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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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this is my gym, time to exercise ![]() key some poetry...
__________________ "you have a lot of internal conflict" --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"... --------------------------------------------- "hollow" Last edited by wolf; 03-11-2007 at 03:04 PM. |
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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in pieces, spread out in regions, in a cold dark place where no man had reaches, found my features, decided to arrange reassemble and tinker by heat surge and pressures then finally measured after five months i can give them the pleasure of being weathered across the globe more evident than gold, sold into many hands, traveled through many lands, and landed in Lensk Siberia where the natives are superior, commotions are held while at the palm of this tree my life's retail, and retold remolded by this black smith's hold again burned to the core, then my chest implodes into thin air, I'm holy, and ready to wrap somebody's finger locked in a chest, waiting to be someone's pet,... then the light reflects this beautiful mess worn for ages on a woman until she rests I could say i'm dead too, back in the place i was born but greed RIPped through my mother I can't remain with her, my times are of his and goodbyes, forever in the hands of the pursuer.
__________________ "you have a lot of internal conflict" --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"... --------------------------------------------- "hollow" |
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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(damn it, this is going to be challenging...) c'mon, comma, c'mon karma, i listen to scribble scrabble remember the bitter bickering everything sticks of something sweet everything stinks of sour battles seasoned papers & pen peppers love disentegrated dark and unpersuaded now the respects salted our wounds mount Apollo's hatred deep mounds of a pilgrim's apology last of the hives that'll exodus the colony survive the pollen leaves carry you carry them carry me the king leaves the queen bee part ways into this C, section a grown lesson, brain flexin' unhappy in the shadows but sheltered in rain defeated of any gain, our wings flap with reluctant pain, we cannot resort to the same island that we once found each other because its not there, its not there... anymore that state of mind, that land before time, its hard to find, pantomime my invisible heart, is there but shrined, we know fa sho, but porcupine slow give our greens for these kids on the go traffic my mental health with honey nut cheer-ios gotta go, awaken our characters so we can respect our young ones, and shine their minds with the truth by the hopeful sun
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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I'm awoke by your patience and formed by the security from your gazes laughed when you tickled me in places mentally in swing receptive of your fingertips and the palm of your decision grips holding a structure true many years of raising love's factor pervades you so it exponentially reaches me and others not so close by glue's strength during my time you tick i keep listening to every switch every beat involuntary in ears that in the back of my mind i fear when your time's up 'cause its not enough don't flee this frame of reference of selfishness, of pleasures from your possessions only you concur, so she flirts with the present struting ways of professions impatient for your grandchild's lesson while the rest of the fam is still guessin' how far in time after the clock who will still push the hand another second push compassion that once flocked to make an easy heart attack fight for a legacy or all honor is lost
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lol nice
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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Looks like I'm the only one who can hang....
__________________ "you have a lot of internal conflict" --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"... --------------------------------------------- "hollow" |
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| L.G.C. Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: 434
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hang wid what? Is this like a one person freestyle cypher or somethin?
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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sometimes i key poems, i figure i should put it here since i would put a hurtin on the poetry cafe Don't want people to get tired of me ya know
__________________ "you have a lot of internal conflict" --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"... --------------------------------------------- "hollow" |
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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its a shame we part ways, what coulda been is still in my mindframe, you still look good, your hand I can't hold my respect is so bold, my love is so cold, shiverin'... gives me the deepest of creeps, you moan in my room in my darkest of sleeps your with my friend who i can't compete the couple of chatterin' teeth as a friend of you two am I defeated this futility of love, shoulda been deleted my poetry sister that now won't listen doesn't read between these lines no words of his or goodbyes just a look of fault like i shoulda been that earthquake to chalk her heart, but in my mind I wanted our relations to be strong, but in her mind it just took too long...
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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in lieu, sense keen, appetite soarly sore opening the door to a mission of less achings he walks in the store with tight jeans that his legs can barely breath anymore, hope's in his trace and hope's in his hook combined it took recalling a dry taste but still in grace with a curious look the twitch on this crook is unseen in his face, glances at the cashier and unkeeps a frown his eyes go down a row while scrathin' his rear, hate to hide from man's fear but hides without sound stared by common rounds of eyes across idle beer too many cries and howls to make disappear obliged by his ears, that his hands are bound, what else can he get that won't hurt him afterwards he's not backwards he move forward to purchase this, not a word but body language speakin in tongues no vibration in his lungs on the counter for money, redden hands, shaking, forbid the forsaken conversation, though the pre-release in the making, overcompensated but stated to keep the change its his life after all, no one's the same, its fated, felt relief instantly after he bought these objects to break this silence now mouths water constantly, their finally free from under man's sovereign under this hood he had to rob 'em and give dignity now these women can breath again saved like him one less dog degrading girls to a box of M & M's he opens the box, their minds, their mouths, lonliness anger, sadness all of it, all the way to the heart, he lastly sees candy depart into sophisticated women while he has to defend himself on the shelf from homophobic starts
__________________ "you have a lot of internal conflict" --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"... --------------------------------------------- "hollow" Last edited by wolf; 03-14-2007 at 08:29 PM. Reason: he |
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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i wake up to a fresh air that sometimes get crowded of rain water or the heat of passionate flowers those two that divided the word friend into i just have to look past that bush that grew i look around to make sure all my stuff still here 'cause mothafukers are magicians makin' my shit disappear i see the bones in the ditch at which need cleaning everyone just keeps fiending of uncleanliness selfish beast in the pursuit of rich greens bathtub so brown the worms could breed this the last time someone gonna eat my food without askin' i'm not a hyena fool, i'm not laughin', it seems i only take the good passage and i envy being used like a tool for the masses what do you take this creature for, a bastard? folks usin' our internet wirelessly in their seedless seats descramblin' our waves in the air danglin' like a piece of meat but that why we locked that shit with a bamboo stick so no one can penetrate our village without payin' rent ya know sometimes i just bought me somethin in the fridge and next day a scavenger ravaged through my lunch meal fuck vultures circling over what i fought through pain, guess i'll be that crab in a barrel to pull down another's gain, all i know is somebody better wash these dishes, them bones been decaying into somethin' fegalicious, and i ain't got no kids, though the rest of the pack learned different, 'cause if i was somebody's daddy, i need to be giving out whoopin's the dirt floor just full of litter, supporting annoying little critters i try to tell these beast to clean up but their ears jitter, but its okay though, ill be gone from this ugly den, and then they gonna be wishing i was still livin' wit them.
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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*smack* you know i stand Alone!!! you don't know where my life is goin'! my free will keeps you in mystery but i thought you were the mysterious one!!! you gave us will freely like its the "right" thing to do, but what's right and what's good strays.... Its right for a hurricane to take my fam away, but its not good 'cause lives are being taken away. this righteousness, i know its in the middle of your core between bad and good, 1 through 5, righteousness is a 4 for someone all-good, the only thing bad is this righteousness under your hood For its right to die, steal, kill, murder, or this concept of evil, for without it, we would never instill hope, heroes, strength and more in people... Godsmack me 4 I stand Alone with more intelligence in my dome.
__________________ "you have a lot of internal conflict" --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"... --------------------------------------------- "hollow" |
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| bloody tears Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: this cold world
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lacking the proper environment this rose grew lacking nourishment squeezed of all fluids the sun has always been a turnacate roots dug deep ~ they seek a cooler place even the ground cracks to catch water just incase the rain never comes the rose breathes dust through its worn peddles weak from exhaustion they slump over and settle its color sun faded ~ thought to never return this rose gave up hope ~ contempt to forever burn it yearned to be saved ~ but a rose cant speak so it bleed through its stem, making it more weak lost in this desert ~ the desert of lost hope it dreamt of the day its roots would be all soaked this rose was weaping as its color began to fade more desperate to be amongst the mass of grass blades so that way it could share every thing all the same for were grass grows it knows there also must be rain this rugged terrain stripped the rose of its limbs it watched as they fell and took of in the wind it had nothing left ~ a rose whose beauty couldnt survive so this rose chose ~ it'd be better just to die
__________________ Scripted Science im walkin this tight rope with a slight hope i'll make it across my soul burning hotter as the devil takes his flames to the cross Last edited by Anamosity; 03-23-2007 at 06:09 PM. |
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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I'm a shell compelled only by what's instilled I only distill sit still and stur mix chop and drop strain every other grain I believe that's insane so i can stay sane remain a dope drink for shots!! alcoholic walks so I hear every non re-lie-able talk blink after blink nerves stern steadly firing neurons like Howard's learnin' curve i swerve to make me I feel like a hamburger patty balancin fatty acid makin' my vessels placid translate my green language or travel vainly on grey pavements let's see that you've made it trained your brain to enslavement let's see what you're made of ...gf break....ah well.....
__________________ "you have a lot of internal conflict" --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"... --------------------------------------------- "hollow" |
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| that's ZED, not ZEE Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Sydney
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I've tried to play the part either and all ways, Dressed down to nothing more than a remnant of a faded. operatic. dramatisation. With a threaded microphone cord that prefers feedback to the stone in my throat. So few tickets on offer to an audience and a stage of termite wood. And all they can say collectively is "light entertainment"... Somewhere in a void within another time capsule floating free There is a growth or more pure version of a human descendant That - should - have been - me. He won't be proud of this nothing we share so evidently. As though void can actually be inhabited... My collection of aquired tastes and recycled intimates Hidden behind the face paint of a mime moving through a non existent window. Writing upon a pillowed pencil dream now worn down to its nub, Numbed and hollow, this lead is not poison to blood. I think I've found my blood in a half vacant glass of aged scotch... |
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| a bay area spitter Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: The Yay Area
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Sit and watch, as I sip on scotch... get mezmerized in rythm as i twist this talk... go head and say sumthin, ya frontin fakes is through leave ya quiter then a lipless mind with a job to do.. amazing when displaying this range of sayings my prose posses passion like Picasso when painting.. |
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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Sick concepts, get a taste of my disease but its not contagious feel the wiff of sneeze in debted with illness but spended until its no more creativeness, ha, I keeps a library of stories weaving and leavin' u in suspenses mark that chapter, get back too it overall good story with a flow of fluid pull out Chevys of films enter the realm, of how life is shot up to the damn rim tough it out with no chaser snort it out with no eraser write it out with no papers walk it out with no hatas great fighters fight, there's a hit there's a miss, great rappers rap, there's a miss there's a hit, it all goes down to who you're dealin' wit', conform to their efforts or abide by your standards, if you spit fire u still have ta dogde them hammers bros. good and bad conscious take turns of spinning the bottle cousins, kissin' creatin' chaos & trouble blow huka in bubbles give or take, real or fake, its up to how down you're able to take disgrace, through a midst of bad fate poundin' through head aches the sound the bed makes hittin' the misses, while it misses off target I'm a sergent, with integrity outside the margin but you gotta be common re-strict the corner or you'll become a martyr farther than god has the love's........ forgotten so fast hate erodes any work from a hard past that's why I playball and try to hit the balls when the bats made of glass shatters when it goes past running the bases when the umpire held the ball last makin' a show 4 the cameras swimming through swamps of savannahs pass me the pastport out of atlanta escape my mind to civilizations trivial like Haitans bombin' like Asians find my high in lows of 80's hazy finding pride in a fog of maybes mashin' potatoes that might need gravy eatin' fries with ketchup that could prolly save me give me a grade of mixed languages meant to be satisfactory or needs more improvement A-F where's the U bIAAAAT ching-a-ling, lakers ify, bring forth the Kobe within me post me where the picture of pimps be hos lovin' and hatin' me unfertilized pregnancy usin' women for pleasure but her pain iz heavy wo to men keep their thang unsteady in a minute its ready a TV dinner that needs more leaverage against the beverage flows so savage that cavemen can't manage just have 'em pickin' the cabbage where they can get married to a racist Jackson on a ten dollar bill made enough money to roll it down uphill only through use of imagery skills found a place in poetry where these can live survive and grow in a outcasted field
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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graduations, boring in places, but even worse is those that hate elevation they love to cheat hate to seek rather get by and be obsolete times are changing the kids are lazy this next generation will be more than crazy while many can agree that there's a lot of hood greens that they will think that evil is a good thing parents leave the importance of what's wright out kids adult swim to what's life about being good; overrated, understatement commonly evaded the bigger man never to hug the only affection ever given called tough love
__________________ "you have a lot of internal conflict" --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"... --------------------------------------------- "hollow" |
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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a friend that went the distance, clothe me, fed me, stood up in his sentence for me... so........ he kept it real in the beginning.. how a friendship became a deal b4 i knew him and his sinning i'm trippin' he was a homeboi gave a fuck at what said party left and right makin them women spread they legs but we dead assassinated makin the jungle red no more respect bent for this humble head don't take my clothes, put yo shoes in yo closet what's meant is the bird finger wishin' i could pause it but we front what's fake talkin' shit behind the face storin' hatred in the place of respect for our sake shootin' words bulletin our friends to depend on our side only a fight to provoke not to mention regret on the inside many of us strive with this fake character, clark kent caricature but the real you is the amateur blind from what damaged ya reviewed in the mind to hamper ya delusions of grandeur pictures tell a thousand words along wit the tension that stammers vibratin' arm & hammer eyes wide lickin blood thinkin' over it in the slammer, images bud and stems from an innocent love guilty on its way dying in the mud friends are seasons the wind helped carried me across tha seas and my mother tilted me to these "heathens" but now i'm breathin' wit a wound too close to the truth retractin' every good reason
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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damn, some of my junk was killin' back then... guess I'll put somethin new up right now. Ready 4 the Night? Dipped in caramel Smooth with the saucy words Just one look is all it took Singled out like county crooks Keepin up with a clean status Makin' sure she got a clean apparatus too, And you mad at who? Don't matter to me Tryna get my mac on with this free B Her skin potato fried, see? Crispy as she wanna be Arguing over nothing Annoyed by the company of brothers I roll with my bois no others Real friends, no troubles, Living life outside those bubbles My pose is close to being a magazine cover XXL I excel tough with this exoskeleton skin no worries through the rough Scruff McGruff, I took a bite yall barkin, I just fight being random during nights, only God judges what's right, he uses the stars to magnify his sights completely... you insect, so respect, or get something suddenly unexpect -ed.
__________________ "you have a lot of internal conflict" --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"... --------------------------------------------- "hollow" |
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| ..RHYME SCieNCE.. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Chitown.
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| The key to poetry is let it flow/ let the wind carry me where ever I may go/signs & signals transmit thru my speech/ catch the vibe & skills thru lessons that I teach/ awaken the brain dead, the wack heads, & each of u toys that's been mislead / the right directions is u gotta chop b4 u shred/ don't eat all the crap of everything that u been fed/ bullshit of media, reporters & killers have all been bred/ ill education not from just what I read/ that's enough for now... so just input what I said. the streets been bloodsoak red.
__________________ {.MasTeR RoCK.} /Penny candy poisonous rappers, best to chill or get your head gashed Lemonhead, sour Pez kids, best to grab a Life Savor, I'll Jawbreak ya, Boston Bake ya Then plant my sunflower seed on every square acre/ RZA Last edited by eRek; 02-24-2009 at 03:21 AM. |
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| still on the grind Join Date: Jan 2007
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^^^ i digs the picture well, i can't leave a comment here, gotta key somethin'... hmmm... i'll just key something and come up with the title in the end... a human without emotions what type of being can walk through any notion what example is this "person", that is the world's perfect version of a a lifeless creature working eating and sleeping adventures no smile from his dentures no anger to fend from no sadness to feel numb only an emptiness a quicksand abyss creatin' counterfeits of relationships slash friendships so no one can ever get close to a guy breathin like a ghost you only see my image if I allow you allowance though in reality I'm pastdue mileage your time invested in me is like gasoline it becomes expensive and chokes the life's scenes specializing is my dream reached within repetitive things how does a human become an android? but their brain is still filled with the paranoid plaqued with emotionless genes from the amyloids a dark wolven fiend is born in the circulatory void Android's Bloodwork
__________________ "you have a lot of internal conflict" --------------------------------------------- "when a man cusses, he doesn't know how to express himself appropiately"... --------------------------------------------- "hollow" |
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| burtblaze.bandcamp.com Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI
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She stopped as if to say I can not see your eyes When you're walking away In her usual fashion she Mustered the courage to Swallow her pride and start blastin me I stopped her sentence short Silenced the nonsense and Said these words as a last resort In my usual fashion I Only shurgged and looked away As she started to cry We stopped to face each other Trying to go back to a place In time somewhere when we were lovers In our usual fashion we faked it Wiped tears with phony smiles Admitted this is wrong with one last embracement
__________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface |
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