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12-16-2006, 08:49 PM
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| Junior Member  Join Date: Dec 2006
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This World...this World/ Onli Exists When It Twirles/ U Wudnt Fink It Was Swirled/ People Livin In A Fantasy World/ N Dont See Tha People Bein Killed/ Bein Slayed By Peeps Who R Heavily Skilled/ With H8 Already Been Drilled/ In There Hed Even Wen They Go To Bed/ Thinkin Who's Gonna Be Tha Next Dead/ They Get Tha Word To Go Ahead/ Not 2 Dred But To Spill Liquid Dats Purple Red/ Knock..knock.. Go's Tha Door/ Tha Tennants Try 2 Ignore/ But They Kno It No Use No More/ All This Jus From Civil War/ I Cant Believe People Gettin Away Wid Dis Shit/ Y Cant They Tell Wen Sumone Tryin To Submit/ I'd Luv To Get A Knife And Split THERE Adam's Apple/ I Wudn't Even Send Him 2 A Funeral Chapple/ |
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12-16-2006, 08:51 PM
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Any Feedback Appreciated....peace!!!!!!!!!!
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12-16-2006, 09:20 PM
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| top notch lev  Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: the 915
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Learn How To Spell Man!
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12-16-2006, 09:26 PM
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I Kno How To Fukin Spell But It Makes It Quiker Doin It Like Dat AND DAT IN EVEN FEED BAK U NOB ED!
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12-16-2006, 09:34 PM
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| top notch lev Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: the 915
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Your Concepts Are On The Right Track, Is Not The Same Money, Hoes & Rims Type Shit, But I Had To Read You Ryme Like 3 Times To Understand It.
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12-16-2006, 09:39 PM
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Kk Thnx Mayne
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12-17-2006, 07:06 AM
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| Spit'Fire  Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: in the mind of a fire breathing demon in mine....
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more complexity and more multis dude.. peace....
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03-23-2010, 07:01 AM
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| burtblaze.bandcamp.com  Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Detroit, MI
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This world of consumers produces monsters and demons Rockstars and dreamin kids hit the block hard and bling is The number one motivation next to bitches and drugs Cats get quick with the slugs trying to rise inches above This world leave prior generations shakin their head But cats waivin they hand at em as long they makin their bread Cant tell em nothin about they livin dangerous lives Got they finger inside the trigger of nine's Plan on endin a life for a quick buck and cash exchange Dude's ass get layed out and the bed to a casket made So fam can pray simblings find their own path and change Directions, and learn from dude's past mistakes This world makes me sick and wanna leave it soon Things aint changin soon, I'd like to believe they do But I know when I wish in one hand while shittin in the other The hand thats gettin dirty fill up quicker than the other
__________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface Last edited by Burt Blaze; 03-23-2010 at 09:59 AM. |
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06-01-2010, 04:29 AM
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It's nice lyrics and it has meaningful thought.I appreciated it whether it is quite complicated.I also heard some nice lyrics which is as below: "This World" Another child is born Another race is won Another dream is shattered Another day has begun even this is also quite interesting lyrics.
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06-23-2010, 10:56 AM
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| GZSCRIST Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: The City of Angels
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This world is what it is a place to worship the sky a place to bury you when you die a place to harbour your hate a place of fate, destiny, karma a place of war a place of state; of love but never no peace; with the silence of the volcanoes and the picture of an earthquake with the cool breeze of a tornado and the shower of a hurricane the helping hand of tsunamis and the sharing of plagues natural disasters from mother earth thats what earth is
__________________ OlliOkbarsz jihad on Hollywood begins send flowers to the higher powers that be not in heaven but here on earth with me. |
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06-23-2010, 10:06 PM
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06-24-2010, 03:41 PM
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This world make me shake my and wonder why Is it that men are bred and taught not to cry Taught to fight, told to stay cold, frozen And it's alright to ridicule any that may show emotion Men is brought up by the knuckles and fists Gotta be the provider, so either hustle or enlist Feelin like we the spawn of hell's dangerous fury Ready to see six paul bearers instead of 12 members of jury But females goin through the same progamin scam From day one gettin trained on how to land a man So she can live lavish without ever havin to earn a dime Speakin of dimes...how you think she gonna look when she turn 49? That fade of beauty is a metaphor for a woman's essence She quick to strip the smoke screen away to issue a death sentence But it ain't her fault, or ours for never showin our feelings Its this world... and generations of rotten upbringing
__________________ Burt Blaze: Upgraded (July 2010) - Leading The Blind (June 2009) Glad To Be Back: In Harm's Way (February 2012) - In The Studio (July 2011) - In The Mix EP (February 2011) - In Your House (September 2010) "I seen this mothafucka's 9 smokin... I seen the same nigga with the 9 die with his eyes open" -Scarface Last edited by Burt Blaze; 06-24-2010 at 04:00 PM. |
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12-13-2010, 12:54 PM
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| meezyy jayy  Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: dirty south alabama baby
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01-31-2012, 05:09 AM
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Niceeeeeeee.... Visit : directoryofescorts.com |
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