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Old 12-13-2011, 03:13 PM   #1
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The flow is a little choppy when its read, but it's for a track im laying down tonight. Once you catch it though... Anyway just looking for a little feedback. Im a hit up a couple of the threads now but if you drop me a link I will definitely get back to yours. Thanks and Peace.

Inner...

in a..
In a second my
inner-senses will
intersect with my
inner-section causing
a introspectrum of
genuflection in reference
to inspection of deserts
filled with measley peasents
who take disease for granted
appease the planet by cleaning
the greased an famished -
releaving families......
Re-instate earth into it's
previous slate in this meaningless state
of seemingless fate releasing the hate
obliterate society, people hide an scream
from the devils in the shadows constantly eye'n me..
stride through greed and strive for needs
and find yourself behind the gleam - of
opinions an questions donations and suggetions
picturing nations bulding churches, in need of confession
eager to lessen' lessons of meager sections testin'
beliefs found to be restless an weak, in weeks
i'll step to the meek setting them free - Blessing the organization
whom conformed the nation through deformed sedation
America...
the land of dreams, money please breathe hunny
b/c a gasp of fresh in this land cant be afforded with money...

...in a..
In a second my
inner-senses will
intersect with my
inner-section causing
a introspectrum of
genuflection in reference...

or so i thought..but my easiest plot
was turned back by a devious corpse
thought to be dead but all wasn't lost..
"no matter how much you write or
think these thought's..you'll never be
heard" i suddenly paused..but these
words are true - my generation has
been humbled, the world is blue

so..
in a second
i hope i wake up..
why..
to live a day in my life
or think a thought in my head...
is like livin' a lifetime..
in your eyes.
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