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Old 12-30-2011, 07:56 PM   #1
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Old 12-30-2011, 07:56 PM   #2
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Old 01-03-2012, 10:55 AM   #4
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I aint tryin to be Rude but let's not get confused
You couldn't blaze Kryp if you was smokin on a doob*

So now that the records straight, I aint layin down my jersey for Rudy
At the end of this movie, Kryp'll leave this Brother Bluer than John Belushi**

Let's face it, you to small to play ball, you aint meant for the fame
Kryp spit flames that'll leave Rudy Hunchbacked at Notre Dame

Simple and plain, to sooth the pain, you gone need more than just Asprin
cuz shots from the ratchet, leave Sean Astin colder than Aspen, closed casket ***

Try to Jack my Victory and Ima Lex Luger ya****
put the Ruger to Ruettiger, introduce him to lucifer


Explinations (my bad if to many, I guess I'll learn over time how this is done)
* Kryp is a term for weed in florida. not sure if they use that term else where.
** John Belushi was an actor who stared in the movie Blues Brothers.
*** Sean Astin is the actor who played Daniel "Rudy" Ruettiger in the movie Rudy.
**** Lex Luger is a wrestler who defeated the wrestler Jack Victory to defend one of his title matches.
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Old 01-03-2012, 01:46 PM   #5
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thought he playd for Miami U, dude just lied
He only calls himself a hurricane cuz he blew some guys
Pussy? Thats a huge no no for this homo thug queen
Cuz he kryp n keeps it gangsta for his slo-mo love scenes
I kno u been up in the ass men cuz ya quick to pick up on a catchy trend
When uve been in the closet so long, u develop a strong fashion sense
Im combustible like huxtible, you wont get a deal
When it comes to talent ima coogi, n u dnt fit the Bill
This emo fuck writes poems cuz life is a bitch
You dont wear your heart on your sleeves... you just slicin your wrists
I got the mightest wit, you just like to be whipped
He only crossed swords with me cuz he thought it might be with dicks
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Old 01-17-2012, 03:07 PM   #6
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this was nice,,sports references on point..@rudy,,,the cosby lines was straight nasty,,,i got one,,but it doesnt compare,,,salute,,,,@kryp,,nice,,i aint laying down my jersey for rudy?,,,crazy!!!,,,one thing i will say,,and its not a critisicm...i have always felt if u have to explain your punchlines,,,and i see that alot on these web battles,,then it probably wasnt that hot of a line,,im just saying,,it should be witty enuff to catch,,but u guys rocked it,,salute
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Yall dudes whack/ an that's fact/ trump niggas wit intro raps
rhymes sick like native chicks/ flo's quick like heart attacks/
when i say i'm back/ it ain't no return on the reference/
been here/ been queer/ been bestowing niggas blessings/
porterhouse for the breakfast/ Wendy's for my sketches/
cause i created you dupe's like homemade soup/
when i was blazin in the coupe/ yall was hustlin on the stoop/
sellin nickles in groups just to match my youth
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In all honesty, "Kryp" was real nice "shots from the ratchet, leave Sean Astin colder than Aspen, closed casket" - NICE flo!!!

@Rudy "You dont wear your heart on your sleeves... you just slicin your wrists
I got the mightest wit, you just like to be whipped" - NICE!!!
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Old 01-26-2012, 05:10 PM   #9
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Rudy, most definitely. This is powerful:

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dude-just-lied .... blew-some-guys
ho-mo-thug-queeen ... slo-mo-love-scenes
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Old 02-02-2012, 03:12 AM   #10
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Try to Jack my Victory and Ima Lex Luger ya****
put the Ruger to Ruettiger, introduce him to lucifer

best line by first guy.........^^

I kno u been up in the ass men cuz ya quick to pick up on a catchy trend
When uve been in the closet so long, u develop a strong fashion sense


best line by second guy^^




I'd call it a tie :/ I can't vote... Someone vote in my battle?
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Old 02-22-2012, 07:03 AM   #11
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decent battle. I felt kryp had better and punches and delivery. less misses. wordplay was a bit obvious. anways vote/ kryp
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Old 02-23-2012, 06:43 AM   #12
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I've got Kryp edgin this out by a small margin too, Rudy had the smoother rhymes and flow but Kryp had slighlty better punches because he brought them nameplays.

My vote goes to Kryp.
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Old 02-23-2012, 06:53 PM   #13
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Rudy gets the W. He had better delivery and punches. Kryp was basically self upping the whole battle.

Vote - Rudy
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Old 02-23-2012, 07:54 PM   #14
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Rudy took this by far. Both verses were pretty good but rudy's was unbeatable. The "blew some guys" line was effin awesome. Keep it up broski
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Kryp:

I aint tryin to be Rude but let's not get confused
You couldn't blaze Kryp if you was smokin on a doob*
  • meh...these kinds of punchlines show a decent grasp of the obvious. they're played and not eyebrow raisin anymore
So now that the records straight, I aint layin down my jersey for Rudy
At the end of this movie, Kryp'll leave this Brother Bluer than John Belushi**
  • better... Blues Brothers/Brother Bluer. Not a real direct hit tho. That Rudy/Movie line only works if you take somethin related to it. Can;t just reference one movie on his name, then another movie to force your punch.
Let's face it, you to small to play ball, you aint meant for the fame
Kryp spit flames that'll leave Rudy Hunchbacked at Notre Dame
  • beatin that movie concept to death here. but if you had got rid of the BS between this and the last bar, and worked that Notre Dame punch better- yo'd have a solid bar
Simple and plain, to sooth the pain, you gone need more than just Asprin
cuz shots from the ratchet, leave Sean Astin colder than Aspen, closed casket ***
  • too many plays on the Rudy movie...again, workin the three last bars into one killer bar on that concept and moving the fuck on would have served you better
Try to Jack my Victory and Ima Lex Luger ya****
put the Ruger to Ruettiger, introduce him to lucifer
  • why are you so hung on that movie? Is it your all time favorite or something? wtf

The punches in this were bland. Nothin really hard hitting for me. Gotta get off that one track mind shit when it comes to battling. Get creative and find different ways to come at him. You don't win races stain in first gear, gotta shift son. lol. This verse is the definition of beating a dead horse. Oh yea, and if you need that many explinations, your verse isn't good.

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thought he playd for Miami U, dude just lied
He only calls himself a hurricane cuz he blew some guys
  • lol simple gay punch, but comical opener
Pussy? Thats a huge no no for this homo thug queen
Cuz he kryp n keeps it gangsta for his slo-mo love scenes
  • takin the gay thing too far, decent flow here but the topic is dead
I kno u been up in the ass men cuz ya quick to pick up on a catchy trend
When uve been in the closet so long, u develop a strong fashion sense
  • again... decent flow but you hangin on the gay topic too long
Im combustible like huxtible, you wont get a deal
When it comes to talent ima coogi, n u dnt fit the Bill
  • LMAO, nice fuckin play there. IDGAF if it's a flex line and not personal on dude at all... that shit was nice
This emo fuck writes poems cuz life is a bitch
You dont wear your heart on your sleeves... you just slicin your wrists
  • I guess It's personal if he's got poetry drops... IDK, havent peeped it in months. But if this is personal, nicely done. Since I'm not goin to research t hat shit- it's your job to make it sting without me havin to- it's just meh...
I got the mightest wit, you just like to be whipped
He only crossed swords with me cuz he thought it might be with dicks
  • and there's the gay topic again. Stil, the rhymes in this were nice and it flowed well, I just hate seein one dimension shit in battles.

Same comments here, you hung up on the gay shit too long. That fit the bill line was nice tho and your flow throughout was solid.

Vote = Rudy

With the same topical errors in both verses this came down to flow, which Rudy took, that one line I keep complimenting just made it easier to call.
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Old 02-27-2012, 07:56 AM   #16
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Rudy wins 4-2.
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