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Old 03-04-2007, 06:18 PM   #1
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this is my gym,
time to exercise



key some poetry...
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Old 03-04-2007, 06:48 PM   #2
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in pieces, spread out in regions,
in a cold dark place where no man had reaches,
found my features,
decided to arrange reassemble and tinker
by heat surge and pressures then finally measured
after five months i can give them the pleasure
of being weathered across the globe
more evident than gold,
sold into many hands,
traveled through many lands,
and landed in Lensk Siberia
where the natives are superior,
commotions are held
while at the palm of this tree
my life's retail, and retold
remolded by this black smith's hold
again burned to the core, then my chest implodes
into thin air,
I'm holy, and ready to wrap somebody's finger
locked in a chest, waiting to be someone's pet,...
then the light reflects this beautiful mess
worn for ages on a woman until she rests
I could say i'm dead too,
back in the place i was born
but greed RIPped through my mother
I can't remain with her,
my times are of his and goodbyes,
forever in the hands of the pursuer.
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Old 03-05-2007, 09:40 PM   #3
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Default Divorce and children

(damn it, this is going to be challenging...)

c'mon, comma,
c'mon karma,
i listen to scribble scrabble
remember the bitter bickering
everything sticks of something sweet
everything stinks of sour battles
seasoned papers & pen peppers
love disentegrated dark and unpersuaded
now the respects salted
our wounds mount Apollo's hatred
deep mounds of a pilgrim's apology
last of the hives that'll exodus the colony
survive the pollen leaves
carry you carry them carry me
the king leaves the queen bee
part ways into this C, section
a grown lesson, brain flexin'
unhappy in the shadows but sheltered in rain
defeated of any gain,
our wings flap with reluctant pain,
we cannot resort to the same
island that we once found each other
because its not there,
its not there... anymore
that state of mind, that land before time,
its hard to find, pantomime
my invisible heart, is there but shrined,
we know fa sho, but porcupine slow
give our greens for these kids on the go
traffic my mental health with honey nut cheer-ios
gotta go, awaken our characters
so we can respect our young ones,
and shine their minds with the truth by the hopeful sun
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Old 03-06-2007, 10:28 PM   #4
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I'm awoke by your patience
and formed by the security from your gazes
laughed when you tickled me in places
mentally in swing
receptive of your fingertips and the palm
of your decision grips
holding a structure true
many years of raising
love's factor pervades you
so it exponentially reaches me
and others not so close by glue's strength
during my time you tick
i keep listening to every switch
every beat involuntary in ears
that in the back of my mind i fear
when your time's up
'cause its not enough
don't flee this frame of reference
of selfishness, of pleasures
from your possessions
only you concur,
so she flirts with the present
struting ways of professions
impatient for your grandchild's lesson
while the rest of the fam is still guessin'
how far in time after the clock
who will still push the hand another second
push compassion that once flocked
to make an easy heart attack
fight for a legacy or all honor is lost
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Old 03-08-2007, 09:22 PM   #6
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Looks like I'm the only one who can hang....
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Old 03-10-2007, 07:18 AM   #7
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hang wid what? Is this like a one person freestyle cypher or somethin?
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Old 03-10-2007, 02:47 PM   #8
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sometimes i key poems, i figure i should put it here since i would put a hurtin on the poetry cafe



Don't want people to get tired of me ya know
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Old 03-10-2007, 03:39 PM   #9
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its a shame we part ways,
what coulda been is still in my mindframe,
you still look good,
your hand I can't hold
my respect is so bold,
my love is so cold,
shiverin'...
gives me the deepest of creeps,
you moan in my room
in my darkest of sleeps
your with my friend who i can't compete
the couple of chatterin' teeth
as a friend of you two
am I defeated
this futility of love, shoulda been deleted
my poetry sister
that now won't listen
doesn't read between these lines
no words of his or goodbyes
just a look of fault
like i shoulda been that earthquake to chalk
her heart,
but in my mind I wanted our relations to be strong,
but in her mind it just took too long...
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Old 03-14-2007, 08:27 PM   #10
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in lieu, sense keen, appetite soarly sore
opening the door to a mission of less achings
he walks in the store with tight jeans
that his legs can barely breath anymore,

hope's in his trace and hope's in his hook
combined it took recalling a dry taste
but still in grace with a curious look
the twitch on this crook is unseen in his face,

glances at the cashier and unkeeps a frown
his eyes go down a row while scrathin' his rear,
hate to hide from man's fear but hides without sound
stared by common rounds of eyes across idle beer

too many cries and howls to make disappear
obliged by his ears, that his hands are bound,
what else can he get that won't hurt him afterwards
he's not backwards he move forward to purchase this,

not a word but body language speakin in tongues
no vibration in his lungs on the counter for money,
redden hands, shaking, forbid the forsaken
conversation, though the pre-release in the making,

overcompensated but stated to keep the change
its his life after all, no one's the same, its fated,
felt relief instantly after he bought these objects
to break this silence now mouths water constantly,

their finally free from under man's sovereign
under this hood he had to rob 'em and give dignity
now these women can breath again saved like him
one less dog degrading girls to a box of M & M's

he opens the box, their minds, their mouths, lonliness
anger, sadness all of it, all the way to the heart,
he lastly sees candy depart into sophisticated women
while he has to defend himself on the shelf from homophobic starts
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Old 03-18-2007, 12:46 PM   #11
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i wake up to a fresh air that sometimes get crowded
of rain water or the heat of passionate flowers
those two that divided the word friend into
i just have to look past that bush that grew
i look around to make sure all my stuff still here
'cause mothafukers are magicians makin' my shit disappear
i see the bones in the ditch at which need cleaning
everyone just keeps fiending of uncleanliness
selfish beast in the pursuit of rich greens
bathtub so brown the worms could breed
this the last time someone gonna eat my food
without askin' i'm not a hyena fool,
i'm not laughin', it seems i only take the good passage
and i envy being used like a tool for the masses
what do you take this creature for, a bastard?
folks usin' our internet wirelessly in their seedless seats
descramblin' our waves in the air danglin' like a piece of meat
but that why we locked that shit with a bamboo stick
so no one can penetrate our village without payin' rent
ya know sometimes i just bought me somethin in the fridge
and next day a scavenger ravaged through my lunch meal
fuck vultures circling over what i fought through pain,
guess i'll be that crab in a barrel to pull down another's gain,
all i know is somebody better wash these dishes,
them bones been decaying into somethin' fegalicious,
and i ain't got no kids, though the rest of the pack learned different,
'cause if i was somebody's daddy, i need to be giving out whoopin's
the dirt floor just full of litter, supporting annoying little critters
i try to tell these beast to clean up but their ears jitter,
but its okay though, ill be gone from this ugly den,
and then they gonna be wishing i was still livin' wit them.
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Old 03-22-2007, 11:21 PM   #12
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*smack*

you know i stand Alone!!! you don't know where my life is goin'!
my free will keeps you in mystery
but i thought you were the mysterious one!!!
you gave us will freely like its the "right" thing to do,
but what's right and what's good strays....

Its right for a hurricane to take my fam away,
but its not good 'cause lives are being taken away.

this righteousness, i know its in the middle of your core
between bad and good, 1 through 5, righteousness is a 4
for
someone all-good, the only thing bad is this righteousness
under your hood

For its right to die, steal, kill, murder, or this concept of evil,
for without it,
we would never instill hope, heroes, strength and more in people...

Godsmack me 4 I stand Alone with more intelligence in my dome.
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Old 03-23-2007, 05:31 PM   #13
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lacking the proper environment
this rose grew lacking nourishment
squeezed of all fluids
the sun has always been a turnacate
roots dug deep ~ they seek a cooler place
even the ground cracks to catch water just incase
the rain never comes
the rose breathes dust through its worn peddles
weak from exhaustion they slump over and settle
its color sun faded ~ thought to never return
this rose gave up hope ~ contempt to forever burn
it yearned to be saved ~ but a rose cant speak
so it bleed through its stem, making it more weak
lost in this desert ~ the desert of lost hope
it dreamt of the day its roots would be all soaked
this rose was weaping as its color began to fade
more desperate to be amongst the mass of grass blades
so that way it could share every thing all the same
for were grass grows it knows there also must be rain
this rugged terrain stripped the rose of its limbs
it watched as they fell and took of in the wind
it had nothing left ~ a rose whose beauty couldnt survive
so this rose chose ~ it'd be better just to die
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Old 04-05-2007, 08:57 PM   #14
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I'm a shell
compelled only by what's instilled
I only distill
sit still and stur mix chop and drop
strain every other grain
I believe that's insane
so i can stay sane
remain a dope drink for shots!!
alcoholic walks
so I hear every non re-lie-able talk
blink after blink nerves stern
steadly firing neurons like Howard's learnin' curve
i swerve to make me
I feel like a hamburger patty
balancin fatty acid
makin' my vessels placid
translate my green language
or travel vainly on grey pavements
let's see that you've made it
trained your brain to enslavement
let's see what you're made of

...gf break....ah well.....
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Old 04-05-2007, 09:10 PM   #15
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I've tried to play the part either and all ways,
Dressed down to nothing more than a remnant of a faded. operatic. dramatisation.
With a threaded microphone cord that prefers feedback to the stone in my throat.
So few tickets on offer to an audience and a stage of termite wood.

And all they can say collectively is "light entertainment"...

Somewhere in a void within another time capsule floating free
There is a growth or more pure version of a human descendant
That - should - have been - me.
He won't be proud of this nothing we share so evidently.

As though void can actually be inhabited...

My collection of aquired tastes and recycled intimates
Hidden behind the face paint of a mime moving through a non existent window.
Writing upon a pillowed pencil dream now worn down to its nub,
Numbed and hollow, this lead is not poison to blood.

I think I've found my blood in a half vacant glass of aged scotch...
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Old 04-16-2007, 06:27 PM   #16
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Sit and watch, as I sip on scotch...
get mezmerized in rythm as i twist this talk...
go head and say sumthin, ya frontin fakes is through
leave ya quiter then a lipless mind with a job to do..
amazing when displaying this range of sayings
my prose posses passion like Picasso when painting..
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Old 04-17-2007, 05:21 PM   #17
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Sick concepts, get a taste of my disease
but its not contagious feel the wiff of sneeze
in debted with illness
but spended until its
no more creativeness,
ha, I keeps a library of stories
weaving and leavin' u in suspenses
mark that chapter, get back too it
overall good story with a flow of fluid
pull out Chevys of films
enter the realm, of how life is shot up to the damn rim
tough it out with no chaser
snort it out with no eraser
write it out with no papers
walk it out with no hatas
great fighters fight, there's a hit there's a miss,
great rappers rap, there's a miss there's a hit,
it all goes down to who you're dealin' wit',
conform to their efforts or abide by your standards,
if you spit fire u still have ta dogde them hammers
bros.
good and bad conscious
take turns of spinning the bottle
cousins, kissin' creatin' chaos & trouble
blow huka in bubbles
give or take, real or fake,
its up to how down you're able to take
disgrace,
through a midst of bad fate
poundin' through head aches
the sound the bed makes
hittin' the misses, while it misses off target
I'm a sergent,
with integrity outside the margin
but you gotta be common
re-strict the corner or you'll become a martyr
farther than god has
the love's........ forgotten so fast
hate erodes any work from a hard past
that's why I playball
and try to hit the balls when the bats made of glass
shatters when it goes past
running the bases when the umpire held the ball last
makin' a show 4 the cameras
swimming through swamps of savannahs
pass me the pastport out of atlanta
escape my mind to civilizations
trivial like Haitans
bombin' like Asians
find my high in lows of 80's
hazy finding pride in a fog of maybes
mashin' potatoes that might need gravy
eatin' fries with ketchup that could prolly save me
give me a grade of mixed languages meant
to be satisfactory or needs more improvement
A-F where's the U bIAAAAT
ching-a-ling, lakers ify, bring forth the Kobe within me
post me where the picture of pimps be
hos lovin' and hatin' me
unfertilized pregnancy
usin' women for pleasure but her pain iz heavy
wo to men keep their thang unsteady
in a minute its ready
a TV dinner that needs more leaverage
against the beverage
flows so savage
that cavemen can't manage
just have 'em pickin' the cabbage
where they can get married
to a racist Jackson on a ten dollar bill
made enough money to roll it down uphill
only through use of imagery skills
found a place in poetry where these can live
survive and grow in a outcasted field
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Old 06-12-2007, 11:34 PM   #18
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graduations,
boring in places,
but even worse is those that hate elevation

they love to cheat
hate to seek
rather get by and be obsolete

times are changing
the kids are lazy
this next generation will be more than crazy

while many can agree
that there's a lot of hood greens
that they will think that evil is a good thing

parents leave the importance of what's wright out
kids adult swim to what's life about
being good;
overrated, understatement
commonly evaded
the bigger man never to hug
the only affection ever given called tough love
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Old 08-09-2007, 06:48 PM   #19
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a friend that went the distance,
clothe me, fed me, stood up in his sentence
for me... so........ he kept it real
in the beginning.. how a friendship became a deal
b4 i knew him and his sinning
i'm trippin'
he was a homeboi gave a fuck at what said
party left and right makin them women spread they legs
but we dead
assassinated makin the jungle red
no more respect bent for this humble head
don't take my clothes, put yo shoes in yo closet
what's meant is the bird finger wishin' i could pause it
but we front what's fake talkin' shit behind the face
storin' hatred in the place of respect for our sake
shootin' words bulletin our friends to depend on our side
only a fight to provoke not to mention regret on the inside
many of us strive with this fake character, clark kent caricature
but the real you is the amateur blind from what damaged ya
reviewed in the mind to hamper ya delusions of grandeur
pictures tell a thousand words along wit the tension that stammers
vibratin' arm & hammer eyes wide lickin blood
thinkin' over it in the slammer, images bud
and stems from an innocent love
guilty on its way dying in the mud
friends are seasons
the wind helped carried me across tha seas and
my mother tilted me to these "heathens"
but now i'm breathin' wit a wound too close
to the truth retractin' every good reason
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Old 06-22-2008, 11:59 PM   #20
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damn, some of my junk was killin' back then... guess I'll put somethin new up right now.


Ready 4 the Night?


Dipped in caramel
Smooth with the saucy words
Just one look is all it took
Singled out like county crooks
Keepin up with a clean status
Makin' sure she got a clean apparatus too,
And you mad at who?
Don't matter to me
Tryna get my mac on with this free B
Her skin potato fried, see?
Crispy as she wanna be
Arguing over nothing
Annoyed by the company
of brothers
I roll with my bois no others
Real friends, no troubles,
Living life outside those bubbles
My pose is close to being a magazine cover
XXL
I excel tough
with this exoskeleton skin
no worries through the rough
Scruff McGruff, I took a bite
yall barkin, I just fight
being random during nights,
only God judges what's right,
he uses the stars to magnify his sights
completely... you insect, so respect,
or get something suddenly unexpect -ed.
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The key to poetry is let it flow/ let the wind carry me where ever I may go/signs & signals transmit thru my speech/ catch the vibe & skills thru lessons that I teach/ awaken the brain dead, the wack heads, & each of u toys that's been mislead / the right directions is u gotta chop b4 u shred/ don't eat all the crap of everything that u been fed/ bullshit of media, reporters & killers have all been bred/ ill education not from just what I read/ that's enough for now... so just input what I said.
the streets been bloodsoak red.
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Old 04-19-2009, 11:12 PM   #22
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^^^ i digs the picture

well, i can't leave a comment here, gotta key somethin'... hmmm... i'll just key something and come up with the title in the end...

a human without emotions
what type of being can walk through any notion
what example is this "person",
that is the world's perfect version of a
a lifeless creature
working eating and sleeping adventures
no smile from his dentures
no anger to fend from
no sadness to feel numb
only an emptiness
a quicksand abyss
creatin' counterfeits
of relationships slash friendships
so no one can ever get close
to a guy breathin like a ghost
you only see my image if I allow you allowance
though in reality I'm pastdue mileage
your time invested in me is like gasoline
it becomes expensive
and chokes the life's scenes
specializing is my dream
reached within repetitive things
how does a human become an android?
but their brain is still filled with the paranoid
plaqued with emotionless genes from the amyloids
a dark wolven fiend is born in the circulatory void

Android's Bloodwork
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She stopped as if to say
I can not see your eyes
When you're walking away

In her usual fashion she
Mustered the courage to
Swallow her pride and start blastin me

I stopped her sentence short
Silenced the nonsense and
Said these words as a last resort

In my usual fashion I
Only shurgged and looked away
As she started to cry

We stopped to face each other
Trying to go back to a place
In time somewhere when we were lovers

In our usual fashion we faked it
Wiped tears with phony smiles
Admitted this is wrong with one last embracement
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