Sumthin light i wrote let me know what ya think

[FatL$]

you felt like this could never be , thought me and you would never be but things changed was it me ? possibly cus i had you right next to me , my days were always wonderful wen you was next to me in the crib layin down watchin mtv , started chillin in the streets and my bad habits caught up to me i still chose this dark side behind you fucked up bad , smoked this weed to clear my mentality and relief this stress , yeah damn i messed up.... yeah your my right hand my bestfriend my everything you showed me wat a true girlfriend really is and wah true love can really be, i aint the type to like or love but you brang dat outta me , your an angel not any angel a precious angel , keep it real is wah i said from the gecko , my downfall happened and everything felll apart , gotta let you go you said , i promise if i lie its all innocent shit meaning not a big problem case dont worry bout me cheatin and shit , damn life is full of ups and downs but dats the beauty of it , in my mind i want you to be my girl again forever buh in true life you just a friend forever , look at all the shit weve been thru , we always said aint nuthin gonna get inbetween us two , always forgive each otha no matter wah we went thru , only thing we had to stay together was trust and love , but the trust faded away you thought about wah you wanted to do so you want your way , tellin me your kinda feelin sum1 else but right now you wanna see wah goes on between ya two before he makes a move , i hope i was the one buh if i wasnt then i hope he is , you moving on day by day while im still stuck reminisce bout the good times and the late chats we use to have , wata dragg i gotta put up wit the person i love already feelin sum otha dude but fuck it even a blind person can see how much i love you

[Urban Eskimo]

Sounds like you fucked up, you gotta make things right homey...any chance at that or what?


KOS

[TsafirKamel]

this is good