Voltron

10 lines
No feeding, bitching, or crying
3-0 = K.O. 4-1 = T.K.O.

Voltron

Your punches miss, your a son of a bitch
I should knock your mouth out for runnin ya lip
Having fun with this kid, easy to do for me
Swing a guitar at you, to beat you acousticly
A nuscence, in other words he makes no scence
If beig wack was out of style, he would protest
Go guess, he goes fishing with his dad, a faggot
I should kill both of them, in the open, no casket
Flow passion, im quite nice, check me out joe
You fade away to nothing, thats what i call an outro

Nasty Nate

keyin..

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Nasty Nate

hit ur Nos to soon. kids Fast& Furious when I gas um in record timing/ then deliver a piledrive that could get me jaild for exhibition driving// Nate be Zues like, bash'n this clown/ hope bboys is wearing rubber shoes when I send Volt crashin to the ground// when the REAL Voltron force assembled, u knew the planet'd be ok/ when this nerd and his friends come together.. its to fantasy roleplay// if you peep my history u'd know Im fuckin tight/ Tron Legacy: spandex and dissapointment for not living up to the hype// jk. I dig that movie so I aint tryna hate/ Tron fought for the users. after ur verse.. they're jus fighting to stay awake// niga vroom vroom vroom!

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charlessclark

Hi...I am new to this forum.Man I still can't believe Dwayne Wade got out of all the drug habits his mum was in, living in the Ghetto/Projects. His father and his brothers played a big role in his life and career. Shows that you can be a great person, when you're with the right people.

Nasty Nate

^that random dribble was surprisingly way more entertaining then Hotrons verse lol. votes only plz

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Voltron

I said no bitching. DQ. I won.

Nasty Nate

LMFAO!!! u gota b kiddin me

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V3n0m

No, Nasty Nate won
not many personals in this one but nate had some... tron's verse had few personals and tried cheating a victory... thats pothetic

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Urban Eskimo

You can't DQ someone for "bitching", that's not even a rule. However, there is a rule against "swaying" which is talkin down on your opponents verse in any negative fashion...and even then it's not DQ, it's up to myself or another mod to delete those posts (which I'll do once I know you've seen this post).

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Urban Eskimo

Voltron- This verse had some of the best flow I've seen from you, the first 4 lines had some decent multi's in them. On the other hand, you didn't have any punches that made an impact...you should try some nameplays and stuff like that so your punches connect harder. My favourite bar of yours is the "no casket" line.

Nate- Pretty good verse from you, kept it consistent with the nameplays throughout, lol at the niga vroom vroom vroom! at the end.

Overall, Voltron got outclassed in this battle by Nate's nameplay punches.

My vote goes to Nasty Nate.

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Burt Blaze

Really? This post alone is going to make it hard to take you seriously... and I haven't read your verse yet... you better be wicked.

Voltron

Your punches miss, your a son of a bitch
I should knock your mouth out for runnin ya lip

• flex and generic, but ok as an opener

Having fun with this kid, easy to do for me
Swing a guitar at you, to beat you acousticly

• I HATE when the punch has absolutely nothing to do with the set up. this is forced as fuck and doesn't connect. keep trying

A nuscence, in other words he makes no scence
If beig wack was out of style, he would protest

• weak bar here

Go guess, he goes fishing with his dad, a faggot
I should kill both of them, in the open, no casket

• generic violent line, these do you no good in a text battle. sorry to say, it's not looking good for you kid

Flow passion, im quite nice, check me out joe
You fade away to nothing, thats what i call an outro[LIST]ummm.... his name is NATE so off of that this doesn't work. Oh and good job rhyming out with out, basically chanign the J to an R, creative as fuck... weak closer.

This verse offered no imagery or punches of any kind. disappointment in every bar, you've got a lot to learn.

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Nate

hit ur Nos to soon. kids Fast& Furious when I gas um in record timing/
then deliver a piledrive that could get me jaild for exhibition driving//

• flex but solid flow, ok opner

Nate be Zues like, bash'n this clown/
hope bboys is wearing rubber shoes when I send Volt crashin to the ground//

• ha. this is decent, simple and consise

when the REAL Voltron force assembled, u knew the planet'd be ok/
when this nerd and his friends come together.. its to fantasy roleplay//

• simple comparison, concept could have been worked better

if you peep my history u'd know Im fuckin tight/
Tron Legacy: spandex and dissapointment for not living up to the hype//

• lol... could have been done better but this was another decent lil perosnal jab

jk. I dig that movie so I aint tryna hate/
Tron fought for the users. after ur verse.. they're jus fighting to stay awake//

• comical bar but nice way to close the shit

nothin wrong with a key here and there, just gets you in the mode where you're postin the first thing that comes to mind without really tweekin it. hindered bars in this verse that had a promising concept that just wasn't used effectively.

Vote = Nasty Nate

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Urban Eskimo

Nasty Nate wins 3-0.

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