Future of rap

[jmalham]

Need feedback on this, just started getting into writing verses and need inspiration


They call me a rapper cause my skill to rhyme is dapper , your flow looks like a fat man shittin on the crapper, but that?s ok your rhymes are fine they just need more depth and rhythm to be defined, see the biggest problem is you have no heart, that?s such a fucked up problem I don?t even know where to start, first you can take that auto tune shit out, c?mon you know it?s already been played out , but that?s not the worst just listen to the lyrics most of this garbage will dampen your spirit, will you please rap without just talkin bout robbin to get money, women, and weed, If you reap what you sow then you sowed that seed, what can you do in days like these, workin a side job to get ends meat while tryin to write a song that?s as big as next week, so ill go into my mind to my dream world just to find some sleep, tossin and turnin at night I feel just like a kid when I dream, inside my visions a spaceship took off with the last remnants of my braaiieen, oh no this is gonna go south how can I rhyme with half a mind and a lopsided mouth. I tell myself its all a dream and then move forward just to wonder if Im crazy then tell myself im not because it has me left wondering maybe, when I wake up from trippin it?s the year 2225, rap has been taken over by cyborgs who have eaten the system alive, this shit really is real and im the only one to try, and stop this crazy monster from consuming every bodies mind, you ask how this even happened I spose ill tell you why, its because the masses stopped caring and were fed what they were given, looking only for a cut and to make a good living, if you want to stop this you have to stand up for what you care about, fuck that pride shit that?s what assholes talk about when they tryin to shoot up your ride and shit, for what more bad blood, another brother face down in the mud, cant be happenin for reasons like these, nigga please mess up these G?s I wanna make sweet tea when I rhyme, why cant I, because all I got are fuckin lines but that?s just fine I make my grind every time when I go back I see that track that?s a purpose for livin appreaciate nigga, talk about noreaga when go to the golf course sometimes when I rhyme my voice gets hoarse so take the meal and call it a three course when im finished imma get a divorce from the game, my heart is broken and it just gets worse.

[TsafirKamel]

the future of rap is promoting jesus christ