Flick

Life is a Fucking Bitch, but i continue to date her
She's my ball and chain, only one way to escape her
Thats the touch of death, he is her brother
Both raised by tragedy, who is thier mother

I like this line alot but struggling with where to go next, any ideas out there

younglyricist

not knowing if we going to make it.
so for now im just going to have to take it.
life got me down so now i fake it.
love thats the hearts fatality.
Not knowing whats real is it reality?
maybe its all just a bad dream.
Whatever it is just makes me want to scream.
I just want to fucking wake up.
so i sit at the bar and drown my emotions with beer in my cup.
but i still got keep my head up.
i need to dump this weight off my shoulder.
because lately it feels like its a big boulder.
For what i have left i try to hold em.
not even looking at my cards anymore i just fold em.
happiness has left i put on my poker face.
maybe i should just break out of this place.
because there is no longer that spark.
and everythings caving in looking gloomy and dark.
its like i dont even exist anymore im just vapor.
so i bleed it out on this pen and paper.
i didnt want to let you go its not what i insisted
confusion coming in mind geting twisted.
i feel pain inside like a virgin geting fisted.
still i feel the pain. it continues to rain.
my problems become a stain.
and then i run em out with shout.
thats all i gotta say younglyrcist signing out........

MzAmbition

Let me start off by saying I love what you got!
Off top this is what I came up with...*shoulder shrug*


She carries the baggage of her history
i suppose she can only replay what shes seen
acting it out against the best of me
i dont know how much longer i can let this be
the reason she clings to me
is starting to evolve into an unsolved mystery
But who can be blamed in this situation
my mind is telling me to walk but my heart keeps chasing
...im pacing, mind racing should i be patient?
because shes the beat of my life and rhythm of my feet
my feet keep dancing and my heart keeps thumping she gives it that beat
even though she causes so much stress
i dont think no one else could be so sweet
i got the sweetest love when she sticks by my side like a woman should be
i just feel if i leave i would have lost half of me
thats why i am bound to a ball and chain im just not ready to leave
i want that old thing back still hopeful...
what can i say i believe.

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MzAmbition

I like your add on too! NICE!

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