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check this out, i want some help and feedback on how to make my flow betta.

chedda chedda, talkn bout cheese makes me hungry,
wanna feed on these rappers and shit out money,
beast of the east, i leak no honey,
bitter like relish but ill like tony,
Montana aint ma region,
but this pussy's in its season,
wet like snow,
tight like knots,
in I slip,
Oh my God!