Nasty Nate vs V3n0m - B-Boys.com - Hip-Hop Rap Forums

V3n0m · 02-10-2012, 04:02 AM

12 lines min
bite, feed,, recycle = dq
4 days after 2nd check in is time limit

Nasty Nate · 02-10-2012, 05:57 AM

Chk. Sheeit, ima key sum shyt rite now

Nasty Nate · 02-10-2012, 06:23 AM

I am my brothers keeper aka Cain cuz Im Abel to disgrace/ btw Venoms bro is Carnage, and thats exactly what Im bringin to ur face// why you chose that name is beyond me, Im like 'whatever'/ you claiming to be Poizonus could get HIM banned from grindtime forever// but ur location couldnt be any more proper/ cause a Piqua perfect place to take u to the top of and drop ya// bud, that eminem 3 shyt is lameo so stop it/ shyts girlish like Haley, so im smashing u like that Comet// yo ur 'Im Back' freestyle was garbage. & doctor given u props was cute 'n sweet/ after I put u in the e.r., ul need a doctor to prop u up just to eat// BITCH ur the worst, dont even know how it came to that/ ur reply will suck so bad.. it'll extract any Venom that u CLAIM to have// 12. u suck

V3n0m · 02-11-2012, 09:03 PM

You've inserted yourself into a league of stupidity
You cant spell "shit" right, i should put you out of your misery
Your whack rap just gave me the victory
In this game, we can say thatyour an absence
Cuz youre rapping about what you dont have, a conscience
Step forward, i'll choke killsbury
Your giving me reasons to feed you pills and bury
Your attempts are well overdone
You got 99 problems and your rapping is one
Im going to make you move like eviction
You think your hitting but your missing
Hey dumba$$, you forgot your ammunition

Voltron · 02-12-2012, 07:43 AM

Vote - Nasty Nate

He came way harder on the nameplay and personals. So i give it to him.

Urban Eskimo · 02-23-2012, 06:55 AM

I agree with Voltron, and my favourite punch from Nate was the Poizonus from Grindtime ish. V3n0m needs to work on throwin punches with more sting and personal aim, which you'll learn from these battles the more you engage.

My vote goes to Nasty Nate.

Burt Blaze · 02-26-2012, 10:40 PM

Nate

I am my brothers keeper aka Cain cuz Im Abel to disgrace/
btw Venoms bro is Carnage, and thats exactly what Im bringin to ur face//

nice peronal, decent opener

why you chose that name is beyond me, Im like 'whatever'/
you claiming to be Poizonus could get HIM banned from grindtime forever//

LMAO, nicely done

but ur location couldnt be any more proper/
cause a Piqua perfect place to take u to the top of and drop ya//

mild personal

bud, that eminem 3 shyt is lameo so stop it/
shyts girlish like Haley, so im smashing u like that Comet//

this is ok, nothing killer

yo ur 'Im Back' freestyle was garbage. & doctor given u props was cute 'n sweet/
after I put u in the e.r., ul need a doctor to prop u up just to eat//

ha. nice punch

BITCH ur the worst, dont even know how it came to that/
ur reply will suck so bad.. it'll extract any Venom that u CLAIM to have//

decent closer

overall, nice verse. more enjoyable than a lot of what I've read lately. PJK line was dope.

~

Venom

You've inserted yourself into a league of stupidity
You cant spell "shit" right, i should put you out of your misery
Your whack rap just gave me the victory

lame... and mildly fed

In this game, we can say thatyour an absence
Cuz youre rapping about what you dont have, a conscience

I laugh at people that point out grammatical errors in their battles then make at least 2 in the VERY NEXT LINE. anyhoo... this isn't a good punch at all

Step forward, i'll choke killsbury
Your giving me reasons to feed you pills and bury

filler flex with forced rhyme

Your attempts are well overdone
You got 99 problems and your rapping is one

ugh...WEAK, no punch

Im going to make you move like eviction
You think your hitting but your missing
Hey dumba$$, you forgot your ammunition

weak closer

Hey, dumbass. You forgot your punches. Your entire verse was generic, weak, and not aimed at Nate in a personal line at all.

Vote = Nate

Landslide.

Jacko · 02-27-2012, 06:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by V3n0m

You've inserted yourself into a league of stupidity
You cant spell "shit" right, i should put you out of your misery
Your whack rap just gave me the victory
In this game, we can say thatyour an absence
Cuz youre rapping about what you dont have, a conscience

Going to give you a piece of advice, take it or leave it
I am a rhyme psycho bro......if multiple rhymes wasnt in rap I would probably find very little joy in it...that being said I would just suggest working on your lines to give more the impression that you chose the rhyme word, put more umph and personality into the lines, because I feel like the rhyme words are doing a lot of the writing......just being honest but if you think of a rhyme word, many times the first thing that comes to mind is shit that would come to anyones mind....try to surprise

I read this battle just because V3n0m is in it and so I am not going to vote

keep spitting

Urban Eskimo · 02-27-2012, 08:18 AM

Nasty Nate wins 3-0.

02-10-2012, 04:02 AM	#1
V3n0m Spitten Venom Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: USA Posts: 93	Nasty Nate vs V3n0m 12 lines min bite, feed,, recycle = dq 4 days after 2nd check in is time limit __________________ "All dreams can come true. You just need the courage to pursue them."

02-10-2012, 06:23 AM	#3
Nasty Nate N8've Pryde, nigs Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 489	I am my brothers keeper aka Cain cuz Im Abel to disgrace/ btw Venoms bro is Carnage, and thats exactly what Im bringin to ur face// why you chose that name is beyond me, Im like 'whatever'/ you claiming to be Poizonus could get HIM banned from grindtime forever// but ur location couldnt be any more proper/ cause a Piqua perfect place to take u to the top of and drop ya// bud, that eminem 3 shyt is lameo so stop it/ shyts girlish like Haley, so im smashing u like that Comet// yo ur 'Im Back' freestyle was garbage. & doctor given u props was cute 'n sweet/ after I put u in the e.r., ul need a doctor to prop u up just to eat// BITCH ur the worst, dont even know how it came to that/ ur reply will suck so bad.. it'll extract any Venom that u CLAIM to have// 12. u suck __________________ I'm a sioux-per star..deeper then an indian grave

02-11-2012, 09:03 PM	#4
V3n0m Spitten Venom Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: USA Posts: 93	You've inserted yourself into a league of stupidity You cant spell "shit" right, i should put you out of your misery Your whack rap just gave me the victory In this game, we can say thatyour an absence Cuz youre rapping about what you dont have, a conscience Step forward, i'll choke killsbury Your giving me reasons to feed you pills and bury Your attempts are well overdone You got 99 problems and your rapping is one Im going to make you move like eviction You think your hitting but your missing Hey dumba$$, you forgot your ammunition __________________ "All dreams can come true. You just need the courage to pursue them." Last edited by V3n0m; 02-20-2012 at 08:05 AM.

02-23-2012, 06:55 AM	#6
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	I agree with Voltron, and my favourite punch from Nate was the Poizonus from Grindtime ish. V3n0m needs to work on throwin punches with more sting and personal aim, which you'll learn from these battles the more you engage. My vote goes to Nasty Nate. __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

02-26-2012, 10:40 PM	#7
Burt Blaze burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI Posts: 2,441	Nate I am my brothers keeper aka Cain cuz Im Abel to disgrace/ btw Venoms bro is Carnage, and thats exactly what Im bringin to ur face// nice peronal, decent opener why you chose that name is beyond me, Im like 'whatever'/ you claiming to be Poizonus could get HIM banned from grindtime forever// LMAO, nicely done but ur location couldnt be any more proper/ cause a Piqua perfect place to take u to the top of and drop ya// mild personal bud, that eminem 3 shyt is lameo so stop it/ shyts girlish like Haley, so im smashing u like that Comet// this is ok, nothing killer yo ur 'Im Back' freestyle was garbage. & doctor given u props was cute 'n sweet/ after I put u in the e.r., ul need a doctor to prop u up just to eat// ha. nice punch BITCH ur the worst, dont even know how it came to that/ ur reply will suck so bad.. it'll extract any Venom that u CLAIM to have// decent closer overall, nice verse. more enjoyable than a lot of what I've read lately. PJK line was dope. ~ Venom You've inserted yourself into a league of stupidity You cant spell "shit" right, i should put you out of your misery Your whack rap just gave me the victory lame... and mildly fed In this game, we can say thatyour an absence Cuz youre rapping about what you dont have, a conscience I laugh at people that point out grammatical errors in their battles then make at least 2 in the VERY NEXT LINE. anyhoo... this isn't a good punch at all Step forward, i'll choke killsbury Your giving me reasons to feed you pills and bury filler flex with forced rhyme Your attempts are well overdone You got 99 problems and your rapping is one ugh...WEAK, no punch Im going to make you move like eviction You think your hitting but your missing Hey dumba$$, you forgot your ammunition weak closer Hey, dumbass. You forgot your punches. Your entire verse was generic, weak, and not aimed at Nate in a personal line at all. Vote = Nate Landslide. __________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface

02-10-2012, 05:57 AM	#2
Nasty Nate N8've Pryde, nigs Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 489	Chk. Sheeit, ima key sum shyt rite now

02-12-2012, 07:43 AM	#5
Voltron Send volts ~ shock crews Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 89	Vote - Nasty Nate He came way harder on the nameplay and personals. So i give it to him.

02-27-2012, 08:18 AM	#9
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	Nasty Nate wins 3-0. __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

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