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01-05-2009, 07:04 PM
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|  New to Hip Hop, some rhymes of mine
I've recently gotten into hip hop by means of Tha carter 3 mostly...so I felt inspired to give it a shot...The rap is repetitive, I know, and moves mostly triplets; i.e. A Milli / Drop it like its hot...so...yeah, tear this thing apart...please? They say I flow like agua and I'm mixin' it with Vodka for my SuperBad even darker side of my bi-polar mind I rhyme like i'm in overdrive Multi-taskin', killin' time move over guys, it's overtime You'll see me baskin' in the lime- light so bright it's Shirley mine you want that dank, I got your dime If i were Frank, I'd speak my mind but those who rap are far behind The Un-sink-able Submar(Ine) Submarine I mean i'm King akin to be the next big thing within this earth and universe un-fold-ing with every verse I rhyme with WORDS, no need to curse Kill 'em with peace, now get the herse I'm on the lease, so step right in my little piece of (What's) Heaven? when all your sins are for-giv-en I go by the name I was given to much acclaim. My Name is Ryan. oh yeah...I'm a whiteboy. Last edited by FlyinRyan; 01-05-2009 at 07:39 PM. |
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02-10-2009, 05:08 AM
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umm try longer lines..combine some of them to make longer bars.... check it this makes no sense but you get the idea 1) Im shredda swinging swords,that'll leave u in peices better bring it whore, cuz im structure like trees to the tree limbs 2) Palms dirty, leave you with a crushed grill Drop bombs of fury, its the whole crowd that I must kill 3) Im so disrespectful,dont give a fuck if you hate me basterd cuz ill rip yah neck off, while wearing a pair of safety glasses |
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02-12-2010, 12:22 PM
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Good work bro!
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06-07-2010, 11:13 AM
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cool info
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08-19-2010, 09:08 PM
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Nice work hip pop is not easy to do but you had try it so it is great job you had prepare some rhymes in mine it is cool .
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11-05-2010, 08:23 PM
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We can learn different thing from different person it depend on you that from.where we learn what from the movie six sense.
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11-05-2010, 08:25 PM
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great info fam
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01-15-2011, 12:36 PM
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There are some good rhymes in there. Sort of sounds like a freestyle. I'd agree with Grime on make the lines longer. __________________ beat maker Last edited by Northwind; 01-19-2011 at 08:11 PM. |
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12-03-2011, 07:55 AM
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Hi welcome to this forum sites.Here you can find lots of information related your questions. You want to solve your question, I think you consult first you teacher then your friends. They can give you better solution. ----------------- Struts2 Jquery Struts2 Jquery |
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