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Flick · 09-17-2011, 07:16 PM

Beautiful America and all of it's horror/if you want support then go be a solider/battle on the front line,land mines, take minds, erase lines/ make new ones/ fake kind, make frenemys/they already live in our country,plotting to erase our border/taking advantage of our social disorder/our rules, but no order/say what we want, do as were told/ to do otherwise, would be exceptionly bold/cold hearts and hearts of gold/in this country, you will feel them both/festering in out thoughts, the challenges we have faced/new ones will come, and none will be erased/caress your failure, and your failure to blame/you, yourself and your failure, will become one and the same/we take our lives, we take others/we bring new life, then we kill for another/a sin and a prayer, in the same breath/your life over another,but both end in death/you cannot escape, whats written in stone/life ends in death, your choices are ashes or bone

Urban Eskimo · 09-21-2011, 03:49 PM

This was an interesting read man, I thought it was well written...cool piece.

KOS

Flick · 09-21-2011, 04:00 PM

Thank you man it was you, Rudy and Burt that kept me going i feel like takin yalls advice has done wonders for my writing. I look back on my old stuff and realize the simplicity of what i was droppin. Its like a constant challenge to push that creative limit. I write every day when my brain aint on something else im coming up with verses. So thanks for the support, sites not as active as i would like but im havin fun, so keep up the good work bro

Convalesce · 12-17-2011, 12:07 AM

Damn that is spilling with angst. that was an awesome read and nice flow

cursive k · 04-25-2012, 10:30 PM

liked it Flick... liked each and every verse of yours myan...
keep doin it... its pleasure to have eyes upon your ill writing ... \m/

Flick · 04-27-2012, 04:35 PM

Appreciate that man

09-17-2011, 07:16 PM	#1
Flick Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Fort Myers, FL Posts: 310	RAnDom THOughts .1 Beautiful America and all of it's horror/if you want support then go be a solider/battle on the front line,land mines, take minds, erase lines/ make new ones/ fake kind, make frenemys/they already live in our country,plotting to erase our border/taking advantage of our social disorder/our rules, but no order/say what we want, do as were told/ to do otherwise, would be exceptionly bold/cold hearts and hearts of gold/in this country, you will feel them both/festering in out thoughts, the challenges we have faced/new ones will come, and none will be erased/caress your failure, and your failure to blame/you, yourself and your failure, will become one and the same/we take our lives, we take others/we bring new life, then we kill for another/a sin and a prayer, in the same breath/your life over another,but both end in death/you cannot escape, whats written in stone/life ends in death, your choices are ashes or bone Last edited by Flick; 09-17-2011 at 07:41 PM.

09-21-2011, 03:49 PM	#2
Urban Eskimo formerly known as DA BIGGEST Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Igloo Projects Posts: 9,490	This was an interesting read man, I thought it was well written...cool piece. KOS __________________ Real Eyes Realize Real Lies

04-27-2012, 04:35 PM	#6
Flick Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Fort Myers, FL Posts: 310	Appreciate that man __________________ .

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09-21-2011, 04:00 PM	#3
Flick Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Fort Myers, FL Posts: 310	Thank you man it was you, Rudy and Burt that kept me going i feel like takin yalls advice has done wonders for my writing. I look back on my old stuff and realize the simplicity of what i was droppin. Its like a constant challenge to push that creative limit. I write every day when my brain aint on something else im coming up with verses. So thanks for the support, sites not as active as i would like but im havin fun, so keep up the good work bro

12-17-2011, 12:07 AM	#4
Convalesce Newb Member Join Date: Dec 2011 Posts: 3	Damn that is spilling with angst. that was an awesome read and nice flow

04-25-2012, 10:30 PM	#5
cursive k Newb Member Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 3	liked it Flick... liked each and every verse of yours myan... keep doin it... its pleasure to have eyes upon your ill writing ... \m/