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Old 08-20-2011, 11:07 AM   #1
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i told my moms i didn't love her,
well actually, i said fuck her.
i slapped that pregnant terrier
crossing that thin barrier.

im working daily,
getting my Franklin watermarks.
only to spend it on whores
who's sucking on this harder bar.

im fighting my religion
strapping up with the devil,
only to murder him,
'cause the fallen's below my level

im my own therapist.
i talk to myself,
holding conversations and shit
wait why am i sharing this?
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Old 08-28-2011, 07:21 AM   #2
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Damn, sounds like you got some issues lol.


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Old 09-13-2011, 12:56 PM   #3
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Nahh just tried to do some tyler the creator dark shit lol
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Old 09-16-2011, 01:36 AM   #5
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I personally think the whole Tyler the creator dark thing is pretty easy to do, and maybe you shouldn't be jumping on the bandwagon. Not that I'm saying I didnt like it, but hopefully you're trying out different styles until you find your own voice? Thats the main thing, I admit you need to try walking in the nice shoes of others before you walk in your own, but eventually you need to follow your own journey.

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Old 09-20-2011, 04:44 AM   #6
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Well right now I'm just goofing off with the buds, not being too serious you know ?
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