,,,i got one,,but it doesnt compare,,,salute,,,,@kryp,,nice,,i aint laying down my jersey for rudy?,,,crazy!!!,,,one thing i will say,,and its not a critisicm...i have always felt if u have to explain your punchlines,,,and i see that alot on these web battles,,then it probably wasnt that hot of a line,,im just saying,,it should be witty enuff to catch,,but u guys rocked it,,salute
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| Newb Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: COMPTON, CA
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Yall dudes whack/ an that's fact/ trump niggas wit intro raps rhymes sick like native chicks/ flo's quick like heart attacks/ when i say i'm back/ it ain't no return on the reference/ been here/ been queer/ been bestowing niggas blessings/ porterhouse for the breakfast/ Wendy's for my sketches/ cause i created you dupe's like homemade soup/ when i was blazin in the coupe/ yall was hustlin on the stoop/ sellin nickles in groups just to match my youth |
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| Newb Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: COMPTON, CA
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In all honesty, "Kryp" was real nice "shots from the ratchet, leave Sean Astin colder than Aspen, closed casket" - NICE flo!!! @Rudy "You dont wear your heart on your sleeves... you just slicin your wrists I got the mightest wit, you just like to be whipped" - NICE!!! |
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| Newb Member Join Date: Jan 2012
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Rudy, most definitely. This is powerful:
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| Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2012
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Try to Jack my Victory and Ima Lex Luger ya**** put the Ruger to Ruettiger, introduce him to lucifer best line by first guy.........^^ I kno u been up in the ass men cuz ya quick to pick up on a catchy trend When uve been in the closet so long, u develop a strong fashion sense best line by second guy^^ I'd call it a tie :/ I can't vote... Someone vote in my battle? |
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| N8've Pryde, nigs Join Date: Dec 2007
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decent battle. I felt kryp had better and punches and delivery. less misses. wordplay was a bit obvious. anways vote/ kryp
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| I've got Kryp edgin this out by a small margin too, Rudy had the smoother rhymes and flow but Kryp had slighlty better punches because he brought them nameplays. My vote goes to Kryp.
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| Send volts ~ shock crews Join Date: Jan 2012
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Rudy gets the W. He had better delivery and punches. Kryp was basically self upping the whole battle. Vote - Rudy |
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| Junior Member Join Date: May 2010
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Rudy took this by far. Both verses were pretty good but rudy's was unbeatable. The "blew some guys" line was effin awesome. Keep it up broski
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| burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI
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| Kryp: I aint tryin to be Rude but let's not get confused You couldn't blaze Kryp if you was smokin on a doob*
At the end of this movie, Kryp'll leave this Brother Bluer than John Belushi**
Kryp spit flames that'll leave Rudy Hunchbacked at Notre Dame
cuz shots from the ratchet, leave Sean Astin colder than Aspen, closed casket ***
put the Ruger to Ruettiger, introduce him to lucifer
The punches in this were bland. Nothin really hard hitting for me. Gotta get off that one track mind shit when it comes to battling. Get creative and find different ways to come at him. You don't win races stain in first gear, gotta shift son. lol. This verse is the definition of beating a dead horse. Oh yea, and if you need that many explinations, your verse isn't good. ~ Rudy thought he playd for Miami U, dude just lied He only calls himself a hurricane cuz he blew some guys
Cuz he kryp n keeps it gangsta for his slo-mo love scenes
When uve been in the closet so long, u develop a strong fashion sense
When it comes to talent ima coogi, n u dnt fit the Bill
You dont wear your heart on your sleeves... you just slicin your wrists
He only crossed swords with me cuz he thought it might be with dicks
Same comments here, you hung up on the gay shit too long. That fit the bill line was nice tho and your flow throughout was solid. Vote = Rudy With the same topical errors in both verses this came down to flow, which Rudy took, that one line I keep complimenting just made it easier to call.
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| formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects
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| Rudy wins 4-2.
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