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The flow is a little choppy when its read, but it's for a track im laying down tonight. Once you catch it though... Anyway just looking for a little feedback. Im a hit up a couple of the threads now but if you drop me a link I will definitely get back to yours. Thanks and Peace. Inner... in a.. In a second my inner-senses will intersect with my inner-section causing a introspectrum of genuflection in reference to inspection of deserts filled with measley peasents who take disease for granted appease the planet by cleaning the greased an famished - releaving families...... Re-instate earth into it's previous slate in this meaningless state of seemingless fate releasing the hate obliterate society, people hide an scream from the devils in the shadows constantly eye'n me.. stride through greed and strive for needs and find yourself behind the gleam - of opinions an questions donations and suggetions picturing nations bulding churches, in need of confession eager to lessen' lessons of meager sections testin' beliefs found to be restless an weak, in weeks i'll step to the meek setting them free - Blessing the organization whom conformed the nation through deformed sedation America... the land of dreams, money please breathe hunny b/c a gasp of fresh in this land cant be afforded with money... ...in a.. In a second my inner-senses will intersect with my inner-section causing a introspectrum of genuflection in reference... or so i thought..but my easiest plot was turned back by a devious corpse thought to be dead but all wasn't lost.. "no matter how much you write or think these thought's..you'll never be heard" i suddenly paused..but these words are true - my generation has been humbled, the world is blue so.. in a second i hope i wake up.. why.. to live a day in my life or think a thought in my head... is like livin' a lifetime.. in your eyes. |
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