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| Newb Member Join Date: Jan 2011
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(Same thing, looking for criticism) INSTA-BEAT (Click Me) http://www.soundclick.com/player/sin...&q=hi&newref=1 I had the world in my palms dropped the girl from my arms 0:22 she once cried out out turn but I, let her move on I'm no longer concerned cuz, concern isn't strong now I watch as she burns, burns down till she's gone nothing really changes but my perception of change and I could turn the pages but the words stay the same call me a derelict piece of shit unaware of bliss who experienced happiness once but then I woke from it I'm being facetious at times misogynistic my demon reaches farther then my hardship elicits inner me is lethargic and speechless my heart is in pieces I'm guarded beneath it you've already seen it my carcass is eaten' every dead feeling that you ever had is caught in my teeth in between them their soft and unsweetened, thoughtless and beaten and in the middle of the feast is my personal demons Yuh. |
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| Pro Join Date: Aug 2010
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this was sick loved the beat might drop to it later on. good job
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| Newb Member Join Date: Jan 2011
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Thanks man, I'll probably be droppin on here more often. Yeah Anno Domini has alot of great/gritty beats. Late.
__________________ Don't come close to me cousin I carry heavy fists Or be the cause for consumption when my machete drips |
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