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Old 02-20-2012, 10:45 PM   #1
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Old 02-20-2012, 11:08 PM   #2
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Watch me destroy Venom, reaching in his mouth
Your spits weak like your saliva had a drought
Dry with verses, call a nurse to get your health back
That Venoms vanerial, youll need a stealth pack
Your a set back, get back or die quick holmey
You couldnt spit sick with a snake by your lonely
Im zoning in, going for the kill, this kid is neutral
You couldnt shoot for a win with guns in your future
Watch him die slow, its mine, flawless victory
Ankle breaking - what i call a 'Misery'
Get your facts straight, you lactate in a verse
So fucking pussy - probably walks around with a man purse
Stand down or get defeated, i had it with your twirls
B-boys is ashamed, im playing with this B-girl
Ill play fair and let you get your word out, word
Your like that dumb cousin, a fucking nerd
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Old 02-21-2012, 01:05 PM   #3
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Complaining about b-boys? Just get the fuck out
Cuz last time i checked your career was heading south
You DQ'd Nate, please dont DQ me
Cuz my rap isnt like yours, not your average cup of tea, you see
Your calling me a b-girl
Your whack ass raps couldnt get you a trip to sea world
You set up a round 2 cuz you like getting your ass beat
I spit fire cuz im the venomous theory of heat
Youre calling us wiggers
You must hate b-boys, you make no sense, white niggers?
My raps are amazingly perfect
I win cuz they wont read your verse, its just not worth it
Why are you hatin?
Cuz im finding sucess, while your home masterbatin
Im so sick, i suffered from adreniline
Youre like charlie sheen, youre just not winning it
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Old 02-21-2012, 01:17 PM   #4
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Feeding = DQ. I win.
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Old 02-21-2012, 03:03 PM   #5
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what is feeding?
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Old 02-21-2012, 03:04 PM   #6
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you are a bitch
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Old 02-23-2012, 06:56 AM   #7
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what is feeding?
Feeding is when you take somethin from your opponents verse and use it against them, which isn't allowed in 1 round battles.
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Old 02-23-2012, 07:04 AM   #8
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Aside from the feeding, this was a really close battle...both of these cats are on the same level and a good matchup for eachother. I've got Voltron takin the win with some mild concepts that were a tad bit better than what V3n0m brought to the table.

Voltron gets my vote.
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Old 02-26-2012, 10:27 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by Voltron
Feeding = DQ. I win.
You're that desperate for a win? You gonna call everything a DQ?

I'm still gon' vote...

Voltron

Watch me destroy Venom, reaching in his mouth
Your spits weak like your saliva had a drought
  • played concept forced as fuck into a weak punch. weak opener
Dry with verses, call a nurse to get your health back
That Venoms vanerial, youll need a stealth pack
  • weak punch here too, so far no stingers
Your a set back, get back or die quick holmey
You couldnt spit sick with a snake by your lonely
  • I don;t get this at all. yea, some snakes are venomous...but wtf else are you sayin here?
Im zoning in, going for the kill, this kid is neutral
You couldnt shoot for a win with guns in your future
  • these lines don't even rhyme and the punch is REALLY mild. come creative
Watch him die slow, its mine, flawless victory
Ankle breaking - what i call a 'Misery'
  • decent concept... just not used right
Get your facts straight, you lactate in a verse
So fucking pussy - probably walks around with a man purse
  • set up could have delivered a solid punch but didn't. another ok concept wasted on a wet noodle punch
Stand down or get defeated, i had it with your twirls
B-boys is ashamed, im playing with this B-girl
  • generic bland filler line here
Ill play fair and let you get your word out, word
Your like that dumb cousin, a fucking nerd
  • what? smh... weak closer

no punches at all, you need to attack more and understand that in text you can't just say shit. you need to illustrate it. moving on...

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Complaining about b-boys? Just get the fuck out
Cuz last time i checked your career was heading south
  • not much of an opener here...
You DQ'd Nate, please dont DQ me
Cuz my rap isnt like yours, not your average cup of tea, you see
  • no punch
Your calling me a b-girl
Your whack ass raps couldnt get you a trip to sea world
  • ah...there's the feed... where's the punch tho?
You set up a round 2 cuz you like getting your ass beat
I spit fire cuz im the venomous theory of heat
  • flex, punches atill absent
Youre calling us wiggers
You must hate b-boys, you make no sense, white niggers?
  • ugh...WHERE DID YOUR PUNCHES GO?!?!
My raps are amazingly perfect
I win cuz they wont read your verse, its just not worth it
  • flex filler
Why are you hatin?
Cuz im finding sucess, while your home masterbatin
  • generic flex filler
Im so sick, i suffered from adreniline
Youre like charlie sheen, youre just not winning it
  • weak closer

WTF, did you get worse with time? this verse had no punches whatsoever...

Vote = Voltron

As weak as his verse was, he inched it out cause he at least had the right idea, Venom was just flowin really. Both need to elevate hard, and Voltron stop cryin for DQ's- although that shit was fed as fuck Venom you should know better.
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Old 02-27-2012, 05:55 AM   #10
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you are a bitch

I agree with this statement.....Voltron many times thinks too much about winning the wrong way instead of just respecting and loving the game....hes a whiner...he should go to a new site because apparently no one here can battle him without being dq'd

On the topic of respecting the game he gets my vote in this battle because his sentences just had more in them, and his attack was more direct....

Vote - Voltron
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Old 02-27-2012, 08:14 AM   #11
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Voltron wins 3-0.
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