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Old 09-27-2011, 05:54 AM   #1
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i remember when hip hop did'nt follow trends......she created them



individuality was a prerequisite to gettin' in tha game

when SKILL and STYLE were decidin factors on whether or not you achieved fame



niggaz spittin' these days have no substance



one modeled after tha next .....like clones

a long drawn out recordin of tha same bullshit

it'd be best if tha game was left alone

LAME NIGGAZ IS KILLIN IT!!!!!

and i don't mean in a good sense

tha industry has been raped by so many no talent suspects wit NO ONE steppin up to her defense

her fate left in suspense

is she gonna die?

does anyone know why?



well.....I DO

she got run thru by scrub niggaz like YOU

by YOU....i mean

niggaz who rhyme wit no knowledge of how to compose a bar

then get heard by one muh fucka wit deaf ears that has clout and banks on makin you a star

got one track wit a nice beat, make up a new dance

talk about ur so called swag and kids like it so record execs give you a chance

....... and YOU SCORE

treat tha game like a whore

no wonder she wont let any of US in

her entry is sore

by US......i mean

real niggaz who spit over beats that sound like real music

who appreciate how instruments sound and then use it

who spit wit meanin cuz WE LOVE HIP HOP we don't abuse it

and if someone offers us a deal to become a clone......WE REFUSE IT

i remember when hip hop didnt follow trends she created them



when niggaz didnt flow wit skill

they got put out tha game cuz its KILL or be KILLED

right now she's on life support

her heartbeat is slow

she's ready to let go

tired of these lame niggaz treatin' her like a ho.................

strugglin', needin' some skill talent and love to survive

can we get some REAL NIGGAZ to step to tha plate and keep hip hop alive??????
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Old 09-27-2011, 12:47 PM   #2
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individuality was a prerequisite to gettin' in tha game
when SKILL and STYLE were decidin factors on whether or not you achieved fame

real niggaz who spit over beats that sound like real music
who appreciate how instruments sound and then use it
who spit wit meanin cuz WE LOVE HIP HOP we don't abuse it

^^Wordness

Now this was a more refreshing read than those penitentiary pieces, keep droppin girlio.


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Old 09-27-2011, 01:47 PM   #3
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thanks for reading!
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Old 09-27-2011, 05:32 PM   #4
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That was some slick shit girl!


real niggaz who spit over beats that sound like real music

who appreciate how instruments sound and then use it

who spit wit meanin cuz WE LOVE HIP HOP we don't abuse it

and if someone offers us a deal to become a clone......WE REFUSE IT
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Old 09-29-2011, 02:45 PM   #5
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Thanx Flick.....'ppreciate the read!
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Old 10-03-2011, 05:22 PM   #6
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dope
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Old 10-16-2011, 11:53 AM   #7
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You're new to this, aren't you?

I liked your message, but that's it. Keep writing.
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Cartiledge rippin' while the emotional harm starts its engine
Nothing matters as I shatter all the parts within it
Now the beauty I've wrecked becomes more than far from finished - Me.
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Old 12-04-2011, 03:46 AM   #8
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First one I liked but I'm new well done
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